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~Broken Wings~ ArHi FF (Epilogue:Pg 117) (Page 7)

nehaahmad Senior Member
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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 5:45pm | IP Logged
Awesome!!! Palo good job babe! can you please add me to your pm list.

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NaDzGirl

ooohh so kushi & arnie are childhood pals?!?! interesting!
loved da flashback more pallo Day Dreaming can sooo imagine blah goin blah blah on arnie boy *chuckles* u can't blame dat bimbo cuz our arnie's too hawt damn it Day Dreaming

so what's our girl gonna wear for this 'informal' dinner?!?!?
is she gonna sport a skimpy outfit?!?! ooohh arnie's gonna faint ROFL
fab update darlin!!! waitin for more...


Me too Nadzie...
I find the FlashBacks interesting.

Blah...going blah blah LOL
Update cuming up soonish!

Originally posted by cindrella255

Haiya Pallo! Thnx for updating 2day! Had a gr8 time in this Boring weekend!

Awww ASR= Attitude + Steamy Hot + Royal... I like this Khushi! Tom boy types not caring bout luks!
For each ur description I go to my dreamland n imagine him!Wink

ASR complementing Khushi!!!! I din't expect... So Khushi is gonna were skirt for dinner!

Lavanya is a spoilt brat!

Lovely update! Waiting their encounter @ dinner!




Thanks dear.
Am glad you liked itLOL
ASR taunted Khushi more than complimented herLOL

I'm gonna throw GIRL POWER back on his face!ROFL
Neways will be updating soon enuff.



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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dusk

OMG *fainted* at ur description d way u described arnavz features and all wz jst awsumClap waiting for ur next update Big smile


Thanks dear
Glad you liked it...
Barun is a good looking chap...makes it easier to describe ASR.
LOL

Originally posted by -RushTrip-

Read the first chapter

and wow..as usual...your sense of humour..and details... are fab..

i am waiting for the rain and grapes..connection...

rain and blood connection..

i love the intrigue you have built up already!!

going to read the next chapter now!!


Hug Glad you liked it Vrush!

However hard I try to make story go tragic it turns out comic!
Wonder if I'll ever be able to achieve that "pain" I want to put into the story...
Neways gonna update soonish
U bettah read the second part and temme how u like it



Originally posted by aahana1

OMG soo lovely Clap
Arnav's soo HOT Day Dreaming and the skirt is pretty ha? Arnav babu wats going on? Wink
Loved this chapter!!!


Thanks sweetie Big smile
Glad you liked the chapter.


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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anita_21492

I loved this update
Arnav sounds hotter than usualDay Dreaming
You have to continue


LOLLOLLOL I have a tendency to go M&B style while describing the leads..
Glad you liked it...
Will continue soonish


Originally posted by mahiem94

Great update arnav thinks the skirt is preety and it suits kushi  wats going on with arnav haha. So is kushi gonna wear a skimpy skirt then arnav definitely gonna faint LOL   continue soon.


LOLLOLLOL
Faint?? And den Khushi catches him...and dey have an eyelock...LOL Wow I'm loving this role-reversal!
Glad you liked the part dear.


Originally posted by nehaahmad

Awesome!!! Palo good job babe! can you please add me to your pm list.



Glad you liked it sweetie.
Will defo add you Big smile

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
Read this earlier, but didn't get a chance to comment. You are a very talented story teller. I was hooked from the very first paragraph. Hope you continue soon.Thumbs Up
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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 7:02pm | IP Logged
omggg pallo woww amazingg!!!!
im just speechless readin both chapters  so much detail and i can imagine it all   i loved the flashback got to see how khushi was  and arnav well i get speechless anyway abt him hehehe
and i cnt wait for moree
continue  veryy soon!!
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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sbp1971

Read this earlier, but didn't get a chance to comment. You are a very talented story teller. I was hooked from the very first paragraph. Hope you continue soon.Thumbs Up


Awww...dats okay...
Thanks for liking it dear...
Will continue soonish.Big smile


Originally posted by angelic shaz

omggg pallo woww amazingg!!!!
im just speechless readin both chapters  so much detail and i can imagine it all   i loved the flashback got to see how khushi was  and arnav well i get speechless anyway abt him hehehe
and i cnt wait for moree
continue  veryy soon!!


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Glad you liked it gal
Will update soonish no worries.
Big smile

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Love this FF! Everything is different, the whole story! :D I love Khushi's character :) Completely out of the world types :) The first two chapters were perfection :D You've got to update soon :) I am loving it. Would really want to know what their past is. That flashback... Arnav's description made me go red in the face Blushing I could so imagine La The Blah going crazy over him LOL I am looking forward to what Khushi will wear for the informal dinner and their interaction ;) Update soon :D And please do PM me :) 

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