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~Broken Wings~ ArHi FF (Epilogue:Pg 117) (Page 4)

..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
It is simply amazing
i am speechless
not a cliffhanger, i am craving more
please update soon
rsk16 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Really luved ur updateHeart
good job.plz continue soon.
raunika
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Omg such a beautiful FF !!
Lovely please add me in your PM list and continue soon. xxx
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
gr8 update. plz update next part soon. thnx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
Interesting story,mature KKG!!! Could yu please add me to your PM list. Thanks
Prinsesse.Suvi IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
I like your ff wali Khushi more than the show one *looks around for flying chappals or tomatoes* Whatever..its trueLOL
Winery...aahhh how nice does that sound...very romantic...and natural...hayyeEmbarrassed and that too in France!
She's a tomboy lol...and she has a past...kaisa past?Ermm
Zaib sounds cute...Zaib and Jannat...adorable..Jannat is such a sweet name...you know, I know this chick names Farishta...how sweet!
Ew, that Laksh dude called her depressing..I don't like Laksh..he seems like the kind that sits back and makes you do all the hard work and then takes the credit for it
When Zaib said that 'will he be young...etc' wali line, for a second I wondered whether a guy could be called Jannat ROFL
Ooh Winery is in loss...toh why did Arnav buy it? :S Is he gonna bhadkofy like a volcano when he finds out?Blushing
LOL She did wear a skirt!!
annnd Arnav is hereCool
'Twas an awesome start Pallo...update sooon!!
5secsofsummer. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NaDzGirl

*nadz scratches her head and stares at da prologue*
what was dat?!?!!??! Pinch

pallooo my gucci chappals Hug
er excuse me?!!?! is dat a question to ask?!?! of course u MUST continue it warna nadz won't spare u doll Evil Smile

im waiting for my special royalish pm once u update da first chapter!!!
mwaaah


i also want that pm wrapped in gold delivered specially to my inbox.meri inbox ki shaan bar jayegi! and beautiful prologue pallo rani! the cauliflower bit got me rofl-ing!LOLLOLLOL

*slaps head hard*
forgot to read the update at first!Ouch
but bohut accha tha.one tight hug at my babe!Hug
keep writing!


Edited by paintthetown - 13 August 2011 at 11:27pm

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Loved it! I really like how you chose to keep Khushi all solemn, it's a nice change :) 

The concept of the vineyards makes such a different and pretty image in my head ^_^ Very earthy and fresh Smile

Zaib is a cool guy lol. And Jannat is a very beautiful name :) Hope to read more scenes of Zaib!

I badly want to know Khushi's past! And I'm getting the feeling that she and Arnav were together many years ago Shocked Pleej continueee! Tongue

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