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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Hey All...I am Geet and I am here again to Post one of my CreationsEmbarrassed...Thanks a lot for all ur support...hope you like this one also...Smile

                                
                                                      In True Love with...



Holding his (Happiness) hands, the days went by,

I chirped like a lil' bird

With hopes brimming, to fly high!

For with him,

Each morning promised life,

The day seemed more bright

Love-laden were my evenings,

And mirth rolled through the night!

 

But a sudden aghast!!!!!

A cold breeze blew

That tested our togetherness,

& found he was untrue'''''.

Yesss'he was not true

Happiness was a traitor!!!!!!

Who MOVED ON, with feathers trimmed?

Ahh! Why did I trust such a cheater?????

 

Was our togetherness unreal?

Or he "MY happiness";

This puzzle could never be solved

He vanished as if a mirage!

And colors from life's canvas dissolved''.

 

As I was forwarding,

Towards the darkness of dejection,

I felt someone clinching me tight,

He was PAIN, who shared my loneliness

And gave me the vigor of fight!!

 

He didn't hold my hand, (unlike happiness),

Instead entwined his finger with mine,

& said ' "I shan't leave you easily honey",

Shuddering me,

Imbibed his presence, divine!!

 

Divine, as it was he (Pain),

Who helped me connect with the supreme

PAIN discovered the warrior in me,

And made me REALIZE MY DREAM!!

 

His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes

That taught me play fair, by washing my inner self;

Re-defining, 'lost me', amidst those cries

 

Pain made me realize...

 

Happiness is just an occasional infatuation,

FEEL IT, let it go in vain!!!..

But life smiles and dances, only when

You fall in True love with PAIN!!!


So this is it guys...Hope you all like it...Do hit the like tab and Plzz comments...It means a lot to me...Embarrassed


Lots of Love

GEET

 





Edited by sweetdesire - 14 August 2011 at 12:11am

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jannat4ever Goldie
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
**reserved**
yipeee ...
yipeee
yipeee ...yipeee
dhinchak ...Dancingdhinchak...Dancing...i m the first one...Dancing.wowhhh party time...Party
laallallal lallalalla lallalalla ...Cool...Day Dreaming
now coming to the above master piece
...

i m totally speechless yar...but still it was fabulous
imply unbelievable...
loved d way you flawlessly personified happiness and pain...jaana you wrote in a beautiful way...words meant a lot...it sounds like such a amazing story...
emotions felt so true n realistic...
believe me jaana i have never seen such a meaningful and amazingly written poem ever in my life....as i m not a poem lover but after reading this i fell in love with your poem...all emotions were clearly expressed that made me like OMG she wrote this...Clap Clap Clap Clap hats off to you for this one and now dont you dare to underestimate yourself...i m gonna kill you if you did...now back to topic...

The whole concept of happiness and pain was just unbelievable...so well written...i just loved it...


He was PAIN, who shared my loneliness

And gave me the vigor of fight!!


He didn't hold my hand, (unlike happiness),

Instead entwined his finger with mine,


His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes


Happiness is just an occasional infatuation,

FEEL IT, let it go in vain!!!..

But life smiles and dances, only when

You fall in True love with PAIN!!!


above lines were truly outstanding...touched my heart...so Beautifully written love
 
keep up ur beautiful work mam...see you have done such a wonderful job...
thanx 4 d pm..(ur farz...hehehe..Wink)
continue soon


take care
lots of love
your's sweetheart
jannat





Edited by jannat4ever - 15 August 2011 at 3:54am

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged
wow...
beautifully written, i loved the way u expressed every word which were filled with emotions...

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
beautifully written :D 

harneet <3 

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 3:43pm | IP Logged

beautiful...

each n every word was filled wid emotions...

really touching...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
WOW geet this so soo touching and awesome


i must say you have a talent for writing such beautiful poems :)

ur the best and the poem is so true... it also encouraging so keep up the good work and im waiting for the next one :D

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 6:14pm | IP Logged

beautiful geet...

loved it

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