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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shilpI007

hey shona
speeclesss dear
after reading In True Love with...it was awesome dearClap...
all emtion feel really so true n realistic...
i m love this poem dear so somuch...i goosebmps after reading this...

i can't explaain what i feel u know na i m not good explaining my feeling...
just want to say
clapping with standing position...hats off dearClap...loved it so much & love u too to write poem...
thanks for wring such a  beautiful poem..now i m waitng so many poems, ff & Os from uuu...i want more samjhi
love u shona


Hey Shona
Thanks a lot for you sweet comments my love
I am so glad that you like my poem
Plzz be with me yaar
I really need ur support
Loves u alot


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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaaniKSGmallik

awesome awesome awesome
tooo ksgoood
just loved how u beautifully personified happiness n pain
u r an amazing poet n friend
so plzzz do write more
lots of lov
vaaniSmile


Hey Angel
Thanks a lot for ur sweet comments
I am glad u like my work
Aww loves u a lot

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..KaJenDelena..

WOW! Meri sweetu Pyari Geet!
 
This was simply unbelievable. Never seen such meaningful and beautifully written poem ever in my short life. Simply breath-taking. The whole story and the contrast between Happiness and pain was just simply, amazing, beautifully and unbelievably well written! Geet, seriously you have suprised me with your wiritng! Its just breath-taking.
 
I Love the whole story. It was a simple story, Happiness breezed past her life but cast a shadow of pain in her, for seemingly forever. Loved it! Truly Loved it! I loved the interlock of her lovestory in the form of happiness and pain. I L.O.V.E.D. I.T!
 

"His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes"

 
These two lines among others truly touched my heart and made me gasp. Beautifully written. Bring them on! Keep the poems coming, please!?
 
 
Love Priyanka <3 ;)


Hey Priii my loveHug...you know what I just love the way you said Meri pyari sweetu GeetSmile...Chooo chweeettt...I was really waiting for ur comments...they means a lot to me...seriously...I am so glad that you love my work...Thanks a lot for ur Encouraging comments... I will surely try my best to write more...Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by youth_showsfan

hey geet
u r really an ausum poet yaar
i really loved the poem
d emotions were clearly expressed
do write more
nd thx fr d pm


Hey dear
Thanks a lot for ur sweet comments
I am glad that you like my work
Smile

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lavanya_armaan

amazinggg...u are srslii a poet di...
great,,,
i lovedd it alotBig smile


Hey dear
Thanks a lot for ur sweet commentsSmile
I am glad you like my work

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolvini4u

Oh NO! m late..

resss

OMG!! Where were you since so long? Shocked

Beautiful <3

*Edited*
Hey Geee Hug

You know I was so surprised to see a PM. And when I read the poem , i was like 'WOW'. It is intense, deep and touching. Realistic in every sense.

The title is so apt. I wonder if something else would better befit your poetry. This is like most suited and attention grabbing.

Each and every line was awesome. Like m sure, everyone would have found themselves connected while reading any or every line. Do I need to mention it was mature! The mood which you've used in your poetry is one of those that fascinates me.
There are actually 4-5 lines which i loved a lot but the last 4 took my heart away. They're beautiful <3 M in awe.

You surely should write more. Poetry or FF or both. I would love to read something more from you. Nice writing skill, you've. M surely gonna treasure this poem =)

Love ya
Vini



Hey Vini my loveHug
Aww its ok yaar
It was my mistake
I PMed u lateEmbarrassed
Shoollyyy
Awww thanks a lot for ur sweet comments
They are so encouraging
means a lot to me
will surely try to write more
Love u

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehak_arora

OMG! di...sucha a nice poem that was i loved it so much di that was really nice cute and a really very romantic poem...sooo nicee just loved it like anything i have never sucha gr8 poet like you ever in my life i just love your poems like anything...although it was you second one but still i just loved it to the core...the bestest, romantic most awesomest poem i have ever read in my life :D


Aww mehak my love
you are so sweet
I am so glad
that u like my work
Thanks a lot for ur sweet commentsSmile
Love u

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Posted: 25 August 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
hey geet...awesome! superb poem...truly says, u are a great poetess...loved it from the bottom of my heart...actually i always like to read and write poem...do write more poem like this...
punam

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