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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
Loved it and just loved Geets character - think she will soon turn Maan from the playboy to the madly-in-love-Maan...
 
Got the picture of Grey's Anatomy in my head when i first read it, dont whether u were inspired by it Smile

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
That was brilliant! Loved it! Can't wait to read more of translucence

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
On Page 5 already...


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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Hey Sooks ,Congrats!! Very interesting start. Geet's comments cracked me up!LOL The girl molesting Maan??Gosh!!ROFL

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
congrats new FF DancingParty
 
brilliant startClapStar
me already in love with ur geet
she so sweet to cover for friend
wow she popular doc
love how she gave him insulting  dose
maan sounds playboy
pls do cont soon

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by manashi

me late...nahiiiDead

 

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"There are two kinds of writer: those that make you think, and those that make you wonder."

                                                                               - Brian AldissSmile


Hats off to you Sooks...ClapClap

 

I have already fallen for your Geet...Embarrassed

 

Smart : The way she handled the internEmbarrassed

 

Witty: The way she retorted to that wannabe modelLOL

 

Intelligent: She is a doc, thats givenCool

 

Helpful: She is filling in  for her friend even when she is hell tiredClap

 

Popular : The way the nurse interacted with herBig smile

 

Just one update Sooks and you have established her character...

 

Now coming to Devil Singh Khurana : Generally characters like this have golden hearts...but we never know with you Sooks...LOL

 

Why do I have a feeling that he gets drunk and ill purposefully just to get into the hospital to stay close to Geet...and this whole making out was the good old "go green" technique?CoolEvil Smile

 

Congratulations Sooks on your new story...and if morning shows the day...this is gonna be fun...Approve

 

Thanx for the pm love...Hug

 



That was Fantabulouse Manashiii

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
This is a very different story Clap
Where the male protagonist in not in all his glory LOL

Glad that his armour has a chink
And the heroine has more than adequate plunk

I like it when the girl in the story, is all educated, intelligent and witty
Seriously following her career and not just plain pretty Wink

So bring on the updates, oh dear Sookie Smile
Let us see what interesting things will come out of your kitty

Last but not the least, do not forget to pm me your updates
As i am eagerly waiting for what lies ahead in maan's fate
Smile


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