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Abhiya FF: Love conquers All Chapter 11 PG 24

HallyH IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged

Guys this is different from my other FF. I hope u lyk it

Chapter 1:
Abhay is locked in a room with silver chains around his neck. There is a glass wall between him and Pia Who is banging on the glass so he can listen to her. Two guards grab Pia and take her away from Abhay. Abhay finds it hard to look while Pia is screaming 'Abhay'. Pia gets the guards off her for 5 seconds and runs back towards the glass. Pia is screaming at Abhay while banging the glass with her hands yet there is no answer.The guards take Pia again and this time Abhay runs towards the glass but the silver chains pull him back. He starts to cry and has blood coming from his eyes.He cannot bear the pain any longer so he curls himself on the floor, trying to block Pia's pain out of his head. Abhay is lying on the floor and starts to remember how he and Pia first met.

I know this chapter is short but if u like it I will continue?


Edited by HallyH - 17 March 2013 at 3:23pm

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M2NZ Senior Member
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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Wow
Awesome strt
Would like to read further
Update soon.
Pari-Gupta IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
nice start
continue soon
purple_shadoz Goldie
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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
nice concept...tinue soon...loads of lv...Smile
rosamale Goldie
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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Clapwow! it was awesome.Clap entirely different. Clappoor abhiya. Cryupdate soon ok. please pm me.Smile
Akshi0019 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 12:03am | IP Logged
nyc start cont soon...
crystalalena IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
please update soon.it is very nice,
rashika27.1997 Senior Member
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
great start dear
its very touching
continue soon
plz pm me when u update

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