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~Broken Wings~ ArHi FF (Epilogue:Pg 117) (Page 9)

Prinsesse.Suvi IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged

Palooo :'(

Inni lambi comment essay ishtyle likhi thi...post reply press kiya and it came up as internet disconnected :'( saara chala gaya and now I'm too annoyed to write it again...
tomorrow, pakka
<3
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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
PalluuuHug

Welcome back hope exams thik thak.. hogaye?. Are u done or have a break for some time..? 

I started reading.. Loving it.. Will put up mu comments later... But cant wait to read more..




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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
i have been reading ur ff today and found it great...will be waiting for more updates to know the history between khushi and arnav
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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Hailla...I love this Arnav...what a KAMEENA...the skirt almost suits you!!!LOL  looking forward to another update soon...dying to see the relationship they shared...and how he crawls under her skin in the present track!!!
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
awesome update.
mindblowing.waiting eagerly.
raunika
Prinsesse.Suvi IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged

So he was meant to be Arnav Singhania…mystery start *puts on detective glasses* I love your description of him..arrogant sa, muscly sa..hayye! LOL He's taller than her…she jealous?

Yeah, she meets Arnav in a French Vineyard….how exciting!!! They can pick grapes together! O.o….and now she wants to faint…and I bet in his arms…but then she'll wreck her Iron Girl reputation, na?

Ooh Arnav doesn't like her dismissal….but ofcourse, Khushi, he is ur papa ke best friend ka beta…khak far acquaintance! Oh oh oh muscles tensed…haye haye…and he's a lil bit considerate too…or just professional, I guess…

ROFL @ Zaib's attempt to be nice

Ooh so Khushi's trying to be professional, too….and Arnav's here! *blush*

LMAO..Iron Girl and Magnet!!!

And he's ignoring her….oh oh oh!! He found out about the mucked up accounts…replace the m with an f, but anyways…..Arnav turned Raizada LOL….Khushi's ready with an answer, too…haha Khushi's old descriptions funny….ooh she hates being beautiful…that's interesting…he knows her well, aye?

Order karta hai yeh Arnav chokra…but then the chori doesn't take orders! And Zaib, in between, lost and confused bechara..and Khushi, Arnav jaise bhi "caress" kare, it should feel good

Haye, Arnav talks like a school principal… 'come in your casuals'

"The skirt is pretty. It almost suits you,"

ROFL at that…he likes to pick on Khushi too, I guess….and he licked her neck…with his breath, I mean…LOL

Funny sight…La and Khushi watching chick flick..and La is such a typical bimbo baby….and Arnav topless outside Khushi's window…WHATTT?!! Kaash I had such a nice view outside my window TOO! *pouts* Ooh so they know each other from childhood, and their families are related.. :/

Haha first meeting and catfight…nice start! GREEK GOD!! Bwahaa LMAO

Drinking wateerr!! Oooh make some of it drip down his abs, pleaaajjj Pallooo

OMG I can't believe La just did that…and now Arnav thinks Khushi called him handsome!!


"sir values punctuality"

I said he was a school principal…lol so now she's gonna wear another skirt to get back to him…

Fantabulous update Pallo, and I hope you didn't mind my blabber :P

geet.a IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
jhallo me finally caught up!!

it's AWESOME stuff love!

continue when u feel like..but i can't wait very long!

i love the way u described asr n khushi both..
And zaib too- cute character.. :D

the general context is very very nice too..
aah i'll just say i LOVE it!
xo
Lhethal.Me IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Ammie-

awesome update..loved it..specially the way you described arnav..

ohhh so khushi and arnav know eachother...m so looking forward to finding out more about their past..!!

blah is being insane and s**tty...as usual...lol

i wonder wat khushi is going to wear for dinner..m sure watever it is will blow arnav-turned-raizada's mind lol...update soon..!!



LOL Glad you liked it Ammie!
Will update soonishBig smile
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