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Hi frnds.. This is an One Shot of Naksh... The scene starts frm the end of today's episode... I considered precap too and wrote the OS... I inspired frm my frnd's personal experience and wrote this... I hope u all will like it... Big smile

Naksh OS:

Naitik feels good aftr talking with his father... he decides that he has to be there with akshara whatever may be the situation... Here on the other side BM and G3 thinks to educate akshara regarding delivery... but unknowingly they end up in frightening akshara more.. akshara gets scared and soon cries... G3 and BM gets worried, by then naitik also comes der...

Naitik: maa... kya hua?? akshara kyu roh rahi hai??Shocked

G3: kuch nai munna... hum bas isko dilasa dena chahta tha... lekin bahu aur ghabar gayi... 

BM makes akshara to drink some water n in the mean G3 takes naitik aside...

G3: munna... kshama chahte hai beta... unjaane mein bahu ko aur pareshan karliya hum ne... tumhi use sambhal sakta hai... bahu andar leke jao aur uska saat hi reh... unhe dilasa dilao...

Naitik: ji..

Naitik is also tensed and sad seeing akshara... he takes akshara to their room... he makes her to sleep by his side and he too comes close to her... Akshara holds his hand so tightly that naitik can understand how much insecure akshara is feeling right now... he dont know what he can say so that she can overcome her fear as he himself is very new  to this...

Naitik: akshara... aap ghabariye mat... kuch nahi hoga... mein hu naa aapke saath... sab kuch ache se hoga... aap chint mat kar...

Akshara remains silent.. she jst comes so more close to naitik and keeps his hands near her cheeks...

Naitik: mujhe pata hai akshara... kehna bahut aasan hai... lekin sehna mushkil hai... lekin akshara jab aap pehli baar hamara bacha ko dekhne ke baad aap apni saari dardh bhool jayenge...

Akshara: mein apne bache keliye kithni bhi dardh ko seh sakti hu naitik...

Naitik: phir dar kis baat ki?

Akshara: kehta hai ki delivery ek aurath keliye doosra janam se samaan hai... agar mujhe kuch hogaya toh... (Naitik stops)

Naitik: akshara... yeh kya baat kar rahe hai aap??Angry kuch nahi hoga...

Akshara: mujhe kehne dijiye naitik... pata nai iske baad mujhe yeh mouka milti hai ya nahi... (naitik stops her again)

Naitik: akshara... please aise mat kahiye... mein aapke bina jee nahi sakta... Ouch

Akshara: bhagwan ki kripa se mujhe ithna acha pati mila hai... ithna acha pariwar... mere paas sab kuch hai.. mein bahut khush hu... aapke pyar mein yeh do saal kaise pura hua pata bhi nahi chala... aur ab hamare pyar ki nishan bhi aanewala hai... hamare zindagi mein aur bhi khushiya aane wali hai... mein aap aur bache ke saat aur khush rehna chahti hu... mujhe dar hai ki kahi mein yeh sab mujhe milta ya nahi... (chotu here akshara says.. " I'm scared that whether I'll get that happiness or not"... write this in hindi..Smile)

Akshara cries and hugs naitik...

Akshara: mein aapko aur humari pyari si zindagi ko chodkar jana nahi chahti... (naitik now clearly understands whats akshara fear...)

Naitik (while patting) : akshara, aap aisa sochiye mat... aapko kuch nahi hoga... mein aapki saat hi rahoonga... aapko kuch nahi hone doonga.. hum humare bache ke saat aur bhi khush rahenge... iske baare mein aap sochiye mat... aap hi kehte hai na hum ache sochenge toh acha hi hota hai.. isiliye hum sirf ache hi sochenge.. aur sab kuch acha hi hogaa...

He consoles akshara... he pats her so that she slowly gets into sleep... he also sleeps close to her to make akshara to feel more secure about her condition...

Its next morning... naitik wakes up before akshara... he tells G3 and BM not to talk anything related to delivery to akshara as she is already scared... he informs the same to vish also... after some time akshara also wakes up... He helps akshara to get ready n then soon all the maheswaries, rashmi's sasural wale, nandini, mohit everyone comes to SS... all enjoy together celebrating the festival... akshara almost forgets that her due date is on that day... By eveng everyone goes to their house.. akshara is also very tired... naitik feeds her some food and makes her sleep...

Next morning, naitik takes akshara to hospital for general checkup as akshara didn't get any pains... Doctor examines and says everything is fine and it may 2 or 3 days more for the baby to come... Both comes back home... Its aftrnoon... naitik gets a call frm trishala company to have their first meeting at Delhi...

Naitik has to start next day mrng to attend the meeting... but naitik doesn't want to attend the meeting leaving akshara at home when her delivery was due... He speaks to DJ and RB on this... DJ and RB says naitik to attend the meeting as he can return back in the evng and also doctor said it may take 2 or 3 days more for akshara's delivery... But naitik is not able to make his mind to go...

Its night... Naitik doesn't want to go and also he doesn't want to break his promise he made to akshara that he will be by her side during her delivery.. but he still didn't say abt this to akshara because he dont want to make her sad... Naitik is sitting on his bed thinking all these... akshara also comes der.. she also slow sits by his side...

Akshara: kya hua naitik? uthna kya soch rahe hai??

Naitik: kuch nai akshara... bas aise hi... aap sojayiye...

He makes akshara to sleep... he remains like that thinking... akshara also couldn't seelp properly... she is turning that side and this side...

Naitik: kya hua akshara? aapko neend nahi aa rahi hai kya??

Akshara: pata nai naitik... mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai... bechain se ho rahi hai... kahi yeh delivery ki symptoms toh nahi hai na?

Naitik: akshara... aap kuch zyada hi soch rahi hai... doctor ne kaha na.. aur do din lagega... aap aaramse sojayiye... aur kuch mat sochiye...

Akshara: nai naitik... mujhe kuch ajeeb hai naitik.. mere dil bhi ghabara raha hai...

Naitik: akshara... sojayiye...

He tries to pat akshara so that she sleeps... akshara jst closes her eyes... but actually she is not able to sleep... she is feeling something something... naitik slowly gets into sleep... aftr some time she starts feeling some small pain in her stomach... she takes it lite and turns other side... she feels some more pain... she wakes up... she sees naitik sleeping and stops to wake him up... she thinks whether to wake him or not... but her pain is increasing...

Akshara: naitik... uthiye... uthiye naa...

Naitik alerts immediately as soon as he hears akshara's voice...

Naitik: kya hua?

Akshara: naitik... mere peth mein bahut dardh ho raha hai...

Naitik: lagta hai, yeh delivery ka pains hai...

He immediately gets out of bed and wakes up G3... G3 immediately wakes up BM... evryone wakes up... RB immediately gets the car... G3 n BM starts packing the things required by akshara and naitik lifts akshara n takes near the car... G3 asks naitik to take akshara to hospital n they will come back of them taking akshara's things...

RB is driving the car... Naitik is in the bak seat and akshara is lieing placing her head on naitik's lap... Naitik is trying console her and RB is riding the car as fast as possible... Akshara is crying out of pain... n naitik is so worried for her... soon they reach hospital... Naitik takes her on the stretcher... akshara is crying...

Akshara: naitik... mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai...

Naitik: akshara... aapko kuch nahi hoga...

He kisses akshara on her forehead... akshara calms down a little bit... doctor comes and takes akshara into labour room... Naitik is so tensed... he moves that side and this side waiting for akshara... soon G3, BM and DJ also reaches der... Naitik can hear akshara's shouts in pain.. he is very much tensed... 2 hrs passes by... still they doesn't get any news of akshara.. all r tensed and pray god for akshara's safe delivery...

Just then they hear the cute and small cry of the baby... all the eyes r filled with happiness and tears... naitik almost lost his senses aftr hearing the sound of baby cry... he jst can't explain his happinees... happiness, joy, worrying abt akshara's condition, some confused state... a feeling proudness of the father... everything was der in his feelings... soon the nurse comes out of the room... naitik immediately rushes to her...

Naitik: nurse... (naitik wants to ask so many questions... abt his baby, abt akshara, what not... but he cannot ask anything... not even a single word is coming frm his mouth... nurse understands his situation..)

Nurse: congratulations sir... aapko ladka hua... Big smile

Naitik feels very happy...

Naitik: meri akshara theek hai na??

Nurse: haa madam bhi bilkul theek hai... maa aur bacha dono theek hai... baby bhi healty hai...

Naitik: Thanku so much for the good news nurse... (he jst takes out his ring and gives to the nurse in happiness)

All the remaining singhania's r also very happy with the news... Naitik is overwhelmed with the joy...

Naitik: nurse... hum andar jaake akshara ko dekh sakte hai...

Nurse: haa dekh sakte hai... lekin sirf ek hi andar jaa sakte hai... todi dher baad maa aur bache ko normal room mein shift kardenge.. iske baad sab dekh sakte hai... Big smile

Naitik wants to go inside... but asusual G3 is ready to go inside.. when she was abt to go she stops and remembers naitik...

G3: munna... tu andar jaa... sabse pehla bache ko dekhna ka tumhara pehla hakh banta hai... tum ko dekhegi toh bahu bhi khush hojayegi...

Naitik feels happy n goes inside... akshara was lying on the bed... the baby was their in akshara's hands...  both of their eyes r filled with tears of joy... naitik goes near to her... he pats akshara's hair and gently kisses on her forehead... he sits by her side... he places his warm hands one around akshara and the one on baby... he is jst happy to see both of his babies... akshara rests her hand on his shoulder...

Naitik: aap theek hai na akshara??

Akshara: hmm... Smile

Akshara handles the baby to naitik... Akshara is feeling so proud while giving the baby to naitik... naitik is so touched with the gentle touch of the baby... as soon as he hold the baby he feels his own blood... his feelings are not able to express in words... he is jst top of the world... akshara is silently looking into naitik's eyes with tears in her eyes, seeing his joy..

Naitik: akshara... humara bacha...

Akshara: haa naitik... humara bacha...

Naitik: akshara aap mujhe mere saare jeevan ka sab se khoobsoorath tofa diya hai...

Akshara: mujhe bhi...

He again kisses akshara on her forehead... n then both looks at their baby with tears filled eyes...




Edited by saru.g - 16 January 2012 at 1:16pm

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i noo right :)


@ sh im not mad at u ;p

@ fazeel this is the 2nd link to saru's FF :)
oh saru complete frist ff wow
wisay seju when u posting ur ff yaarTongue

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i noo right :)


@ sh im not mad at u ;p

@ fazeel this is the 2nd link to saru's FF :)
oh saru complete frist ff wow
wisay seju when u posting ur ff yaarTongue


you wont believe it but i typed half of it last night and i just have a few more lines to write so i will write them and then edit and then post so maybe by tomorrow it should be up LOL

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i noo right :)


@ sh im not mad at u ;p

@ fazeel this is the 2nd link to saru's FF :)
oh saru complete frist ff wow
wisay seju when u posting ur ff yaarTongue


you wont believe it but i typed half of it last night and i just have a few more lines to write so i will write them and then edit and then post so maybe by tomorrow it should be up LOL
wow seju i am waiting lol

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Originally posted by fazeel

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i noo right :)


@ sh im not mad at u ;p

@ fazeel this is the 2nd link to saru's FF :)
oh saru complete frist ff wow
wisay seju when u posting ur ff yaarTongue


you wont believe it but i typed half of it last night and i just have a few more lines to write so i will write them and then edit and then post so maybe by tomorrow it should be up LOL
wow seju i am waiting lol


LOL will update asap :) lol

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Part 29

Akshara n Naitik are so happy thinking abt their baby... both r not able to sleep... Both turns to each other... and look into each others eyes...

Naitik: kya hua?? neend nahi aa rahi hai kya??

Akshara: hmm... khushi bhi hai dar bhi hai...

Naitik: akshara... is baar sab kuch acha hi hoga...  (he pats her hair)

Akshara: jab hamare ghar wale ko pata chale toh woh log bahut khush hojayegaa naa...

Naitik: haa subah hote hi hum unhe phone karte hai...

Akshara: naitik.. hamara toh abhi tak raat hai... lekin vaha subah ho chuke honge... hum abhi baat karte hai naa...

Naitik dails singhania's number... He gives the good news to all... All r very happy... and all r sad too as akshara is not der with them... Naitik talking to G3...

Naitik: maa... ab kithna din.. bas ek hafta... hum india aane wale hai...

G3: acha... bahut acha kiya tum ne... lekin beta... bahu ka do mahina chal raha hai... tum doctor se poochlena ki akshara uthni lambi safar kar sakti yaa nahi.. kyu ku pehla teen mahine bahut khyal rakhna hai...

Naitik: haa ma... mein zaroor doctor poochloonga...

G3: ek aur baat beta... bahu ko vaha khya; rakhne keliye koyi bhi nahi hai... mein aajau kya?

Naitik: maa... hum hi vaha aanewale hai na... ithne mein aap kyu pareshan ho rahi hai... hum doctor se suggestions leke ek or do hafte vaha aajeyenge... aur tab tak akshara ka khyal mein rakhoonga...

G3: munna... tu ofc bhi jaana hai naa..

Naitik: maa.. yaha is project ka kaam almost khatam ho chuke hai... mein ghar par hi rehta hu...

G3: theek hai beta... bahu se koyi bhi kaam nahi karwana... tum akela sambhalna mushkil toh hai... lekin tujhe hi sambhalna hoga beta... bahu ko aaram karni chahiye...

Naitik: maa mein aapki bahi se kuch bhi kaam nahi karne doonga... mein hi sab dekhta hu... aap chinta mat kariye...

Both keeps the phone...

Naitik: dekha... sab aapki khyal rakhne ka keh rahe hai... mere taraf koyi dekhta bhi nahi... Tongue

Akshara: naitik... aap bhi naa... bache ki tarah sabka attention maangta rehta hai... vaise bhi aapka khyal rakhne keliye mein hu naa...Embarrassed

Naitik: haa... pehle apne aap ka khyal rakhiye... ab chaliye sojayiye...

Akshara: naitik... mujhe neend hi nahi aa rahe hai.. Ouch

Naitik: lekin akshara aap samay se sona zaroori hai.. mein aapko sulata hu...

Akshara: kaise??Confused

Naitik: pehle aap letiye...

He makes her to lay down on bed... he slowly soothes on her head...

Naitik: mein aapki maa ki tarah lohri toh nahi gaa sakta hu... lekin aapko sulane keliye ek kahani sunata hu... (he starts saying the story in a very low voice, so that akshara slowly gets into sleep)

Akshara slowly gets into sleep.. aftr some time naitik makes sure that akshara is slept and then he also sleeps... Its 6 in the morning... Both r in deep sleep... suddenly naitik remembers and wakes up...

Naitik: aaj se mein alert rehna chahiye... akshara ko kuch bhi kaam karne nahi doonga...

He goes into kitchen... makes some tea, keeps it in the flask and comes to their room... akshara is still sleeping... so he sits by her side and keeps looking at her... after some time akshara wakes up...

Naitik: good morning... Big smile

Akshara: good morning... Confused.. aap ithni subah uth gaye??Shocked

Naitik: haa... mein papa banne wala hu... todi responsible hona chahiye naa... isiliye subah uthkar aapkeliye chai banaya... Smile

Akshara: naitik... uthni kya zaroorath thi... mein uthne ke mein banata hu na...

Naitik: nai nai... aap kuch nai karna hai... yeh meri order hai... aaj se naa sab kaam mein hi dekhloonga...

Akshara: khana bhi aap hi banate hai??Shocked

Naitik: haa... mein banaloonga... sab kuch mein hi karloonga... aap bas aaram karni hai...

Akshara: kyu mujhe aap ithni saza de rahe hai?? Ouch

Naitik: saza???Confused kya saza??Shocked

Akshara: mujhe aapke haath banaya hua khana khani hai na... yeh toh saza hi hai na... OuchTongue

Naitik: akshara... Angry meri khana uthna bhi bura nahi hota hai... aap ek baar picnic mein khayi thi na... tab keh rahi thi ki acha hai...

Akshara: haa baba... mein mazak kar rahi thi... aap acha khana banate hai... ab naraz mat hoyiye... mujhe naa abhi bahut bhook lagi hai...

Naitik: mein abhi naashta banata hu... batayiye aap kya khayenge??

Akshara: mujhe naa kuch khatta... kuch theeka... acha chodiyee.. aapko jo acha aata hai... woh banayiye... mujhe toh bhook lagi hai...

Naitik: theek hai... aap thoda fresh hojayiye... tab tak mein kuch banaloonga...

Naitik comes down and quickly browses in the internet about some curries and takes the recipe... he quickly starts making roti's on one side and cooking aalu curry on the other side... he add tamarind and mirchi to the curry to make katha and theeka as akshara asked... akshara comes down aftr an hour... Naitik is also almost done with his cooking.. Naitik makes akshara to sit in a chair... n then feeds her with the roti n curry he prepared...

Akshara: woww yummyy... naitik yeh bahut acha hai... thoda katha aur thoda theeka... yeh toh meri man pasand khana ban gaya...

Naitik: haa... ab is halath me na aap aise hi aapka jo man kare woh khana khana chahiye... isliye aapko jo bhi khane ka man kar raha hai, mujhe batiyiye aur mein banaunga... (naitik also eats while feeding akshara)

Akshara: yeh sab banate rahe toh aap kab ofc jayoge??

Naitik: askhara... aapko pata hai na.. yaha ka kaam almost khatam ho chuke hai... sirf baaki jewellery delivery toh karni hai... iskeliye mein ofc jaana zaroori nahi hai... mein yaha se woh kaam dekh sakta hu...

Akshara: acha... ab aap bhi fresh hokar aajayiye... tab tak mein ghar ka saaf safayi ka kaam dekhleta hu...

Naitik: kya??? aap karenge?? nai nai... mein aapko khana hi nahi banaya diya.. kya mein aapko ghar ka kaam karne doonga??? nai nai.. bilkul nai... sara kaam mein hi karta hu... aap dekhte rahiye... aur bas aaram kariye...

Akshara: kya?? aap ghar ka kaam bhi karlenge??Shocked aap se nahi hoga naitik...

Naitik: kyu nahi hoga??? pehli baar toh zaroor hai lekin mein ache se karne ki khoshish karoonga...

Akshara: lekin naitik, mein karoongi naa... kyu aap... (Naitik stops and lifts akshara to take her to their room... he is climbing the steps...)

Naitik: akshara aap kuch mat kahiye... aap bas aaram kariye... ek hi hafte ko baat hai... uske baad hum india chale jayenge... aur vaha aapka khyal rakhne keliye sab log hai... tab tak mujhe aapka khyal rakhne ka mouka dedijiye...

He makes akshara to sleep for some more time... he takes very care of her so that she will be happy and then he doesn't allow her to do a single work... 2 days goes on like this... their jewellery comes frm india and naitik delivers them to the client... n then he decided to go back india as soon as possible... so both visits doctor to take her suggestion as akshara will be traveling for 8 to 10 hours...

To their shock doctor suggests akshara not to have any long journey as she has to be very more careful during the first three months.. so the doctor says them to wait till akshara completes 3 months... naksh r disappointed with this as there is still 40 days more to complete three months... Naitik informs this to G3... all the remaining family members are also disappointed with this...

Naitik and akshara comes home...

Naitik: hum yaha aur ek mahina rukhna hai... acha hai na.. mein aapke paas hi rehne ka mouka mil gaya... Big smile

Akshara: kya mouka naitik... mujhe bore ho raha hai... mujhe kaam bhi nahi karne dete hai... kamre me aaram kar karke tag gayi hu... Ouch

Naitik: akshara... humara bacha keliye aap aaram karni chahiye ...

Akshara: hmm.. Ouch

Naitik: aap todi dher aaram karlijiye... mein ghar ka kaam khatam karke aajata hu...

Akshara: kya naitik... jab dekho kaam kaam kaam... Angry.. kamre mein akeli reh rehkar mein tag chuki hu... aapko mere liye thoda vakth bhi nahi hai... Ouch

Naitik: akshara... kaam bhi zaroori hai na... do minute aajaunga...

Akshara: LOLLOL

Naitik: kyu has rahi hai??Confused

Akshara: yeh dialogue kahi suni... Wink








Edited by saru.g - 15 January 2012 at 11:42am

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i noo right :)


@ sh im not mad at u ;p

@ fazeel this is the 2nd link to saru's FF :)
oh saru complete frist ff wow
wisay seju when u posting ur ff yaarTongue


you wont believe it but i typed half of it last night and i just have a few more lines to write so i will write them and then edit and then post so maybe by tomorrow it should be up LOL
this time u are going to update the part within one week...Tonguesuperb...Clap

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