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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
should i say they are adorable...or can that creep out emilyD'oh

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
okay i am really having this creepy feeling the meds are really messing with your brains!! OH EMM GEE first the chapter started out with a similar interaction like Maaneet although I knew it would be too early to conclude anything... i mean its Sookie what more to be said... anyways. back to the "interlude" as you wanna call it. it started out with the same situ where Maan comes home to meet Geet to spend time. Although Satya and Emily are on a much different platform than Maaneet ( I say this due to many reasons. One being Satya and Emily share a somewhat simple relationship as compared to Maan n Geet actually scratch that not necessarily simple but a more understanding one (eh i cant say that either but u get the point??)) Ah wait i got it Satya Emily's relation is more of open they say what they want to and let the other person know of each other's feelings while Maan hmm let's not get there... 
So ya I was saying the coming was contrasted with opposing situ where in fact Emily had been up and all set to go when Satya asked to go out. I must say I was quite amused with the dialogue between them. They never fail to surprise me with their frankness (although every charac in your story do the same) The comebacks Emily came up with were to the point... but seriously Satya has been around Emily for so long and taking Maan's advise... Silly Goose! come on its your girlfriend we are talking about and like Emily put it she is not among the thousand others but she is one out of the thousand others so he needs to know... 
On the whole succinct and to the point... 

Bhoh Sooki... idam updatam icchAmyaham hi asti asreman 
(Greetings (as in reverence) Sooki... I Like this update because it is perfect!)

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Beautiful one...loved it...

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
awesome upd...
so d ady iz damini

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Your writing is very much impressive and I love this story. I have started my own fan-fic "Remember Me". Plzzz do read it and let me know how is it. Continue soon. The link of my fanfic is
 
 
Read it guys and let me know how is it

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Sookie, are you sure that you wrote this? Cause it made
me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Normally your updates don't make me feel warm and fuzzy. lol But seriously, I loved the update. Haha Maan's plan failed, but you gotta love him. Thans for the update, Sookie!

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