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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
Yeah...but no matter how much I try, I am being pulled back to some of the 2010-11 episodes only!!!! LOL I am not going to touch any classic.
 
It's turning into something completely different. I am only going to do justice to the title. Didn't start writing anything, just going over the episode in my mind.


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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Well... I'm planning to take an old one ... instead of improving ,,, (not needed rather) ,,,, I'll write my own version of one of them ... (ooo ... excited LOL )

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Wow...that's nice...I was looking at some of the 2011 list - ek ke baad ek bakwaas episodes...!!!! I think I'll do a 2010 one. Enough food for thought even there. I wonder which year will fare better.  I am sadly inclined to think 2010 was better.
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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

Wow...that's nice...I was looking at some of the 2011 list - ek ke baad ek bakwaas episodes...!!!! I think I'll do a 2010 one. Enough food for thought even there. I wonder which year will fare better.  I am sadly inclined to think 2010 was better.



2011 has been the worst . Some very very bad cases there. I used to dislike 2009 cases but I have changed my openion. They are so much better
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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

Originally posted by gadhadada

 DII... kis jagah aap nay la ker maara hay kay banda paani bhi na maang sakay...LOL... ab tou mujahy HATH khench leenay chayey...Confused


Sorry, main samjhi nahi...idea achcha hai ya bura?



sorry DII... mera matlab hay... IDEA itna AWESUME hay kay shayed main LIKH na paon!!!

first kafi STORIES mein tou PLOT hee nahi thaLOL

second, mujhay laga tha seedhay seedhay ek PLOT hoga... RULES... tou main TRY ker lunga... Confusedmagar ab tou really buhat zyada TOUGH hay...Smile PLOT dhoondna hay...Big smile COMPARASION pehlay say hee hay... cz wat we will make is a REVISE or REMAKE of ORIGINAL...Dead

third, itnay baray baaray naam BHAVNAB DII, DEMONSTAR, SUNNY, DEEPIKA, NANDANI DII... main shayed kuch likh hee na paon... bus ye mera matlab tha...Cry



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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NandiniPS

Originally posted by gadhadada

 DII... kis jagah aap nay la ker maara hay kay banda paani bhi na maang sakay...LOL... ab tou mujahy HATH khench leenay chayey...Confused


Baat Samajh nahi aayi?ConfusedConfused


oops DII... mera matlab hay... VIS DII ka IDEA itna AWESUME hay kay shayed main LIKH na paon!!!Cry

first kafi STORIES mein tou PLOT hee nahi thaLOL

ab tou really buhat zyada TOUGH hay...Smile PLOT dhoondna hay...Big smile COMPARASION pehlay say hee hay... cz wat we will make is a REVISE or REMAKE of ORIGINAL...Dead

third, itnay baray baaray naam BHAVNAB DII, DEMONSTAR, SUNNY, DEEPIKA, NANDANI DII... main shayed kuch likh hee na paon... bus ye mera matlab tha...Cry



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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged

Theek hai, main aapko ek plot PM karti hoon...us par story likh do.



Edited by visrom - 14 August 2011 at 11:39pm
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hehehhe a fixed plot idea was simpler LOL ... but this is definitely more interesting !!!
 
Well I'll either take an old one and write my version or take something very recent ... we've had an era of dud with 2011 !!!
 
I had a doubt ,,,, like we have had target CID ... in such cases the basic plot will be CID being targetted ... how,who and the motive can be changed accordingly right ?? matlab Asha needn't fall froma lift ... or they might be targetted as a whole ... or in some other way etc etc. ... i had such doubts regarding some other epis in combination.

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