Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   

~Broken Wings~ ArHi FF (Epilogue:Pg 117) (Page 5)

HappyMelody IF-Stunnerz
HappyMelody
HappyMelody

Joined: 08 April 2010
Posts: 39666

Posted: 14 August 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged
ahhh loved da first chapter! 
arnav singh raizada pluckin grapes?!?!
man ur imagination rocks gucci chappals ROFL ROFL ROFL

i love zaib!! da first guy who came to mind was zayed khan with his getto in main hoon na ROFL so yeahh i love zaib!! 

hmm... laksh sharma!! this man sounds like a real pain in da ass kinda dude. lot like ASR in da show... so if this guy's a total nut ball, our arnav bituwa can't be more hyper attitude wala rite?!?! or am i just expecting too much???!

loved kushi... she's sweet and much mature than da show, like u'v mentioned. ur kushi reminds me of sonam kapoor in aisha and don't stare at me cz im pretty clueless myself too ROFL

loved it pallo Hug
-Kina- IF-Sizzlerz
-Kina-
-Kina-

Joined: 02 September 2010
Posts: 17412

Posted: 14 August 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged
awesome update
continue soon
-Ammie- IF-Rockerz
-Ammie-
-Ammie-

Joined: 02 January 2010
Posts: 9161

Posted: 14 August 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
wow..yaar amazing update loved it..!!
i just loved the intro of all the characters...specially khushi and arnav...
zaib seems like a nice guy too...
can't wait to see how they react when they see eachother..
update soon..!!


Edited by -Ammie- - 14 August 2011 at 5:34am
Lhethal.Me IF-Sizzlerz
Lhethal.Me
Lhethal.Me

Joined: 04 April 2007
Posts: 10600

Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Yazzy91

Wow interesting FF! please add me to the pm list!


Sure sweetie!
Glad you liked it!
Big smile

Originally posted by FebruaryFlower

Heya Pallo!!!Hug
I loved the chapter. It was really refreshing to read about a different Khushi. Zaib is a complete sweetheart!!
Looking forward to more of Arnav's character being shown and how he reacts and responds to Khushi, and vice versa!!!
Thanks a bunch for the PM darling, and update soon. I'm really looking forward to the next part!!!


Glad you enjoyed it dear.Big smile
Yep Zaib is a complete sweetheart.
Yer ASR is coming packaged in the next update...so stay tuned!
LOL

Originally posted by anita_21492

It is simply amazing
i am speechless
not a cliffhanger, i am craving more
please update soon


Thanks a ton sweetie!
Glad you liked it!
Next part will up soon enough
Big smile
Lhethal.Me IF-Sizzlerz
Lhethal.Me
Lhethal.Me

Joined: 04 April 2007
Posts: 10600

Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rsk16

Really luved ur updateHeart
good job.plz continue soon.
raunika


Thanks a ton raunika.
U have a beautiful nameBig smile
Will update soon no worries!LOL


Originally posted by aahana1

Omg such a beautiful FF !!
Lovely please add me in your PM list and continue soon. xxx


Surely sweetie!
Glad you enjoyed the first part.
Will continue soon enuff!
Big smile

Originally posted by Lily2011

gr8 update. plz update next part soon. thnx 4 d pm.


Update coming very soon dear
Glad you liked it!
Big smile

Lhethal.Me IF-Sizzlerz
Lhethal.Me
Lhethal.Me

Joined: 04 April 2007
Posts: 10600

Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by alu5123

Interesting story,mature KKG!!! Could yu please add me to your PM list. Thanks


Thanks a lot dear.
Will defo add u to the list.


Originally posted by Suvi7884

I like your ff wali Khushi more than the show one *looks around for flying chappals or tomatoes* Whatever..its trueLOL Winery...aahhh how nice does that sound...very romantic...and natural...hayyeEmbarrassed and that too in France!
She's a tomboy lol...and she has a past...kaisa past?Ermm
Zaib sounds cute...Zaib and Jannat...adorable..Jannat is such a sweet name...you know, I know this chick names Farishta...how sweet!
Ew, that Laksh dude called her depressing..I don't like Laksh..he seems like the kind that sits back and makes you do all the hard work and then takes the credit for it
When Zaib said that 'will he be young...etc' wali line, for a second I wondered whether a guy could be called Jannat ROFL
Ooh Winery is in loss...toh why did Arnav buy it? :S Is he gonna bhadkofy like a volcano when he finds out?Blushing
LOL She did wear a skirt!!
annnd Arnav is hereCool
'Twas an awesome start Pallo...update sooon!!


*Pallo shakes her head*
Gawd! Those many questions LOLLOLLOL
Suvi dun worry I'll be ready with medical assistance if neone injures u for liking ma FF wali Khushi more!
LOL
MAIN HOON NA *Self pats*
Will update soon enuff dear.
Am absolutely jobless neways!
Wink

Originally posted by kins103

awesome update
continue soon


Thanks dear.Big smile
Will update soon enuff!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Prinsesse.Suvi

Lhethal.Me IF-Sizzlerz
Lhethal.Me
Lhethal.Me

Joined: 04 April 2007
Posts: 10600

Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by paintthetown


i also want that pm wrapped in gold delivered specially to my inbox.meri inbox ki shaan bar jayegi! and beautiful prologue pallo rani! the cauliflower bit got me rofl-ing!LOLLOLLOL

*slaps head hard*
forgot to read the update at first!Ouch
but bohut accha tha.one tight hug at my babe!Hug
keep writing!


Twixy no worries...
I'll send a platinum coated pm just for you!LOL
And glad you liked the update!
Stay tuned dearie
Big smile

Originally posted by BengaliWisdom

Loved it! I really like how you chose to keep Khushi all solemn, it's a nice change :) 

The concept of the vineyards makes such a different and pretty image in my head ^_^ Very earthy and fresh Smile

Zaib is a cool guy lol. And Jannat is a very beautiful name :) Hope to read more scenes of Zaib!

I badly want to know Khushi's past! And I'm getting the feeling that she and Arnav were together many years ago Shocked Pleej continueee! Tongue


Great guess and it almost hit the mark...LOL
Someway u r ryt and in another way u ain't...
Neways will update the part soon enuff so that u know.
Glad you enjoyed the part.
Big smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

SunriseGreen

Lhethal.Me IF-Sizzlerz
Lhethal.Me
Lhethal.Me

Joined: 04 April 2007
Posts: 10600

Posted: 14 August 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NaDzGirl

ahhh loved da first chapter! 
arnav singh raizada pluckin grapes?!?!
man ur imagination rocks gucci chappals ROFL ROFL ROFL

i love zaib!! da first guy who came to mind was zayed khan with his getto in main hoon na ROFL so yeahh i love zaib!! 

hmm... laksh sharma!! this man sounds like a real pain in da ass kinda dude. lot like ASR in da show... so if this guy's a total nut ball, our arnav bituwa can't be more hyper attitude wala rite?!?! or am i just expecting too much???!

loved kushi... she's sweet and much mature than da show, like u'v mentioned. ur kushi reminds me of sonam kapoor in aisha and don't stare at me cz im pretty clueless myself too ROFL

loved it pallo Hug


Zayed Khan!!! ROFLROFLROFL
Yeah Zaib does sound the types!

Laksh is yer regular MORON!LOL And if ASR is more moronish o not...u've gotta wait to see!

Sonam Kapoor in AISHA??ConfusedROFLROFLROFL Gawd!


Glad u liked the part Nadz!Hug

Originally posted by -Ammie-

wow..yaar amazing update loved it..!!
i just loved the intro of all the characters...specially khushi and arnav...
zaib seems like a nice guy too...
can't wait to see how they react when they see eachother..
update soon..!!


Thanks dear.
Glad u liked the part.
Stay tuned. Next part will be up soon enuff!Big smile




Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
FF: You complete me-6-Epilogue-Pg 17

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 30 31

Author: pickle6586   Replies: 243   Views: 47538

pickle6586 243 47538 08 December 2014 at 11:51pm by kabslocks
SS "Sorrow"(ARHI) epilogue 52(21/11)updated

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 59 60

Author: naddiya26   Replies: 476   Views: 112212

naddiya26 476 112212 15 August 2013 at 3:50pm by ongongong
Eternalsiddhima's(SR FF)- Wings of Love upd pg 21

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 22 23

Author: EternalKarSim   Replies: 180   Views: 14638

EternalKarSim 180 14638 15 March 2012 at 6:27am by mala1108
On the wings of Love...OS on Mayur

2

Author: DUGGUlicious   Replies: 15   Views: 1240

DUGGUlicious 15 1240 12 May 2010 at 7:34am by -afsha-
The darkness falls from wings of night [AR Story]

2 3 4

Author: -Sookie-   Replies: 26   Views: 3428

-Sookie- 26 3428 05 December 2009 at 6:48am by RadiantTreasure

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index