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Hello again! First, I would like to apologise for leaving Speak of the Devil unfinished. I couldn't carry on because my mind is all scrambled. Sorry if you were looking forward to the updates. However, I am sure this FF won't go down the same route (I hope).

This FF is called Rehna Hai Tere Dil Mein and is the story of two individuals, Maan and Geet.  Geet wants to go travelling but is short on funds. When her friend Sahil asks her to pretend to be his best friend Maan's girlfriend for two months, Geet agreed. Will they be just that or does fate have other plans? Will Geet realise that it's not easy money after all and she's losing much more in the process? Will they realise their love for each other and most of all will they accept it themselves?

Dedicated to lil.mizz.smexiishah10 and MaanKiGeet.. who were looking forward to Speak of the Devil. I'm so sorry girls and hope this makes up for it.

Hope you enjoy RHTDM.



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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana: Eldest son of Pammi and Raj Khurana. His seriously good looks and Khurana name makes him Delhi's most eligible bachelor. Girls swoon over him but Maan doesn't care for any of it. Is this about to change?



Geet Handa: Very sweet and down to earth. Geet's believes 'The process of learning stops when your ears are covered in mud.' She keeps busy by travelling or writing her blog, which is about life and other things. Geet had to drop out of school but she recently went back and completed her education.



Vikrant 'Vicky' Khurana: Vicky loves to work but loves to party more. He gets along with everyone and can talk anyone into anything but never uses this to this advantage, except for when it comes to his family members.



Dev Khurana: Is a very nice person and always ready to help out. Dev is very well behaved. He is also in love with his best friend, Sakshi but hasn't told her yet because he is afraid of losing her.



Raj Khurana: Raj believes in hard work and honesty. Raj started out working in a Dhaba and today is the owner of Khurana Constructions, India's top ten companies. A year ago, Raj settled for an early retirement and left his son Maan in charge and KC is doing pretty well.



Pammi Khurana: A Proud woman. She hates mingling with people who won't help her business or status. Loves socialising and throwing parties. Pammi and Maan's relationship is strained and has been that way since Maan was eleven years old.



Savitri Devi: Raj's mother. She is proud of her son in achieving so much honestly. She believes in giving back to the community and is a regular at charity events. She is Maan's mentor and best friend. Savitri Devi believes in accommodating modern ideas without losing the traditional values.



Naintara: Naintara and Maan's family have been doing business together for years. Naintara is obsessed with Maan and her parents know this, which is why they want Maan and her to wed.



Dr Sahil Joshi: Maan's childhood friend. Sahil always tells Maan to lighten up and both play a lot of pranks on each other. Sahil's parents passed away when he was young and he has since taken care of himself and his sister, Sakshi. Sahil respects the Khurana family a lot.



That's it. More characters will be introduced as the story goes on. I'll be happy to answer any questions about any of the characters. Have a nice day. 

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Part 1:

Maan:

Maan looked at his watch which read 7:20. There was twenty minutes till Geet's flight landed and he was exactly twenty minutes away from the airport. 'Damn, didn't know that meeting would run long,' he thought to himself. Maan got into his car and sped away. He also shot a small prayer to babaji hoping he would make it. He had to, if he was to make a good first impression. He still hadn't figured out why it mattered. 'Because I am Maan Singh Khurana and don't want anyone to have one up on me,' he said to himself.

Twenty one minutes later Maan was sat at the airport cafe, Chai Latte in hand, waiting. Her flight had landed before time but she wasn't out yet. He took a deep breath and looked at Gate no 8. The passengers were starting to shuffle out now. He saw a mother wrestling with her kid, a teenage couple laughing over some secret joke and Geet. She was dressed in blue straight legged jeans, a baby pink vest and gold ballet flats. Her outfit was simple and yet she managed to have so many eyes on her. She seemed oblivious to this or didn't care; Maan didn't know which one it was. She looked around searching for someone and he moved forward till he was facing her back. 'Geet,' ' On hearing her name she turned around... 'Hello Maan,' she said with a sincere smile on her face.

 

Geet:

Geet checked her face in the mirror for the fourth time. She wasn't checking for signs of fatigue but to see if her nervousness showed and it did a little bit but that could be due to the jet lag, no?

'Okay time to go,' She took a deep breath and made her way toward the gate. How could she miss someone so handsome? 'He must not be here yet,' she thought and that's when she heard a sexy voice calling her name. Her face lit up and she turned around to greet her 'Boyfriend.'


'Shall we?' said Maan, taking her trolley. On the way out Geet bumped into someone... 'I'm -,' 'Geet?' Geet looked shocked, then happy and squealed 'Vicky!!! Long time no see. Oh this' my bf 'Maan Singh Khurana,' they both said in unison '-and Maan this is 'Vicky,' Maan and Geet said in unison. The three of them laughed and it took Geet a while to figure out they were brothers. 'Anyway got to go, see you later ...Geet Bhabhi,' Vicky teased. He then hugged them and went to join a man in departures.

 

Geet:

They walked in silence towards the car. Maan loaded Geet's luggage while she stood there awkwardly. She decided to make conversation with the man whose girlfriend she was to be for the next two months... 'Soo I'm Geet,' she said, playing with her tote. 'Maan was the reply that followed as he gestured for her to get into the car as he walked to the driver's side.

Five minutes into the journey and neither said a word. Geet decided to try again and was thinking of topics when Maan said 'how do you know Vicky?' 'MMM we went to University together - in Amsterdam,' she added, in case Vicky too like her had gone to more than one University. 'Interesting, He will have rang the Mansion by now so I'm afraid, we have less time to prepare.' Mansion? Geet thought; did he just say Mansion? Maybe it's just a name, like ours 'Manchanda Mansion. 'Manchanda Mansion, oh I should go visit Dad,' Geet thought. 'Maan,'


Maan:

He instantly looked up. Like her voice was pulling him towards her, commanding his attention. His name had never sounded so good, as it did when leaving Geet's lips. He somehow remembered to talk and said, 'Yes Geet?'

'I would want to visit my Dad, if that's okay with you?'

'Yeah sure, I'll take you now, where does he live?'

Geet told him the addressed and they were on their way to Poonam Nagar.


Geet:

Geet was about to close the door when she ran out and told him, 'I shan't be long, a quick hi and that's it.'

'Please don't as you have to check in before 8:30.'


Maan saw her disappearing into the house and decided to carry on with his train of thoughts. Geet was attractive, there was no doubt about this but there was something else about her that attracted him. How is that possible as he knew nothing about her other than her name and that she wanted to travel. Yet this unknown girl who he'd met an hour back made him feel at ease. Something he must look into he said and waited for her to come back out.

 

Comments please. Do you like it? Do you hate it? I will update the next part in two days and will pm ya'll x



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Awesome start
please add me to your pm list!

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lil.mizz.smexii

Awesome start
please add me to your pm list!

sure hon and I'm sorry about ending Speak of the Devil Unhappy

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wow..amazing update.
love it.
continue soon.
thx

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good start

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nice idea!! please continue!

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