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DrArmaan_Gupta

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
Geet...my love...
it was splendid!!!!! you wrote beautifully dear...i could feel the emotion...i loved the way...u wrote in such a simple way...but the words meant a lot...i was almost in tears...
for some reason i was imagining Armaan and riddhima untill the cheating part and then my mind just went blank...
i couldnot imagine Armaan and riddhima anymore...
 
Cause Armaan would never cause any pain for his basket...
 
keep up ur beautiful work...
 
luv yahh sweetie xx
Meghana xx

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
hey shona
speeclesss dear
after reading In True Love with...it was awesome dearStarClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap...
all emtion feel really so true n realistic...
i m love this poem dear so somuch...i goosebmps after reading this...

i can't explaain what i feel u know na i m not good explaining my feeling...
just want to say
clapping with standing position...hats off dearStarClapStarStarStarClapClapClapClapClap...loved it so much & love u too to write poem...
thanks for wring such a  beautiful poem..now i m waitng so many poems, ff & Os from uuu...i want more samjhi
love u shona


Edited by shilpI007 - 14 August 2011 at 12:07am

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
awesome awesome awesome
tooo ksgoood
just loved how u beautifully personified happiness n pain
u r an amazing poet n friend
so plzzz do write more
lots of lov
vaaniSmile

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..KaJenDelena..

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
WOW! Meri sweetu Pyari Geet!
 
This was simply unbelievable. Never seen such meaningful and beautifully written poem ever in my short life. Simply breath-taking. The whole story and the contrast between Happiness and pain was just simply, amazing, beautifully and unbelievably well written! Geet, seriously you have suprised me with your wiritng! Its just breath-taking.
 
I Love the whole story. It was a simple story, Happiness breezed past her life but cast a shadow of pain in her, for seemingly forever. Loved it! Truly Loved it! I loved the interlock of her lovestory in the form of happiness and pain. I L.O.V.E.D. I.T!
 

"His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes"

 
These two lines among others truly touched my heart and made me gasp. Beautifully written. Bring them on! Keep the poems coming, please!?
 
 
Love Priyanka <3 ;)


Edited by ..KaJenDelena.. - 14 August 2011 at 5:39am

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
hey geet
u r really an ausum poet yaar
i really loved the poem
d emotions were clearly expressed
do write more
nd thx fr d pm

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lavanya_armaan

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 1:53am | IP Logged
amazinggg...u are srslii a poet di...
great,,,
i lovedd it alotBig smile

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 3:56am | IP Logged
comment edited on page 1...:)

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Ethereal-Path

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Oh NO! m late..

resss

OMG!! Where were you since so long? Shocked

Beautiful <3

*Edited*
Hey Geee Hug

You know I was so surprised to see a PM. And when I read the poem , i was like 'WOW'. It is intense, deep and touching. Realistic in every sense.

The title is so apt. I wonder if something else would better befit your poetry. This is like most suited and attention grabbing.

Each and every line was awesome. Like m sure, everyone would have found themselves connected while reading any or every line. Do I need to mention it was mature! The mood which you've used in your poetry is one of those that fascinates me.
There are actually 4-5 lines which i loved a lot but the last 4 took my heart away. They're beautiful <3 M in awe.

You surely should write more. Poetry or FF or both. I would love to read something more from you. Nice writing skill, you've. M surely gonna treasure this poem =)

Love ya
Vini



Edited by coolvini4u - 16 August 2011 at 1:11pm

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