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Posted: 18 August 2011 at 10:24pm | IP Logged

A Story Of A Lifetime...In A Heartbeat-Arsh(os)

 

 

 It all begins when I recovered from my disease n came to achieve Riddhima.Riddhima was married with siddhant modi and though she love me she was the one who made me realise that I love only u n u too love me I was n iam still in love with you I was the happiest person on the earth when you finally became "Shilpa Armaan Malik" but who knows what destiny has decided for us .

 

 

 

 

 A man sitting infront of the OT moving in the corridor of the hospital outa tension n rememberssomething

 

 

 

 

 Flashback

 

 

 1year Ago

 

 

 At ARSH Mansion


 Sh(calling)-armaan ''armaan oh ho armaan jaldi karo na hamein sanjeevani jaane ke liye der ho rahi hai

 Ar(coming wd wide smile on his face n smthing in his mind)-waise ye line toh meri honi chahiye

 Sh(makin face)-ha ha very funny main tumhaari tarah lazy nai hoon

 Ar( holds her hand n twists it)- accha toh ye baat hai

 Sh(in pain)-armaan chodo na mujhe dard ho raha hai chodo armaan oouch

 

 "Hearin oouch from shilpa armaan leaves shilpa's hand n comes near her"

 

 Ar-zyaada dard toh nai hua na?iam sorry shona lo kaan pakadta hoon "making puppy face" n wraps her in his arm

 Sh(naughtily)-lo khud hi dard dete ho aur khud hi phir sorry bolte ho agar tum aise ho toh tumhaara aur mera baby kaisa hoga aur kehte ho mujhe baby chahiye aur kaise sambhaloongi main oss shaitaanko

 Ar(naughtily)-dekho ab bacchon ki kisse jaldi ho rahi hai

 

 "realizing what she said n bits her lower lip n blushes"

 

 Ar-oyye hoyye ye sharam toh hayye meri jaan hi le legi

 Sh(putting her finger on his lips)-phirse dobara aisi baat mat kehna kyunki tumhaari jaan tumhaari nai meri hai samjhe

 Ar-nods in yes mrs.malik

 

 "Armaan admires her love,affection,n care towards him"

 

 Sh-waise ab sanjeevani chale der ho rahi hai mr.malik

 Ar-bas aap ekbaar mujhse i love you kehdo toh hum sanjeevani chalenge mrs.malik

 Sh(smiling)-I Love You Armaan ab khush chalo ab der ho rahi hai

 Ar-aise nai thikse kaho

 Sh(giving him a look)-armaan tumbhi kabhi kabhi na ok baba "Mere Pati,Mere Honewaale Bacche Ke Baap,Mere Massi Ke Damaad I Love You" ab toh chale tum bhi na armaan paagal ho she wents with a blush on her face which can't be hided even if she wanted to n runs out of the house

 

 

 At Sanjeevani

 

 

 "after the morning duty shilpa came to armaan in his cabin cos its lunch time"

 

 

 Sh-armaan chalo na its lunch time now

 Ar-haan aa raha hoon

 

 

 "Both sitting in the cafeteria having their lunch lookin in each others eyes feeding d bits of food to each other careless of the whole world around until the gang came n interrupted them"

 

 Mu-hayye main mar jaawaan kya baat hai armaan shilpa ab toh ekdusre ke bina khaana khaana toh chodo paani bhi piya nai jaata hoga hai na

 Sh(blushing)-muski tu bhi na aisi koi baat nai hai

 

 Mu-toh phir kaisi baat hai'''''interrupted by atul

 At-oyye! woh husband wife hain kuch bhi karein tujhe isse kya

 Mu-oyye! atull ke bacche tujhse kisne pucha tu apna kaam kar this begans the fight of atul n muskaan n our love birds resumed their uncompleted job they sat down n started feeding each other

 

 

 Next day at ARSH mansion

 

 Sh-armaan ''''''''''armaan chalo jaldi karo tumhe der ho rahi hai

 Ar-behaving like a kid kya shona hamaari shaadi ko ek mahina bhi nai hua aur tum mujhe door bhej rahi ho main nai jaonga is medical camp par

 Sh-aawww my baby don't wanna go come here n armaan hugs her like a baby dat dn wanna go 2 school placing his head on her shoulder huggin shona tightly

 Ar(in childish tone)-no I dn wanna go plz let me stay with u

 Sh(caressing his hair)-par kya karein armaan tumhe jaana toh hoga hi na aakhir ye management ka faisla hai

 Ar(wd fake anger)-ye management ki toh main tum bhi chalo na saath mein shona

 Sh-nai aa sakti iss camp par sirf senior doctors hi allowed hai interns nai waise riddhima hogi na tumhaare saath toh phir

 Ar-arre! Sid nai chahta ki woh iss camp par jaaye isiliye who nai aa rahi hai dekho eoh ek patiwrata aur tum apne pati ki ek baat nai maanti

 Ar(sticks on his decision)-main nai jaonga

 Sh-aise bache ki tarah jidd mat karo aur jao pushing him out of the door

 Ar(coming near shilpa)-tum hi toh socho shona ki 7 din main kaise tumhe bina dekhe,bina tumhaari baatein sune rahoonga oss phoolgaon mein wahaan toh network bhi nai aata kya tumhe meri yaad nai aayegi

 Sh-nai bilkul bhi nai

 Ar(makin face)-hw mean but I'll miss u shona holds her hand n pulls her towards him n wraps her in his arm

 Sh(wd some pain in her voice)-mujhe pata nai ye 7din main tumhaare bina kaise rahoongi kyunki ab toh aadat ho chuki hai tumhaari aur tumhaari shaitaaniyon ki

 Ar(changing the mood)-waise tumse itne dino ke liye door jaa raha do chaar kiss toh bante hi hai

 

 

 "shilpa releases herself from his arms try to run out of blushin but armaan holds her hand"

 

 

 Ar-zindagi bhar ke liye tumhaara haath pakda hai itni aasaanise nai chodnewaaala waise mere kiss ka kya hua

 

 

 "shilpa comes near him n gives him a sweet shonalicious kiss on his cheeks"

 

 

 Ar-oyye hoyye now on lips pointing finger on lips

 

 

 "shilpa comes near him a voice comes which got unnoticed by them"

 

 

 Voice-ahem ahem''''ahem ahem'''..armaan bhaiya girlfriend ye kya ho raha hai

 

 

 "suddenly they sepertaes themselves from eachother n shilpa became red like the (original) saucewaala lal"

 

 

 Ar-gappu tum yahaan ?kab aayein?

 Ar(mann hi mann mein)-isse bhi abhi aana tha

 Ga-haan main yahaan abhi aaya hoon jab aap oyye hoyye kar rahe the

 

 

 "Armaan n shilpa lookin at eachother n outa embarrassment became red as if they commited a crime a caught red handed"

 

 

 Sh(changing the topic in hesitating voice )-aaa''''.wooo'..haan gappu'''. ko yahaan'. osse maine bulaaya hai panchganise tum nai ho toh gappu mere saath hi rahega tum yahin ruko armaan main tumhaara bag laati hoon n she runs to save herself frm the questions of gappu which can be only handled by armaan

 Ar-teri timing ka bhi koi jawaab nai gappu thori der baad nai aa sakta tha

 Ga-kyun aapko aisa kya kaam tha waise aapne bataaya nai ki aap meri girlfriend ke saath kya kar rahe the

 Ar-oyye woh meri wife hai samjhe tujhe osse kya

 Ga-who aapki wife baad mein hai pehle meri girlfriend hai samjhe

 Ar-thik hai mere baap main samajh gaya haan dekh meri absence mein meri wife ka khayaal rakhna ok aur haan osse agar impress karne ki koshish ki toh dekh lena

 Ga-aap fikar mat karo bhaiya main apni girlfriend ka acchese khayaal rakhoonga aur impress karneki baat chodo who toh aapse pehle hi impress ho chuki hai (looking at armaan from bottom to top) pata nai aisa kya dekh liya aap mein jo mujh mein nai dikha

 

 

 "Armaan smiles at gappu's innocent but sweet talks shilpa comes with a bag in her hand"

 

 

 Ar(whispers in gappu's ear)- gappu andar jao mujhe shilpase kuch baat karni hai

 Ga(wd a same tone)-nai jo baat karni hai mere saamne kijiye

 Ar-gapppu dekh main tujhse aakhri baar keh raha hoon

 

 

 "shilpa understanding everything but couldn't help it she was having fun looking at the helpless armaan finally shilpa quotes"

 

 

 Sh-gappu tum fresh ho jao main tumhaare liye khaana lagaati hoon

 Ga-nods in yes like a obedient boy

 Ar(mouth open)-wah kya zamaana aa gaya hai maine kaha toh nai gaya aur tumne kaha toh chala gaya holds shilpa's hand n brings her near him don't u think smthing remained between us

 Sh(hiting armaan softly on his chest)- mere saamne bade sher ban rahe ho aur gappuse darr rahe the

 Ar(wd a smile n attitude)-kaun main huahhh his naughty smile armaan malik darega who bhi gappuse bhul jao shilpa

 Sh-dekho gappu aa gaya

 

 

 "Armaan immediately leaves shilpa n looks around n shilpa laughs breakfreely at scared armaan"

 

 

 Ar(wd fake anger brings her close to him)-toh ye baat hai apne pati ko ullu banaati ho

 Sh(still laughing)-I din knew ullu itne smart aur handsome hote hai suddenly gappu comes there armaan gappu

 Ar-ab iss baar nai chodunga gappu ko aane do ya tumhaari massi ko nai chodunga tumhe suddenly armaan turns wd shilpa in her arms n saw gappu standing there armaan leaves shilpa as if he had a 440 volts of current

 Ga-toh armaan bhaiya kya kaha aapne

 Ar(wd fear)-aaa maine''.maine ha maine toh kuch bhhi nai kaha pucho shilpase

 Ga-(looking at shilpa)-toh girlfriend armaan bhaiyane kuch bhi nai kaha

 Sh-nai toh kuch bhi nai kaha gappu tum andar jao main abhi aati hoon

 

 

 "and he wents inside"

 

 

 "shilpa again starts laughing at armaan's condition but our aashiq is lost in her beauty"

 

 

 Ar(mann hi mannmein)-bas tumhaare chehre par hassi ho yahi toh main chahta hoon ab pata nai tumhaara chehra bina dekhe,tumhaari hassi bina sune main kaise rahoonga 7 din

 Sh-armaan "snaps her finger"  kahaan kho gaye ab chalo jao armaan

 Ar-nai main aise nai jaonga

 Sh(pullin his leg)-toh phir kaise ya phir bulao gappuko

 Ar(scared)-nai osse mat bulao bas ab ja raha hoon kamse kam I Love You toh kehdo ossike sahaare 7din gujaar loonga

 Sh(smiles to c his childishness)- "Mere Pati,Mere Honewaale Bacche Ke Baap,Mere Massi Ke Damaad I Love You"

 Ar-I Love You 2 shona

 

 

 "hugs eachother n armaan leaves shilpa closes the door n smiles at his childishness actually his childishness is the proof of his love towards shilpa shilpa went towards gappu wd smile on her face"

 

 

 In Evening ARSH Mansion

 "shilpa is in the kitchen preparing dinner for gappu n herself suddenly the phone rangs shilpa asks gappu to c who it is gappu follows the order n receives the call"


 Ga-hello who it is?

 Ar(smile changes into anger)-gappu ke bacche tu wahaan kya kar raha hai ja shilpa ko phone de mujhe osse baat karni

 Ga-no I'll not y u need to talk to her

 Ar-she is my wife who r u 2 ask me such question?

 Ga-iam her boyfriend

 Ar-gappu don't irritate me plz give her phone

 Sh(from the kitchen)-gappu whose phone it is?n comes there

 Ga(wd fear)-its armaan bhaiya sorry girlfriend I din told you

 Sh(wd smile on her face)-its ok gappu go have ur dinner I'll come in 5min.n join u ok

 Ga-ok girlfriend

 

 

 "shilpa takes the receiver n place it near her ears"

 

 

 Ar(smiling)-this is armaan malik from the city of flowers

 Sh(she too smiling)-this is mrs.armaan malik from the film city ur voice doesn't seem to me dat sporty like always

 Ar(in low tone)-u r not with me na dats y?

 Sh-aaawww my baby missing me

 Ar-ya m missing u badly shona

 Sh-don't worry 7days will pass like jst a 7hours

 Ar-it seems to me like 7yrs.waise I called u frm pco here no mob.network is available so will call u after 3days ok as we r going deep inside the village for three days

 Sh-ok my baby

 Ar-ok give me my dose of medicine

 "shilpa blushes armaan u became very naughty dese days huh"

 Ar-man is known by the company he keeps by living in ur company I became very naughty u c

 Sh(fuming wd anger)-is it so dat means iam a bad company

 Ar-I din mean dat forget na shona give me wat I want n I want my dose of medicine

 

 

 "shilpa smiles to c his demands shilpa kisses the phone"

 

 

 Ar-oyye hoyye now d days will definitely go faster now my last dose

 Sh-armaan gappu aa jaayega

 Ar-so wat u r my wife n m ur husband I hv all the rights on u dn u think so

 Sh-yes my pati parmeshwar u have all the rights on me happy

 Ar-nw my last dose

 Sh-ok baba "Mere Pati,Mere Honewaale Bacche Ke Baap,Mere Massi Ke Damaad I Love You"

 Ar(smiles)-I Love You 2 n cuts the phone

 

 

 "In the night shilpa lying on the bed unable to sleep blushing remembering wat armaan said to her takin pillow n hiding her all expressions so dat gappu shouldn c it n questions to her"


 2nd day

 

 

 3rd day

 

 

 4th day in sanjeevani

 

 

 "shilpa goes to sanjeevani with gappu at 9:00am it was like routine for her now in js 4days without armaan n she use to do her duty till 9:00pm dat day she was looking restless so dr.kirti has told her to leave as soon as possible cos she was looking 2 weak shilpa followed dr.kirti's advise n went to gappu so dat she can leave to her house"

 

 

 Ga(in concern)-girlfriend r u alright ur lookin very weak n restless too ?

 Sh(taking a deep breath)-no gappu it js I hvn done my lunch in the lunch time dats it n dr.kirti has ordered me dat I should go to my house so cm on no more questions we'll leave now

 Ga-ok girlfriend

 

 

 At ARSH Mansion

 "shilpa n gappu reaches the house but shilpa doesn seems to be fyn gappu asks her continously but she only says dat she is alright she is facing breathing problem from many days but 3days before it has been increasing n paining her a lot"

 

 

 Sh(still facing prob.to breath)-toh''''.gappu '..wat '.wat u'll have

 Ga-girlfriend let it be u din seem alright to me I'll call armaan bhaiya he'll c wat happen to you

 Sh(takin deep breath)-no no gappu'''takin breath'''.don't call him'takin breath '''he'll worry for me'''''.

 Ga-ok but we'll go to hospital na

 Sh(takin deep breath again)-m fyn gappu''..takin breath'''''tel me wat u'll have''..takin breath''..

 Ga-anything dat u make

 Sh(again takin deep breath)-ok I'll make something for you''takin breath'''.she wents in the kitchen

 

 

 "gappu is sittin in the hall watching tv suddenly the sound of falling utensils came n gappu runs in the kitchen n saw shilpa lying on the floor takin breath faster dan normal n uttering armaan''''..armaan gappu utters loudly girlfriend he calls dr.kirti n wd d help of dr.kirti gappu moves shilpa to the sanjeevani after observing shilpa's condition she is kept on the breathing ventilator they came to conclusion dat shilpa has severe heart problem"

 

 

 Ga(crying)-dr.kirti will my girlfriend be alright wat happened to her plz tell me

 Dr.kirti(consoling him)-yes gappu ur girlfriend will be alright like ever don't u worry we r here now to take care of her stop crying

 Ga(wiping his tears)-can I meet her

 Dr.kirti-not now when she'll wake up den u can surely meet her ok nw cm wd me

 

 

 Next day in the mng 9:00 am

 

 

 "shilpa awakes n only one word in her mouth armaan'''.armaan gappu is sitting on the chair n happy to c her girlfriend coming in her senses"

 

 

 Sh(removes the oxygen mask of the ventilator from her face)-gappu armaan kahaan hai

 Ga-girlfriend bhool gayi armaan bhaiya do din baad aanewaale hai

 Sh-haan bhoolhi gayi thi

 

 

 "Dr.kirti n shubhaankar enters the room n asks gappu to go outside for a while n gappu leaves from the room"

 

 

 Sh-trying to get up from the bed

 Dr.kirti-don't even think of getting up from the bed dr.shilpa take rest for the day

 Sh(in low voice)-dr.kirti wat had happened to me last night

 Dr.Shub-nothing dr.shilpa just a breathing problem

 Sh-no dr.shubhaankar don't lie to me iam also a doctor I know the difference between jst a breathing prob. N severe problem so plz tell me the truth wat had happened to me

 Dr.kirti(in concern)-we don't know much bout this but we have sended ur reports to best heart surgeon of india rahul garewal who is currently working in sanjeevani pune I had a talk wd him 2hrs.ago he'll come around 5pm in the evening

 Dr.shub-ok now dr.shilpa don't worry u'll be fyn now take rest n sleep we'll come wd dr.rahul in the evening ok n they leaves the room

 

 

 In the evening

 

 

 "Rahul comes all the way from sanjeevani pune for the treatment of shilpa rahul,shubhaankar,n kirti enters the icu room where shilpa is admitted"

 

 

 Ra-so dr.shilpa hw r u feeling nw?

 Sh(lying on the bed)-nw iam feeling better dan last night

 

 

 "rahul takes out his stethoscope n checks shilpa's heartbeat n her breathing rate"

 

 

 Ra(tries to hide expression)-ok!everything is normal now I'll come tomorrow in the mng too ok

 

 

 "dr.kirti,shubhaankar leaves n rahul follows dem suddenly shilpa stops rahul"

 

 

 Sh(tears in her eyes)-mujhe kya hua hai dr.rahul

 Ra-I said na nothing everything is fyn we are sending ur reports for testing in new york

 Sh-no tell me the truth I don't knw wat prob.u n armaan had in the past n I don't wanna knw but tell me how much time I had how many days I'll survive don't lie to me dr.rahul cos of ur prob.wd armaan

 Ra(with heavy heart)-taking deep breath''.not more than a month

 

 

 "slowly tears escape from her eyes she holds the bed by her hand as she was not able to bear the pain"

 

 

 Sh(wiping her tears)-promise me dr.rahul u'll not tell anyone especially armaan bout this promise me

 Ra-I promise u dr.shilpa n he 2 leaves but gappu hears all the conversation of shilpa n rahul n cries his heartout

 Ga(sobbing)-girlfriend''''girlfriend'''.woh''''.woh uncle ne kya kaha''''''still crying

 Sh(makes gappu seat near her)-agar mere boyfriend ne hi himmat chod di toh mera kya hoga so stop crying nothing will happen to me

 

 

 "gappu hugs her tightly as if he'll never let shilpa to go anywhere"

 

 

 Sh-nw go dr.kirti will be waiting for

 Ga-let me stay here wd u na

 Sh-no gappu u can't plz listen to me

 Ga(nods in yes)-ok girlfriend n shilpa kisses gappu on his cheeks n gappu wents wd dr.kirti

 

 

 Next day in the mng

 

 

 "Rahul comes to examine shilpa's condition which was not so good"

 

 

 Sh-mujhe yahaanse discharge kabtak mil jaayega

 Ra-tumhaari new yorkse do din baad report aa jaayegi ooske baad

 Sh(to herself mentally)-lekin armaan toh kal hi aa raha hai

 Sh-no dr.rahul I need to go today only armaan is coming from his camp

 Ra-how is this possible agar phirse tumhaari tabiyat kharaab hui toh

 Sh-no I'll handle everything but let me go today

 Ra-ok but one day armaan will came to knw bout ur condition den wat u gonna do

 

 

 "shilpa din speak anything as she had no answer to rahul's question"

 

 

 In the evening at ARSH mansion

 "shilpa comes to her house with gappu thinking of armaan hw he'll live without me crying bitterly sitting near the window looking at the moon"

 

 

 Next day in the mng 9:00am

 

 

 "Armaan came from his medical camp wd a smile on his face to see shilpa after 7big days he enters the house n directly hugs shilpa tightly"

 

 

 Ar-oh my shona I missed u so much

 Sh(takin deep breath n hiding her pain)-I misss u too my baby

 Ar-waise why u were not receiving phone n ur mob.was switched off from many days how much I missed ur voice

 Sh-aa''.wooo'..aaa

 Ga-phone is dead from 5days n girlfriend has lost her mobile dats y

 Ar-ok I'll buy new one for you n kisses shilpa's forehead

 Ga-not fair armaan bhaiya u haven't taken my permission to kiss my girlfriend

 Ar(wd a same tone)-hey gappu she is my wife I don't need ur permission til my last breath she is mine

 

 

 "shilpa puts her hand on his lips"

 

 

 Sh(crying)-how many times I have to tell you don't talk such things

 Ar(holding his ears)-sorry shona forgive ur bad hubby this tym wiping her tears

 Sh-ok but for the last tym m forgiving you (strechig last tym)

 Ar-last tym y?

 Ga(changes the topic)-armaan bhaiya go n take bath u n ur clothes are smelling too much

 Ar(widening his eyebrows)-is it so come here u naughty n armaan runs after gappu to catch him

 

 

 "shilpa sits on the chair"

 

 

 Sh(mentally n tears in her eyes)-don't love me so much dat u'll never forget me we were meant to be but destiny has decided smthing different for us why god why he love me so much why?

 

 

 "the day passed n armaan had too many questions in mind regarding shilpa cos she never use too keep quite den wat happened in his absence dat changes her behaviour armaan asked her but she din give him a digestive reply"

 

 

 Next day in the mng

 

 

 "now gappu was going to panchgani orphanage"

 

 

 Ga-armaan bhaiya meri girlfriend ka khayaal rakhna samjhe meri absence mein agar osse pareshaan kiya toh dekh lena

 Ar(bends down on his knees)-I promise ki main teri girlfriend ka khayaal rakhoonga aur kabhi kabhi pareshaan karoonga js kidddin main shilpa ko kabhi pareshaan nai karoonga ok

 

 

 "Gappu hugs armaan n turns to shilpa n hugs her tightly n tears flows down frm gappu's cheeks n shilpa too couldn't help stopping her tears n her tears 2 started flowing n gappu wents in the bus of panchgani sanjeevani orphanage which daily visits to sanjeevani mumbai"

 

 

 Ar-waise gappu ro kyun raha tha oh main kitna paagal hoon he likes u dats y na n u 2 were crying I promise u dat this summer we'll take a long holiday n spent our whole holidays with gappu n all the childrens of panchgani sanjeevani orphanage ok nw stop crying my shona n wipes her tear

 Sh(mentally)-this summer hope I'll survive till this summer

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hey guys its js half part actually i went to wriet one shot which became huge dts y divided in to two parts next part wil b d last part hope you all like it 

plz guys its my frst try on IF  so plz guys tel me whether should i post d 2nd prt of it or nt plz guys cmnts

love

Bipin


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Edited by Magical_KaSh - 08 December 2012 at 7:57pm

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
hey vry nyce part
luvd it
u potray ARSH luv vry beautifuly
cont soon
nd plz pm me wenevr u updat ed nxt part

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good one

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged

really nice..

beautifully written..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

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awesome os
please continue super soon

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidu87

hey vry nyce part
luvd it
u potray ARSH luv vry beautifuly
cont soon
nd plz pm me wenevr u updat ed nxt part

heyya thnx fr ur cmnt

u r d  frst cmntor of mine on IF 

it makes u special fr me thnk us o much 

ill post d nex prt  tomorrw only 

n wil definitely pm u 

thnx once again

luv 

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by angelina_angel

good one
hey angel

thnx fr ur cmnt

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

really nice..

beautifully written..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

hey anumeha 

srry fr pmin on ur pm account 

i din had ur other account toh js pmed on dat only

m glad dat u liked it 

wil post d nex prt soon

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