In True Love with.. - Page 3

Originally posted by: sejal719

WOW geet this so soo touching and awesome

i must say you have a talent for writing such beautiful poems :)

ur the best and the poem is so true... it also encouraging so keep up the good work and im waiting for the next one :D

Originally posted by: meeru_s_armaan

beautiful geet...

loved it

Originally posted by: DrArmaan_Gupta

Geet...my love...

it was splendid!!!!! you wrote beautifully dear...i could feel the emotion...i loved the way...u wrote in such a simple way...but the words meant a lot...i was almost in tears...

for some reason i was imagining Armaan and riddhima untill the cheating part and then my mind just went blank...

i couldnot imagine Armaan and riddhima anymore...

 

Cause Armaan would never cause any pain for his basket...

 

keep up ur beautiful work...

 

luv yahh sweetie xx

Meghana xx

Originally posted by: shilpI007

hey shona
speeclesss dear
after reading In True Love with...it was awesome dear👏...
all emtion feel really so true n realistic...
i m love this poem dear so somuch...i goosebmps after reading this...
i can't explaain what i feel u know na i m not good explaining my feeling...
just want to say
clapping with standing position...hats off dear👏...loved it so much & love u too to write poem...
thanks for wring such a  beautiful poem..now i m waitng so many poems, ff & Os from uuu...i want more samjhi
love u shona

Originally posted by: vaaniKSGmallik

awesome awesome awesome

tooo ksgoood

just loved how u beautifully personified happiness n pain

u r an amazing poet n friend

so plzzz do write more

lots of lov

vaani😊

Originally posted by: ..KaJenDelena..

WOW! Meri sweetu Pyari Geet!

 

This was simply unbelievable. Never seen such meaningful and beautifully written poem ever in my short life. Simply breath-taking. The whole story and the contrast between Happiness and pain was just simply, amazing, beautifully and unbelievably well written! Geet, seriously you have suprised me with your wiritng! Its just breath-taking.

 

I Love the whole story. It was a simple story, Happiness breezed past her life but cast a shadow of pain in her, for seemingly forever. Loved it! Truly Loved it! I loved the interlock of her lovestory in the form of happiness and pain. I L.O.V.E.D. I.T!

 

"His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes"

 

These two lines among others truly touched my heart and made me gasp. Beautifully written. Bring them on! Keep the poems coming, please!?

 

 

Love Priyanka <3 ;)

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

hey geet

u r really an ausum poet yaar

i really loved the poem

d emotions were clearly expressed

do write more

nd thx fr d pm

Originally posted by: lavanya_armaan

amazinggg...u are srslii a poet di...

great,,,

i lovedd it alot😃

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Oh NO! m late..

resss

OMG!! Where were you since so long? 😲
Beautiful <3

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Hey Geee 🤗

You know I was so surprised to see a PM. And when I read the poem , i was like 'WOW'. It is intense, deep and touching. Realistic in every sense.

The title is so apt. I wonder if something else would better befit your poetry. This is like most suited and attention grabbing.

Each and every line was awesome. Like m sure, everyone would have found themselves connected while reading any or every line. Do I need to mention it was mature! The mood which you've used in your poetry is one of those that fascinates me.
There are actually 4-5 lines which i loved a lot but the last 4 took my heart away. They're beautiful <3 M in awe.

You surely should write more. Poetry or FF or both. I would love to read something more from you. Nice writing skill, you've. M surely gonna treasure this poem =)

Love ya
Vini

Originally posted by: mehak_arora

OMG! di...sucha a nice poem that was i loved it so much di that was really nice cute and a really very romantic poem...sooo nicee just loved it like anything i have never sucha gr8 poet like you ever in my life i just love your poems like anything...although it was you second one but still i just loved it to the core...the bestest, romantic most awesomest poem i have ever read in my life :D