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Elizabeth Darcy IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Big smileHey everyone! My name's Lizzy and I've been doing OSs and FFs since my favourite serial Tere Liye got over...and ever since the plot of Dharampatni has been out, I've been writing little snippets of dialogue that Mohan and Kastur would have with each other Wink as a couple. Of course, here my Kastur is a little different...wanted to reinterpret the adarsh Dharampatni ideal that I'm afraid that serial would pigeonhole Kastur as, so developed her differently! As the serial moves ahead I'll make more snippets that will suit the characters in the serial more, but for now...this is Mohan and Kastur - as I see them Big smile

Btw...anyone who wants to try their hand at snippeting, jump right in you don't need my permission!! Big smile

Index For Snippets:

Lizzy:


Silky:


Rakhi: 

Capsie: 


Megs: 



Edited by Elizabeth Darcy - 27 October 2011 at 2:43pm

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
They say the way to a man's heart is  through his stomach...

Snippet 1

Mohan: Oye! Spag Bol!
Kastur: Angry Mera naam Spag nahin hain!!

Snippet 2

Mohan: Spell lasagna
Kastur: Hai Thakurji, what ajeeb names all your girlfriends have!
Mohan: Look, I have to leave in ten minutes. Spell lasagna!
Kastur: L-A-Z-A-N-I-A...khush??

Kastur: Spell thepla
Mohan: And she tells me my girlfriends'  names are weird...Ermm
Kastur: What are you muttering?? Spell!
Mohan: T-A-P-E L-A-A

Snippet 3

Kastur: Lo...eat.
Mohan: Yeh kya hai?
Kastur: Khandvi.
Mohan: Yes we can!
Kastur: Can't we nahin hain ji, khandvi Ermm
Mohan: Yes we khan! From  the epiglottis! LOL

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Lizzzyyy

ur Back Honey !!!!!!Lol Awesome 

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
I'm laughing my butt off, Lizzy ROFL My favorite one is the last one! Wink Great job sweets! Keep writing more! Big smile

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Kaun kambakht bardaasht karne ke liye peeta hain LOL

Snippet 4:

Kastur: Suniye ji khaana is ready!
Mohan: Wait yaar, I'm having a Bloody Mary!
Kastur: Ab yeh Mary beech main kahaan se tapak gayi? Shocked Window mein grill hain aur saare darwaazein bhi bandh kar di Angry

Snippet 5:

Mohan *still holding Bloody Mary in his hands*: I told you not to disturb me while I'm making a cocktail!
Kastur: Your dinner is getting cold and I'm not warming it up for you!
Mohan: Who cares, I'm having this Bloody Mary instead!  *holds up glass*
Kastur: Shocked Aapney Mary ka khoon kiya???
Mohan: *facepalm*

Snippet 6:

Mohan: Excuse me while I sneak out for my Margarita...
Kastur: Omg again Shocked Woh bechari Mary aaj bhi mere yaadon mein basii hain...Cry let me get over HER first!
Mohan: Shocked Kastur...a girl??? *is close to fainting*
Kastur: Toh? Don't tell me you will pour this one also into a glass...Ouch
Mohan: Of course I will, what else do you DO with a Margarita? Now shh, don't tell Ma!
Kastur: *faints*



Edited by Elizabeth Darcy - 15 August 2011 at 11:03pm

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
OMG! Hahahahahaha ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL Now all three are my favs! LOL

P.S.- Comment on my Taanu FF pleaseee! Embarrassed


Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 15 August 2011 at 12:40pm

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
ROFL This is H-i-l-a-r-i-o-u-s! ROFL
Loved it Lizzy! Hug

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
West meets East. i loved it.  especialy the thepla and khandvi ROFLsss.

onu suggestion, number ur snippets continuously na, so as the pages increases, readers will know there are more in prev pages :D

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