Rehna Hai Tere Dil Mein (New MG FF) Note on Page 7

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Hello again! First, I would like to apologise for leaving Speak of the Devil unfinished. I couldn't carry on because my mind is all scrambled. Sorry if you were looking forward to the updates. However, I am sure this FF won't go down the same route (I hope).

This FF is called Rehna Hai Tere Dil Mein and is the story of two individuals, Maan and Geet.  Geet wants to go travelling but is short on funds. When her friend Sahil asks her to pretend to be his best friend Maan's girlfriend for two months, Geet agreed. Will they be just that or does fate have other plans? Will Geet realise that it's not easy money after all and she's losing much more in the process? Will they realise their love for each other and most of all will they accept it themselves?

Dedicated to lil.mizz.smexiishah10 and MaanKiGeet.. who were looking forward to Speak of the Devil. I'm so sorry girls and hope this makes up for it.

Hope you enjoy RHTDM.



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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana: Eldest son of Pammi and Raj Khurana. His seriously good looks and Khurana name makes him Delhi's most eligible bachelor. Girls swoon over him but Maan doesn't care for any of it. Is this about to change?



Geet Handa: Very sweet and down to earth. Geet's believes 'The process of learning stops when your ears are covered in mud.' She keeps busy by travelling or writing her blog, which is about life and other things. Geet had to drop out of school but she recently went back and completed her education.



Vikrant 'Vicky' Khurana: Vicky loves to work but loves to party more. He gets along with everyone and can talk anyone into anything but never uses this to this advantage, except for when it comes to his family members.



Dev Khurana: Is a very nice person and always ready to help out. Dev is very well behaved. He is also in love with his best friend, Sakshi but hasn't told her yet because he is afraid of losing her.



Raj Khurana: Raj believes in hard work and honesty. Raj started out working in a Dhaba and today is the owner of Khurana Constructions, India's top ten companies. A year ago, Raj settled for an early retirement and left his son Maan in charge and KC is doing pretty well.



Pammi Khurana: A Proud woman. She hates mingling with people who won't help her business or status. Loves socialising and throwing parties. Pammi and Maan's relationship is strained and has been that way since Maan was eleven years old.



Savitri Devi: Raj's mother. She is proud of her son in achieving so much honestly. She believes in giving back to the community and is a regular at charity events. She is Maan's mentor and best friend. Savitri Devi believes in accommodating modern ideas without losing the traditional values.



Naintara: Naintara and Maan's family have been doing business together for years. Naintara is obsessed with Maan and her parents know this, which is why they want Maan and her to wed.



Dr Sahil Joshi: Maan's childhood friend. Sahil always tells Maan to lighten up and both play a lot of pranks on each other. Sahil's parents passed away when he was young and he has since taken care of himself and his sister, Sakshi. Sahil respects the Khurana family a lot.



That's it. More characters will be introduced as the story goes on. I'll be happy to answer any questions about any of the characters. Have a nice day. 
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Part 1:

Maan:

Maan looked at his watch which read 7:20. There was twenty minutes till Geet's flight landed and he was exactly twenty minutes away from the airport. 'Damn, didn't know that meeting would run long,' he thought to himself. Maan got into his car and sped away. He also shot a small prayer to babaji hoping he would make it. He had to, if he was to make a good first impression. He still hadn't figured out why it mattered. 'Because I am Maan Singh Khurana and don't want anyone to have one up on me,' he said to himself.

Twenty one minutes later Maan was sat at the airport cafe, Chai Latte in hand, waiting. Her flight had landed before time but she wasn't out yet. He took a deep breath and looked at Gate no 8. The passengers were starting to shuffle out now. He saw a mother wrestling with her kid, a teenage couple laughing over some secret joke and Geet. She was dressed in blue straight legged jeans, a baby pink vest and gold ballet flats. Her outfit was simple and yet she managed to have so many eyes on her. She seemed oblivious to this or didn't care; Maan didn't know which one it was. She looked around searching for someone and he moved forward till he was facing her back. 'Geet,' ' On hearing her name she turned around... 'Hello Maan,' she said with a sincere smile on her face.

 

Geet:

Geet checked her face in the mirror for the fourth time. She wasn't checking for signs of fatigue but to see if her nervousness showed and it did a little bit but that could be due to the jet lag, no?

'Okay time to go,' She took a deep breath and made her way toward the gate. How could she miss someone so handsome? 'He must not be here yet,' she thought and that's when she heard a sexy voice calling her name. Her face lit up and she turned around to greet her 'Boyfriend.'


'Shall we?' said Maan, taking her trolley. On the way out Geet bumped into someone... 'I'm -,' 'Geet?' Geet looked shocked, then happy and squealed 'Vicky!!! Long time no see. Oh this' my bf 'Maan Singh Khurana,' they both said in unison '-and Maan this is 'Vicky,' Maan and Geet said in unison. The three of them laughed and it took Geet a while to figure out they were brothers. 'Anyway got to go, see you later ...Geet Bhabhi,' Vicky teased. He then hugged them and went to join a man in departures.

 

Geet:

They walked in silence towards the car. Maan loaded Geet's luggage while she stood there awkwardly. She decided to make conversation with the man whose girlfriend she was to be for the next two months... 'Soo I'm Geet,' she said, playing with her tote. 'Maan was the reply that followed as he gestured for her to get into the car as he walked to the driver's side.

Five minutes into the journey and neither said a word. Geet decided to try again and was thinking of topics when Maan said 'how do you know Vicky?' 'MMM we went to University together - in Amsterdam,' she added, in case Vicky too like her had gone to more than one University. 'Interesting, He will have rang the Mansion by now so I'm afraid, we have less time to prepare.' Mansion? Geet thought; did he just say Mansion? Maybe it's just a name, like ours 'Manchanda Mansion. 'Manchanda Mansion, oh I should go visit Dad,' Geet thought. 'Maan,'


Maan:

He instantly looked up. Like her voice was pulling him towards her, commanding his attention. His name had never sounded so good, as it did when leaving Geet's lips. He somehow remembered to talk and said, 'Yes Geet?'

'I would want to visit my Dad, if that's okay with you?'

'Yeah sure, I'll take you now, where does he live?'

Geet told him the addressed and they were on their way to Poonam Nagar.


Geet:

Geet was about to close the door when she ran out and told him, 'I shan't be long, a quick hi and that's it.'

'Please don't as you have to check in before 8:30.'


Maan saw her disappearing into the house and decided to carry on with his train of thoughts. Geet was attractive, there was no doubt about this but there was something else about her that attracted him. How is that possible as he knew nothing about her other than her name and that she wanted to travel. Yet this unknown girl who he'd met an hour back made him feel at ease. Something he must look into he said and waited for her to come back out.

 

Comments please. Do you like it? Do you hate it? I will update the next part in two days and will pm ya'll x

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome start
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

Awesome start
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sure hon and I'm sorry about ending Speak of the Devil πŸ˜”
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..amazing update.
love it.
continue soon.
thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice idea!! please continue!
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Thanks so much for the comments everybody. As promised, here's the next part. Your comments are what me write it sooner πŸ˜› Hope you enjoy it. Also I'm suprised no one's asked me about Geet's parents πŸ˜²

Anyway enjoy! 

Part 2:

Geet:

The maid who knew Geet since she was a kid let her in. Geet knew Dad and Pinky would be having Dinner so she headed towards the Dining area but not before taking a look at all her childhood pictures that still graced the mantelpiece over their antique fireplace. There were pictures of Geet and Pinky on their first day of school and a picture of Geet and Pinky with fat tears in their eyes; the photo was taken when the Manchandas moved from HP to Delhi a few years ago. The last picture caught her eye; it wasn't too old and was of Geet, Pinky and Dad in Goa. The pictures brought a tear to her eye.

'Itni jaldi to budhe log khaate hai.' Geet said loudly. The only two occupants at the table turned around, the happiness on their face clearly visible. 'Geeeth!' Pinky screamed and took her into a bear hug. Once the girls were done squealing, Geet went over to her Dad who pretended to not notice her. She knelt down in front of him till they were at eye level. 'Main jaanti hoon aap kyun naraaz hai, thore dino ki baat hai phir to main yahi padi rahungi, aap logon pe boj banke,' Geet said. Mr Manchanda playfull slapped Geet on her cheek and said 'khabardaar agar aisi baat mooh se nikali bhi to!' and took her in a hug. Both their eyes welled up. Geet knew Dad never considered her a boj but she wanted him to talk to her. Pinky who was watching their exchange from her seat smiled.

The three of them caught up for a while and suddenly, Geet remembered Maan waiting outside and asked permission to leave. Pinky went to escort her to the door but before they reached the door, she caught Geet by the hand and made her sit on the Sofa. Pinky said 'Are you sure to jo kar rahi hai sahi hai?' 'Of course Pinky, I am merely helping him and who could no to that face?' Pinky was lost so Geet took her to the windows and opened the curtains slightly. It was then that Pinky saw him and her eyes widened in shock. 'Ye to MSK hai. Tu inki girlfriend ban ne ka natak kar rahi hai? Haaye! You lucky chick.' Said Pinky and patted her on the arm. 'Jo bhi,' said Geet and left with a huge smile on her face.

 

Maan:

Geet was finally out. Maan didn't know if he was more conscious of her or she really had a spring in her step now. 'God, she's gorgeous' he thought 'Maan, control!,' He said to himself. Geet who was near the door thought he was talking to her and popped her head into the window and said 'kuch kaha aapne?' 'Huh, nahee, chalen?'

 

This time again, neither said anything during the journey. Geet hated not talking so she turned the radio on. After constant channel flicking she settled on a station that was playing Rihanna's California King Bed. Geet leaned back in her seat and closed her eyes. Maan was mesmerised at the sight of her. He knew he was staring but she looked so relaxed. Geet suddenly opened her eyes and caught him staring at her. He quickly started adjusting the mirror. 'Aap ghoorte bohot hain,' 'Kya?' Maan asked. 'Maine kahan aap hamesha hi itna kam baat karte hai?' Maan was relieved. Thank God she hadn't said what he thought she said. 'nahin, tum thak gayi hongi na flight se isliye. Hotel aa gaya.'

Maan checked all the reservations and came back with the key. 'Yeh hotel aapka hai?' 'Tumhe kaise pata,' Maan asked, wondering if she'd researched him thoroughly. She pointed to the pictures in the lounge. 'Yeah it belongs to my family. Tum penthouse suite mein rahogi. Wahan tumhe koi tang nahi karega as it's only used by my family. Is that okay?' Maan smiled. 'Ji bilkool. I'd love that,' Geet said, grateful.

Maan got Geet settled and asked her if she needed anything else. She shook her head as if to say no. 'Theek hai to main chalta hoon. We'll meet up tomorrow and discuss the rest. Tum kitne baje uth ti ho?' Geet never woke up before 12 but she was here on business so '7 AM,' she lied. 'Theek hai I'll pick you up at eight,' Maan said and he left. Geet fell on the bed thinking about today's events.

 

Geet:

Geet liked Maan. Just this morning, she wondered what sort of man he was. She even regretted taking the job up and was about to ring him up and cancel but her heart wouldn't let her. Now she was glad she hadn't cancelled. She liked Maan's company but the questioned that plagued her all morning, cropped up in her mind, 'why did he choose her?' She made a mental note of asking him this tomorrow. She quickly unpacked and ordered something to eat. Once she was done eating, she took a long bath and decided to sleep but sleep couldn't come to her sooner. She kept thinking about Maan and imaging scenarios about their 'bf/gf act.' She finally fell asleep at 2 AM.

 

It was 6:30 and Geet's alarm went off. She decided to sleep a little longer and soon it was quarter to seven. Geet jumped to her feet and got dressed. She threw on a sundress with flip flops and rushed downstairs. Not finding Maan in the lounge, she breathed out in relief. A loud scream at the reception caught her attention. Normally Geet would go see what it was but today she was too tired so decided to stay put.

Naintara was at the reception and was furious once she knew she couldn't use the penthouse suite as it was already occupied by a guest of Maan's. 'How am I supposed to get dressed for tonight's party, main apna samaan bhi leke aayi hoon,' she said and pointed to the trolley full of clothes and make up. The Manager who knew Naintara and her tantrums well intervened but Naintara wasn't having any of it.

Geet was sat on the sofa, reading a magazine when a hand touched her bare back from behind the sofa. Geet jumped and noticed it was a scared waitress hiding behind the sofa. She looked terrified and Geet comforted her. Turns out she too was scared of the guest at the reception. 'Ab to dekhna hi padega,' Geet said to herself. The waitress tried to stop her but Geet wanted to look. She was about to go into reception when she felt a strong grip on her hand. She didn't need to turn around as she knew who the hand belonged to.

'Hi,' said Maan, his M shaped lips curving into a smile. He moved ahead and kissed Geet on the cheek. Geet was taken aback and found her voice after a while. 'Good morning Maan!' she said a little too enthusiastically. They both went red at their actions...

 

Precap: 'Why did you choose me?'
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting..this naintara thinks as if she's the queen of the world
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi!!!
 
awesome fiction i  just read every thing in 15 min πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
 
story plot is awesome!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
 
loved it!!!!!😳😳😳
 
 
geet is maan's girlfriend...i have question hope u don't mind...geet ne maan ko dekhe bagair he uske GF bananne ke leye agree ho gai?????
 
 
i mean she never met him...was that cause for her friend's sake??????//...iam  lil confusing
 
 
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