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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Hi all
how r u all

Happy Independence Day to all of u

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I wrote an os  Ek Salam Unn Veer Seenanio Ke Naam (MG OS) of   MAANEET
hope u all like it




vande maataram..
vande maataram..
maataram..

sujalaam sufalaam malayaj sheetalaam
sasyashyaamalaam maataram
vande..

shubhrajyotsna pulakit yaaminiim
phulla kusumita drumadal shobhiniim
suhaasinim sumadhura bhaashhinim
sukhadaam varadaam
maataram.. vande maataram

sapta koti kantha kalakala ninaada karaale
nisapta koti bhujaidhruta kharakarvaale
sapta koti kantha kalakala ninaada karaale
nisapta koti bhujaidhruta kharakarvaale
ka bola ka noma eith bole
bahubal dhaariniin namaami taariniim
ripudalavaariniin maataram
vande maataram ...

tumi vidyaa tumi dharma, tumi hridi tumi marma
tvan hi praanaah shariire
baahute tumi maa shakti,
hridaye tumi maa bhakti,
tomaarai pratimaa gadi mandire mandire
vande maataram..

tvan hi durgaa dashapraharanadhaarinii
kamalaa kamaladala vihaarinii
vaanii vidyaadaayinii, namaami tvaam
namaami kamalaan amalaan atulaam
sujalaan sufalaan maataram
vande maataram..

shyaamalaan saralaan susmitaan bhuushhitaam
dharaniin bharaniin maataram
vande maataram...


     
   




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Ek Salam Unn Veer Seenanio Ke Naam (MG OS)

Geet Singhania sitting in her bed , she looking like statue , no emotions, no feeling, no tears, just like dead body.her world shatter today, her would be husband died during patrolling time . She just sat like stone , her mother try to make her cry but no result. Doctor came and gives her sedative for sleep but said if she will not react then it'll be affect her health.

Geet is just sitting besides the window and looking at the pic of Maan her Maan, Captain Maan Singh Khurana , ,her best friend, she met him in college function, it's just all an accident  like geet went to meet her childhood friend, Romeo there who is now professor there. And that time  she collide with Maan, but later geet found out Maan is cousin brother of Pinky wife Left. Aditya .

After some day maan also friendly with geet and geet have a good friend except pinky, adi, and romeo.

When they have their holidays, they met and spend time together. That time Maan falls in love with her, her simplicity, innocence .

Maan want to propose her but later , but have to left for his duty but  again destiny bring them close and Maan's parents make proposal to her parents for geet's hand for Maan,

Maan's parents want to see their son happy and married and they find out about Maan's love for geet and they were too happy so they make this proposal and soon geet's parents agreed and geet as obedient daughter also agreed with it. She loves Maan  but never voice out her feelings and she is too happy for this proposal They got engaged soon and after that Maan has to go to his base as his holiday is end ,

After that they chat by phone some time by letter some time,

Just few days ago when their marriage date was fixed Maan will come back to marry her but before that this news come ,everything shatter, all end.

Geet is looking at out side and sky is crying like they also sad .

Pinky come and said maan bhaiya aagye I mean but geet heard only .

Geet runs madly and see maan is lying there cold, she just ran and hugged him tightly and said maan, maan, pls wake up maan, maan.

                                                                                        

Geet shouts MAAN ,MAAN don't got maan where her mother come to her room after heard her shouting and said geet, geet kya hua dear,

Geet wake up and seen herself drenched in a sweat and she is looking here and there then runs to call some one

Rano(Geet's mother ):- kya hua beta kisse call kar rehe ho inte raat ko

Geet frantically pressed the no and said pick it up maan, pls maan.

Rano understand there is something related to maan.

After some ring when still the phone can't pick by maan, she sat there crying , maan tum kaha ho , kuch hua toh , nehi mujhe abhi tumse milna hain mein ja rehi hoon but rano stopped her and said geet, hosh pet u kaha jayegi usse milne, Kashmir mein, hum Delhi mein hain aur bhai raat ke 3.30 baje hain tujhe milna hain kya hogaya tujhe, kya hua puttar bol na  mujhe

Geet still sobbing like little kid and hugged her mother and narrate the whole dream which she seen some times ago.

Rano hugged her and try to calm her , sooth her fear, tension but rano also know only maan can make her understand or sooth her or reduced her fear.

Later rano some how make her sleep for some time but she also shake in fear and want to call maan but maan is not picking any call.

Next day geet come from office and seen a Breaking news in TV

"Bhari matra pe goli bari se aur aam gaowalon ke bachaye humare Veer Jawaon ne . par inn beech mein humara ek Veer Jawan Shaheed ho gaye, aur unke Naam hain Major Yash Malhotra, oh bahaduri ke sath lare aur aapne jaan nichawaor kiye aapne desh ke liye"

(There is huge amount of Ammunition in that sector but our brave and courageous solder save innocent villagers but in between our one Jawan Major Yash Malhotra lost his lives, he bravely fought and saved villagers then lost his live for his mother land")

 

Geet's breath stuck, Yash he is colleague of maan, where is maan, what happen, many thought come in her mind . she thinks Yash,, he is just married to Pari, just 2 and half months and this happen , where is pari know-how this happen and y,

Geet sat in the floor and tear start to falls but soon she remembered maan's word

Aason mat bahana unn veer shaheed ko naam, unke liye aapna Shradhanajli arpan karna ,unke tyag ke Sradhanjali dena.(don't cry for those brave patriotic , brave soldiers but salute them for their immense sacrifice for their mother land)

Geet wipes her tears and runs to meet pari who is her friend also and found she lost her sense from that time but keep chanting yash's name.

Geet can't hold herself more and break down.it's not easy, how difficult it is.

 A solider died but with whom his family also lost, a Soldier who is son of his  parents , brother of his sister or brother, husband of his wife, father of his children but everything lost.

 

Later they shown, Army tribute Major Yash Malhotra with full respect. Tri color cover his body, later give him 21 tope ki salami.

 

 

 

Kar Chale Ham Fida, Jan-o-tan Saathiyon..

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

 

Kar Chale Ham Fida, Jan-o-tan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon,

Kar Chale Ham Fida, Jan-o-tan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon,

 

Saans Tham Thi Gayi, Nabz Jam Tho Gayi,

Phir Bhi Badathe Kadam Ko Na Rukh Ne Diya,

Kat Gaye Sar Hamaare, Tho Kuch Gam Nahin,

Sar Himalay Ka Hamne Na Jhuk Ne Diya,

Marte Marte Raha Baanq Pan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

Kar Chale Ham Fida, Jan-o-tan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

 

Zinda Rehene Ke Mausam, Bahut Hai Magar,

Jaan Dene Ki Rut Roz Aati Nahin,

Husn Aur Ishq Dono Ko Ruswa Kare,

Woh Jawaani Jo Khoon Mein Naahathi Nahin,

Aaj Dharti Bani Hai Dulhan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

Kar Chale Ham Fida, Jan-o-tan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

 

Raah Qurbaaniyon Ki Na Veeran Ho,

Tum Sajaathe Hi Rehna Naye Kaafile,

Fathe Ka Jashn Is Jashn Ke Baad Hein,

Zindagi Maut Se Mil Rahi Hai Gale,

Bandlo Apne Sar Se Kafan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

Kar Chale Ham Fida, Jan-o-tan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

 

Khench Do Apne Khoon Se Zameen Par Lakeer,

Is Tarah Aane Ne Paaye Na Raawan Koyi,

Thod Do Haath Agar Haath Utne Lage,

Chune Paaye Na Sita Ka Daaman Koyi,

Ram Bhi Tum, tumhi Lakshman Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

Kar Chale Ham Fida, Jan-o-tan Saathiyon,

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

Ab Tumhare Hawale, Watan Saathiyon..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But soon another news all received soon , Yash's team again will go to another direction to save another village .

Geet's heart sank in unknown fear , she still can't contact maan as he is still busy in that area.

She still trying some how if maan contact her or she but no result and she know when it's come to choose duty for maan always duty come first ..

After 2days Geet in her office switched on the Tv and see again another breaking news .Geet's heart start to beat fast.

 

Breaking news:-

 

"There a huge number of ambushing in certain area, our army fights to save the area and the people of that area ."

After 2hours another breaking news:-

 

 

"Our brave soldiers again prove their bravery and fought with those enemy and killed them and saved those innocent villagers and more good news is no Casualties for our side, leader of the team of this operation Major Maan Singh Khurana . he single handedly handle more than 4 enemy and killed them . His team done great job, they never think of their safety but make sure all innocent villagers should be saved they done it "

There is they shown Major Maan Singh Khurana with his officers come out from the villagers and thanks all of them and leave from there.

Geet smiles through tears and said I'm proud of  u maan, Major Maan Singh Khurana.

 

Maan awarded with gallantry award, later after some days maan called geet and said jaan.

Geet is so excited and said maan, maan , maan , maan, how r u, I'm proud of u , u r so sweet u r so brave, u r , maan , I'm speechless,

Maan  just listen and it's more soothing things in this tension full situation.

After some geet said maan, r u there.

Maan:- ha baba, hum iha hain

Geet:- kuch bol kyuon nehi rehe ho

Maan:- kya bolu , jab mere pyari si misthy bol rehe hain toh usske meethi meethi baaton se mere dil bhar jata hain.

Geet:-Maan stop flirting ha, aacha bolo kaise ho, kab aarehe ho .

Maan just keep silent for some time then said jaan, I can't come home now as here is some problem and I have to go again for some work.

Geet look pale and again her fear come but she try to be brave and said ok.all the best.

Maan:- geet, pls jaan,

Geet:- ek baat puchu,

Maan:- ha jaan,

Geet:- mein uha jauon tumhare paas.

Maan:- geet, don't be child, here is lots of problem and u can't now listen jaan, I understand ur condition  but jaan, u know na

Geet softly said u don't and never be understand my condition but don't worry I will never complain as I know now county needs u more,it's ok maan, anyway, sahi time pe khana kha rehe ho na, aur jada thand mat lagana u know na , u never think of ur self but still,

Maan smiles and said yes I'll take care of my self. Bye jaan, see u soon and love u ,muhhaaa.

Geet smiles and said muhhaa, see u soon.

She never said bye, it's her fear or superstition don't know any one but maan think it's her fear about him to loose him, so he never insist her to say.

 

After few days , maan come back from work and  knock the door and found geet is standing there .

Maan:- u, what r  u doing here now

Geet frowned and said don't u happy to see me

Maan:- no and just enter the home and close the door and said I told u not to come here and u , never listen to me na.

Geet:- maan, don't shout, I'm here with my work and think to meet u but when u will not pleased and happy to see me but maan hold her elbow and said jaan, it's not like that u know the situation of here is not good and I can't afford to see u suffer here so for ur safety.

Geet look at him then hugged him and said sorry maan.I just reacted  like that.

Maan:-hmmm I know my misthy but r u sure come for work or

Geet look at him then said oh actually I come Shimla for some work then think to meet  u so come here .

Maan laughs and said kuch khaya hain kya.

Geet nodded in no  then said but make some food for both of us.

Maan :-ok jaan.

Later geet arrange the table and both sat there. both enjoyed the dinner after long time and fed each other

Later that night before sleeping geet is hugging maan tightly and said maan I'm sorry to come here and increase ur problem.

Maan:- shhh, never say that jaan, u r never problem . I understand ur condition and more u r want to stay with me but I'm so busy and we have to postponed our marriage but don't worry this time when I will go back we will first get married then a long honey moon and kissed her cheek and then dipped his head in her shoulder and rubbed his nose there . and said baas kuch din aur phir hum dono official man and woman.

Geet  shyly smiles and said hmmm.

 

Next day maan make her understand so she can leave and give her promise to come soon to marry her and make her only him.

After 15 days maan come back to home and before that he talked with their family for marriage but let it be hidden for surprise for geet.

 

Geet is happy to see him back and hugged him tight. They spend some couple of days together.

After 4more days maan said come with me and they reached their farmhouse when geet asked what happen , maan said cause after 2 days we will get married,

Geet look at him with wide eyes and said kya.

Maan huskily said kyuon don't u want to marry me.

Geet smiles and said of  course I want to marry u.

Then next two days their sangeet, haldi, haldi  happen then the day come their marriage date, for some reason maan reached little late and again geet's fear come back and she fainted.

Till now she never told any one about it , or share about it to any one now her mind is totally cover with fear.

Later she gain her conscious and see maan is there with worried face. She just hugged him tightly and start crying.She told him about that nightmare she seen.

Maan make her calm and sooth her and said I'm here jaan, to marry, I will never leave u, never ever, trust me dear.

 

Geet nodded and said trust more than anything.

Later they exchange varmala  then sat in front of holy fire and matra start for the marriage, Maan tied mangalsutra in her neck then fill her mang  with sindoor  then They take Sath phere and then pandit jee announced them as husband and wife.

They take blessing from God, Pandit jee and then Elders of their house .

Later they got ready to go their home.

First night of their they r too tired so maan said geet to take rest and after changing maan take her in his arms and both falls in sleep.

Next day morning maan see his lovely, beautiful wife sleep in his chest. He just kissed her eyes and said misthy good morning.

Geet snuggled more close to him and said hmmm , maan.

Later they got ready for pagphere and then maan again take her back for reception and they got ready for it and went to Hotel Sun Shine , they danced together ,

Later next day maan went to meet pari who is now doing further study to keep herself busy.

Geet hugged pari and cried there and pari said geet, never let ur love go away from urself, hold him tight , don't let him go .

Geet nodded and again both cried .

 

After few days ,both goes to Goa ,and as maan promised for long honeymoon they r busy there for 10days but maan want it more than 15 days but his duty called him again .

But this time geet is strong and she also go with him in Kashmir , she is now used to his work, she is still taking tension, pain, fear but some how she know he will be fine and will come back to him.

After couple of yrs they r proud parents of twins  a boy and a girl .

Boy's name is Aryan Singh Khurana

Girl's name is Singdha Singh Khurana.

Now maaneet with their children happily lived together and forever.

Maan is Colonel Maan Singh Khurana

Geet is now MD of HC industry

 




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Hi all
Happy Independence day to all of u
how r u all
 updated my os

 Ek Salam Unn Veer Seenanio Ke Naam (MG OS)

hope u all like it
sorry for any mistake
I don't want to make it sad but some part little bit sad as this is reality, a bitter reality
I just want to salute those soldiers who lost their lives for their country
 pls salute them and salute their sacrifice for their country and their family who also sacrifice lots


love
rakhi




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Hi Rakhi...Happy Independence Day!  Wow I am  second  to comment lol. Just read the OS...was superb n beautifully written! Will wait for the pm...but saw u updated n had to read!

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awesome...

superb...

amazing...

the truth...

thnx for such a wonderful message on this special day...






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