FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13 - Page 76

loved it jaz
but ending to BP bada diya 🤔aaisa kya ho gaya ki geet ne maan ko chod diya . cant wait for next

THE WEDDING WAS WONDERFUL

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! superbly written! Past n present well incorporated ! Thriller was their special wedding song! Maaneet married n happy! They love each other! Bt Geet left! Is she dead? Update soon

The wedding part was so fun to read. Esp maan's restlessness. The thriller song part was suprising indeed. Lol, imagining the bride and groom break dancing.
What on earth could have happened between them? Geet couldn't have just upped and left. Curious to read ahead.

I need to go hunting for balaan's now.   😆

simply fabulous
loved it
keep writingx

I love to hate these updates... I can't wait to read more though..

part 7
awesome...
the past went so smooth...
they were happy...
do at one point write on Geet's POV too dear...
present
poor Maan...
he is so alone...
why did Geet do like this?
or is there any mystery?lol...
cont soon dear...

The Thriller at their night 🤣 🤣 .. geet is something 😆 loved it .. and u're sooo sooo evil for not revieling what happened to geet .. urgh .. hate u for that 🤔 but love ya too 😆

gr8 part,,