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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 3:37pm | IP Logged

                                       Hey guys!!!!!!!

This OS is like a surprise for one of my best friend. This is just a way to tell her that I love her a lot. She is none other than Shreya. Shreya I love u lotsss sis, and hope u love this surprise. I am not a perfect writer, infact I cant write at all.

This is just a try, so please ignore the mistakes.

Thankyou guys, and I love u all.

 

                        OS on maneet

Khuranas and Handas, the two most successful businessman of India.

Raj singh khurana and Prem handa were best friends. Always competitive when it come to business. But always there for eachother. In world's eyes they were separate but indeed they were like one family. It wasn't wrong to say that they were the two most happiest families ever. Their happiness doubled when kaushalya khurana gave birth to a cute little boy, and Additi handa gave birth to a princess. Both khuranas and handas were extremely happy.

                                **************************

Time passed and happiness doubled in both families. It was Maan and geet's 10th birthday. As usual the party was held at khurana mansion. All the big businessmen and celebrities were at the party. All were enjoying and having fun of their lives, but one phone call changed everything. Additi received a call that prem handa met with an accident. All rush to hospital.

Mr Khurana: how is prem?

Doc: we are trying our best.

Additi: please doctor nothing should happen to him please.

Kaushalya:additi sambhalo apne app ko. If u break down like this then what will happen to geet?

Additi: geet, geet kahan hai?

Mr khurana: don't worry wo maan ke saath hai.

                                   *******************************

Geet: Maan hum yahan kyon aye hain?

Maan: princess who''.

Haan hum yaha babies hain na hum unhe dekhne aye hain.

Geet: hawww BABIES!!!!! Maan babies hospital se milte hain.

Maan: nahin princess, tum nahin samjho gi.

Geet: kyon nahin?

Maan: kyon ke tum choti ho abhi.

Geet:but you were born the same day I did na.

Maan: yes jaan, but I am more mature than you. You are still innocent.

Geet: hmmm not fair ( with a big pout).

Maan: awww ( maan gave geet a side hug).

Geet slept on Maan's shoulder.

Maan: sorry princess, I lied to you, but I cant tell you that prem dad is in danger. I am sorry jaan. ( please forgive me). I am sorry. I am sorry. Maan kisses geet cheek.

Geet in sleep mumers, ewww Maan. Don't kiss me.

Maan:WHY NOT!!!!!!!!. I can do anything for you and with you. Nobody can stop me ,not even you.

These were just lines for a 10 year old boy, how much he mean it he also didn't knew.

                                 ***********************

Doc: im sorry!!! We couldn't save mr. handa.

Mr khurana: doctor please. Thast not possible. Try again please.

Doc: I am so sorry sir.

Additi fainted in kaushalya arm.

Geet: mama ko kya hua? Papa kahan hain?( she had big tears in her eyes)

Maan can never see her in pain.

Maan: stop crying geet.

Geet: par maan

Maan: I said stop crying. With that he took geet into a bone crushing hug.

                                           ****************

After 1 month.

Additi: bhaiya prem made this will before he died.

Mr.khurana: according to this will prem's 51% of property is on maan name and 49% share on geet name. what is this? Why prem did that?

Additi: bhaiya you love geet more than anything, and prem loved maan as his son.

He know that when maan is there nothing can happen to geet.

                             ***********************

Things changed and on Raj and khushalya's insistence geet and additi moved in khurana mansion. Now there was another problem going on in khurana mansion. Maan and geet wanted to stay in same room, the problem was that both wanted the right side of the room.

Geet: I will have the right side of the room.

Maan: no its my room, I will have the right side.

Geet: no!!!!

Maan: yes!!!!

Geet: no, no, no!!!!!

Maan: this is my house, my room, so my rules will work here. This is not your house.

Geet started crying because she considered khurana mansion her house.

Maan: uff yeh mene kya kar diya!!!

Geet I am idiot, stupid, moron, pagal and sooo on

Please forgive me, don't cry jaan!!!

Geet started crying loud.

Maan:why????

Geet I hate you, you are calling my Maan stupid.

Maan couldn't help but smile at his innocent princess.

                               ***************

After 11 years

Maan and geet 21st birthday.

Whole khurana mansion was decorated like wow.

All the things were there except the birthday people.

As usual maan and geet both were not at their own birthday party.

Additi: kahan reh gaye yeh donon.

Kaushalya: like every single time they disappeared from their party.

Mr khurana: when we know they not going to come, why sulk here. Enjoy the party.

 

                            **********************

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JAAN

That was the words written on the sky by fire work.

Geet was in awe because like always maan gave her the best gift.

Maan where are you? Maan come now or I will cry.

By not receiving the answer geet had big big tears in her eyes. Geet's tears were maan weakness.

Maan: what is this jaan? u started crying, not fair.

Geet: maan that was so sweet.

Maan: u liked it?

Geet: nope!!!!!!

Maan: man ughhh I should have done something better. I am so sorry jaan I couldn't gave u what''

Geet hold maan's face in her palms.

Maan I didn't liked it, infact I loved it.

Geet: maan just like always you gave me the best gift ever.

Maan: nahin geet I didn't did anything for you, I did everything out of selfishness cause I want to see the happiness, the smile on your face and I can do anything and I mean anything for this smile.

Maan: I love u jaan

Geet: I love u  too my maan.

And they enjoyed the rest of the day with each other not caring about the world.

This was their day and just theirs.

 

 

 

     That's was it. If u like please do comment.

And tell me should I continue or not.

Thank you soo much

Hope Shreya u liked it jaan

Love u sisEmbarrassed

 



Edited by iampretty - 14 August 2011 at 3:38pm

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
awhhh mariam jaan
you're the sweetest person ever
love you so much
thanks a lott..
awh this was so cute
i loved it
dont u dare say ur not a good writer
i love the way you wrote it.
the maaneet scenes were awesome..
please you better continue it..
love it
thank you so muchh
i love you loadss..



Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 August 2011 at 3:44pm

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maangeetcrazy

awhhh mariam jaan
you're the sweetest person ever
love you so much
thanks a lott..
awh this was so cute
i loved it
dont u dare say ur not a good writer
i love the way you wrote it.
the maaneet scenes were awesome..
please you better continue it..
love it
thank you so muchh
i love you loadss..

i love u tooo lotsss
u welcome jaan
ohk jaan i will continue it
u welcome jaan
love u lotss

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
it ws a cute lovely os....

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by krati5

it ws a cute lovely os....
thank youEmbarrassed

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
wow..superb update.
love it

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shah10

wow..superb update.
love it
thank u soo muchEmbarrassed

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