Writers Corner

   

In True Love with.. (Page 3)

Post Reply New Post

Page 3 of 6

Page 1 Page 2
Page   of 6
Page 4 Page 6

Mojo.

IF-Dazzler

Mojo.

Joined: 01 October 2010

Posts: 4503

Posted: 16 August 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
OMG! di...sucha a nice poem that was i loved it so much di that was really nice cute and a really very romantic poem...sooo nicee just loved it like anything i have never sucha gr8 poet like you ever in my life i just love your poems like anything...although it was you second one but still i just loved it to the core...the bestest, romantic most awesomest poem i have ever read in my life :D

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

sweetdesire

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "In True Love with.. (Page 3)" in Writers Corner forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

sweetdesire

IF-Stunnerz

sweetdesire

Joined: 11 July 2010

Posts: 26039

Posted: 17 August 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jannat4ever

**reserved**
yipeee ...
yipeee
yipeee ...yipeee
dhinchak ...Dancingdhinchak...Dancing...i m the first one...Dancing.wowhhh party time...Party
laallallal lallalalla lallalalla ...Cool...Day Dreaming
now coming to the above master piece
...

i m totally speechless yar...but still it was fabulous
imply unbelievable...
loved d way you flawlessly personified happiness and pain...jaana you wrote in a beautiful way...words meant a lot...it sounds like such a amazing story...
emotions felt so true n realistic...
believe me jaana i have never seen such a meaningful and amazingly written poem ever in my life....as i m not a poem lover but after reading this i fell in love with your poem...all emotions were clearly expressed that made me like OMG she wrote this...Clap hats off to you for this one and now dont you dare to underestimate yourself...i m gonna kill you if you did...now back to topic...

The whole concept of happiness and pain was just unbelievable...so well written...i just loved it...


He was PAIN, who shared my loneliness

And gave me the vigor of fight!!


He didn't hold my hand, (unlike happiness),

Instead entwined his finger with mine,


His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes


Happiness is just an occasional infatuation,

FEEL IT, let it go in vain!!!..

But life smiles and dances, only when

You fall in True love with PAIN!!!


above lines were truly outstanding...touched my heart...so Beautifully written love
 
keep up ur beautiful work mam...see you have done such a wonderful job...
thanx 4 d pm..(ur farz...hehehe..Wink)
continue soon


take care
lots of love
your's sweetheart
jannat




wwooohhh what a celebration yaar..good going..Tongue...Awww just love you so much My sweetheart for such a lovely and heart touching commentsHug...you know na wt it means for me...I am glad that you like my work so muchEmbarrassed...your words alwaazz encourage me to do more...please alwazz with me...

Lots of Love
GEET
(ur jaana)





Edited by sweetdesire - 17 August 2011 at 8:59am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

jannat4ever

sweetdesire

IF-Stunnerz

sweetdesire

Joined: 11 July 2010

Posts: 26039

Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neha2607

wow...
beautifully written, i loved the way u expressed every word which were filled with emotions...


Hey dear
Thanks a lot for ur sweet commentsSmile
I am so glad that u like it

sweetdesire

IF-Stunnerz

sweetdesire

Joined: 11 July 2010

Posts: 26039

Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Harneetluvesksg

beautifully written :D 

harneet <3 


Hey Harneet dear
Thanks a lot for liking my work...
Smile

sweetdesire

IF-Stunnerz

sweetdesire

Joined: 11 July 2010

Posts: 26039

Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

beautiful...

each n every word was filled wid emotions...

really touching...

thnx for the pm...



Hey dear
Thanks alot for ur sweet comment
I am glad you like it
Smile

sweetdesire

IF-Stunnerz

sweetdesire

Joined: 11 July 2010

Posts: 26039

Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sejal719

WOW geet this so soo touching and awesome


i must say you have a talent for writing such beautiful poems :)

ur the best and the poem is so true... it also encouraging so keep up the good work and im waiting for the next one :D


Hey Sejal
I am glad you like my workSmile
Aww you are so sweet
Thank you so much

sweetdesire

IF-Stunnerz

sweetdesire

Joined: 11 July 2010

Posts: 26039

Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meeru_s_armaan

beautiful geet...

loved it



I am glad you like my work
Thanks for ur sweet comment
Smile

sweetdesire

IF-Stunnerz

sweetdesire

Joined: 11 July 2010

Posts: 26039

Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DrArmaan_Gupta

Geet...my love...
it was splendid!!!!! you wrote beautifully dear...i could feel the emotion...i loved the way...u wrote in such a simple way...but the words meant a lot...i was almost in tears...
for some reason i was imagining Armaan and riddhima untill the cheating part and then my mind just went blank...
i couldnot imagine Armaan and riddhima anymore...
 
Cause Armaan would never cause any pain for his basket...
 
keep up ur beautiful work...
 
luv yahh sweetie xx
Meghana xx


Hey Meghna
Thanks a a lot for ur Sweet commentsSmile
I am so glad that u like my work
yaah you are right
Armaan never ever cause any pain to his basket
Loves u alot

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
A True Love Story Sophia21 5 45049 05 May 2011 at 5:28am
By StrangernMoscow
~*Splitzhill*~*true love isn't always easy*

2

_Ashy_ 13 1535 05 February 2010 at 7:40am
By safeplacetoland
The true Mental Case - One Shot Story

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Bhaskar.T 59 4705 03 August 2009 at 7:57am
By unknowndesires.
Promise...story of true friendship Pg2

2 3

amail1601 17 2419 17 June 2008 at 11:59am
By -Preeti-
TRUE COLORS...1-Shot*~*~*~*~*

2 3

Mosammad 23 1356 10 May 2008 at 6:00pm
By Mosammad

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Writers Corner Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.