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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
OMG! di...sucha a nice poem that was i loved it so much di that was really nice cute and a really very romantic poem...sooo nicee just loved it like anything i have never sucha gr8 poet like you ever in my life i just love your poems like anything...although it was you second one but still i just loved it to the core...the bestest, romantic most awesomest poem i have ever read in my life :D

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jannat4ever

**reserved**
yipeee ...
yipeee
yipeee ...yipeee
dhinchak ...Dancingdhinchak...Dancing...i m the first one...Dancing.wowhhh party time...Party
laallallal lallalalla lallalalla ...Cool...Day Dreaming
now coming to the above master piece
...

i m totally speechless yar...but still it was fabulous
imply unbelievable...
loved d way you flawlessly personified happiness and pain...jaana you wrote in a beautiful way...words meant a lot...it sounds like such a amazing story...
emotions felt so true n realistic...
believe me jaana i have never seen such a meaningful and amazingly written poem ever in my life....as i m not a poem lover but after reading this i fell in love with your poem...all emotions were clearly expressed that made me like OMG she wrote this...Clap hats off to you for this one and now dont you dare to underestimate yourself...i m gonna kill you if you did...now back to topic...

The whole concept of happiness and pain was just unbelievable...so well written...i just loved it...


He was PAIN, who shared my loneliness

And gave me the vigor of fight!!


He didn't hold my hand, (unlike happiness),

Instead entwined his finger with mine,


His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes


Happiness is just an occasional infatuation,

FEEL IT, let it go in vain!!!..

But life smiles and dances, only when

You fall in True love with PAIN!!!


above lines were truly outstanding...touched my heart...so Beautifully written love
 
keep up ur beautiful work mam...see you have done such a wonderful job...
thanx 4 d pm..(ur farz...hehehe..Wink)
continue soon


take care
lots of love
your's sweetheart
jannat




wwooohhh what a celebration yaar..good going..Tongue...Awww just love you so much My sweetheart for such a lovely and heart touching commentsHug...you know na wt it means for me...I am glad that you like my work so muchEmbarrassed...your words alwaazz encourage me to do more...please alwazz with me...

Lots of Love
GEET
(ur jaana)





Edited by sweetdesire - 17 August 2011 at 8:59am

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neha2607

wow...
beautifully written, i loved the way u expressed every word which were filled with emotions...


Hey dear
Thanks a lot for ur sweet commentsSmile
I am so glad that u like it

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Harneetluvesksg

beautifully written :D 

harneet <3 


Hey Harneet dear
Thanks a lot for liking my work...
Smile
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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

beautiful...

each n every word was filled wid emotions...

really touching...

thnx for the pm...



Hey dear
Thanks alot for ur sweet comment
I am glad you like it
Smile
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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sejal719

WOW geet this so soo touching and awesome


i must say you have a talent for writing such beautiful poems :)

ur the best and the poem is so true... it also encouraging so keep up the good work and im waiting for the next one :D


Hey Sejal
I am glad you like my workSmile
Aww you are so sweet
Thank you so much

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meeru_s_armaan

beautiful geet...

loved it



I am glad you like my work
Thanks for ur sweet comment
Smile
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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DrArmaan_Gupta

Geet...my love...
it was splendid!!!!! you wrote beautifully dear...i could feel the emotion...i loved the way...u wrote in such a simple way...but the words meant a lot...i was almost in tears...
for some reason i was imagining Armaan and riddhima untill the cheating part and then my mind just went blank...
i couldnot imagine Armaan and riddhima anymore...
 
Cause Armaan would never cause any pain for his basket...
 
keep up ur beautiful work...
 
luv yahh sweetie xx
Meghana xx


Hey Meghna
Thanks a a lot for ur Sweet commentsSmile
I am so glad that u like my work
yaah you are right
Armaan never ever cause any pain to his basket
Loves u alot

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