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NadzGirl...

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged

ahhh loved da first chapter!

arnav singh raizada pluckin grapes?!?!

man ur imagination rocks gucci chappals ROFL

i love zaib!! da first guy who came to mind was zayed khan with his getto in main hoon na ROFL

so yeahh i love zaib!!

hmm... laksh sharma!! this man sounds like a real pain in da ass kinda dude. lot like ASR in da show... so if this guy's a total nut ball, our arnav bituwa can't be more hyper attitude wala rite?!?! or am i just expecting too much???!

loved kushi... she's sweet and much mature than da show, like u'v mentioned. ur kushi reminds me of sonam kapoor in aisha and don't stare at me cz im pretty clueless myself too ROFL

loved it pallo Hug

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged

awesome update

continue soon

-Ammie-

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged

wow..yaar amazing update loved it..!!

i just loved the intro of all the characters...specially khushi and arnav...

zaib seems like a nice guy too...

can't wait to see how they react when they see eachother..

update soon..!!

Edited by -Ammie- - 14 August 2011 at 5:34am

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Yazzy91

Wow interesting FF! please add me to the pm list!

Sure sweetie!
Glad you liked it! Big smile

Originally posted by FebruaryFlower

Heya Pallo!!! Hug

I loved the chapter. It was really refreshing to read about a different Khushi. Zaib is a complete sweetheart!!

Looking forward to more of Arnav's character being shown and how he reacts and responds to Khushi, and vice versa!!!

Thanks a bunch for the PM darling, and update soon. I'm really looking forward to the next part!!!

Glad you enjoyed it dear.
Yep Zaib is a complete sweetheart.
Yer ASR is coming packaged in the next update...so stay tuned! LOL

Originally posted by anita_21492

It is simply amazing

i am speechless

not a cliffhanger, i am craving more

please update soon

Thanks a ton sweetie!
Glad you liked it!
Next part will up soon enough Big smile

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rsk16

Really luved ur update Heart

good job.plz continue soon.

raunika

Thanks a ton raunika.
U have a beautiful name
Will update soon no worries!

Originally posted by aahana1

Omg such a beautiful FF !!

Lovely please add me in your PM list and continue soon. xxx

Surely sweetie!
Glad you enjoyed the first part.
Will continue soon enuff! Big smile

Originally posted by Lily2011

gr8 update. plz update next part soon. thnx 4 d pm.

Update coming very soon dear
Glad you liked it! Big smile

Lhethal.Me

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged

Originally posted by alu5123

Interesting story,mature KKG!!! Could yu please add me to your PM list. Thanks

Thanks a lot dear.
Will defo add u to the list.

Originally posted by Suvi7884

I like your ff wali Khushi more than the show one *looks around for flying chappals or tomatoes* Whatever..its true LOL

Winery...aahhh how nice does that sound...very romantic...and natural...hayye Embarrassed

and that too in France!

She's a tomboy lol...and she has a past...kaisa past? Ermm

Zaib sounds cute...Zaib and Jannat...adorable..Jannat is such a sweet name...you know, I know this chick names Farishta...how sweet!

Ew, that Laksh dude called her depressing..I don't like Laksh..he seems like the kind that sits back and makes you do all the hard work and then takes the credit for it

When Zaib said that 'will he be young...etc' wali line, for a second I wondered whether a guy could be called Jannat ROFL

Ooh Winery is in loss...toh why did Arnav buy it? :S Is he gonna bhadkofy like a volcano when he finds out? Blushing

LOL She did wear a skirt!!

annnd Arnav is here Cool

'Twas an awesome start Pallo...update sooon!!

*Pallo shakes her head*
Gawd! Those many questions
Suvi dun worry I'll be ready with medical assistance if neone injures u for liking ma FF wali Khushi more! LOL

MAIN HOON NA *Self pats*
Will update soon enuff dear.
Am absolutely jobless neways! Wink

Originally posted by kins103

awesome update

continue soon

Thanks dear.
Will update soon enuff!

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged

Originally posted by paintthetown

i also want that pm wrapped in gold delivered specially to my inbox.meri inbox ki shaan bar jayegi! and beautiful prologue pallo rani! the cauliflower bit got me rofl-ing! LOL

*slaps head hard*
forgot to read the update at first! Ouch

but bohut accha tha.one tight hug at my babe! Hug

keep writing!

Twixy no worries...
I'll send a platinum coated pm just for you!
And glad you liked the update!
Stay tuned dearie Big smile

Originally posted by BengaliWisdom

Loved it! I really like how you chose to keep Khushi all solemn, it's a nice change :)

The concept of the vineyards makes such a different and pretty image in my head ^_^ Very earthy and fresh Smile

Zaib is a cool guy lol. And Jannat is a very beautiful name :) Hope to read more scenes of Zaib!

I badly want to know Khushi's past! And I'm getting the feeling that she and Arnav were together many years ago Shocked

Pleej continueee! Tongue

Great guess and it almost hit the mark...
Someway u r ryt and in another way u ain't...
Neways will update the part soon enuff so that u know.
Glad you enjoyed the part. Big smile

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged

Originally posted by NaDzGirl

ahhh loved da first chapter!

arnav singh raizada pluckin grapes?!?!

man ur imagination rocks gucci chappals ROFL

i love zaib!! da first guy who came to mind was zayed khan with his getto in main hoon na ROFL

so yeahh i love zaib!!

loved kushi... she's sweet and much mature than da show, like u'v mentioned. ur kushi reminds me of sonam kapoor in aisha and don't stare at me cz im pretty clueless myself too ROFL

loved it pallo Hug

Zayed Khan!!!
Yeah Zaib does sound the types!

Laksh is yer regular MORON! And if ASR is more moronish o not...u've gotta wait to see!

Sonam Kapoor in AISHA?? Gawd!

Glad u liked the part Nadz! Hug

Originally posted by -Ammie-

wow..yaar amazing update loved it..!!

i just loved the intro of all the characters...specially khushi and arnav...

zaib seems like a nice guy too...

can't wait to see how they react when they see eachother..

update soon..!!

Thanks dear.
Glad u liked the part.
Stay tuned. Next part will be up soon enuff!

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