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Its all in Him -AR ff-pt 2-pg 7- 21/8-pmz later - Page 5

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Part 3
Padma: tu kya keh rahi hai ridhima tu kya kar ke aayi hai sach sach bata.

 

Now it was time for her to confront her mom and sister who were sitting quiet throughout. She definitely was in no mood to fight with her parents but she knew that she had to be strong not for herself but for her love. She had to be strong for the person who changed the meaning of love. Love till now to the maximum meant crazinessfor a person but it was never modified in way it was modified by him. The way he made her people his was unimaginable. he tried to see a father in shashank and he seekeda mother in padma. What was more was anjali was treated like a sister as well as a kid whose demands were always fulfilled. He used to pamper her to this extent that often ridhima felt

 

Ridhima:maine kya kiya

 

Padma: ridhima sach sach bata tune koi galat kaam to nahi kiya hai

 

Ridhima: main to uski baahon ki panaahon mein doob jaati maa vo jo karna chahta karta main use na rokti lekin usne to mujhe chua bhi nahi lekin main hi apna zehen,apne jeene ka maksad apne marne ki vajah yahan tak ki ruh luta kar chali aayi

 

Padma:matlab

 

Anjali:ridz what do u mean

 

Ridhima:matlab ye ki main khud hi apni nahi rahi

 

Padma:par tujhe kaise pata ki vo tujhse itna pyaar karta hai

 

Ridhima:yahi to nahin pata ki vo mujhse kitna pyaar karta hai, kaash ye pata hota lekin hota bhi to kaiseuske pyaar ko to zameen se jannat tak ki duri bhi nahi naap sakti

 

Padma:ridhima tu…

 

Ridhima: maa main kuch nahin sunna chahti,kaash uski pyaar ki gehrai aap ko bhi samajh aati

 

Padma:par…

 

Ridhima: uske pyaar ke kitne intehaan logi maa, kya itne kaafi nahi the

 

Padma: ridhima mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha

 

Ridhima: vo mere liye apni khushiyan lutata ja raha hai lekin main to usko gham ki bhaith bhi theek se nahi de paa rahi lekin vo khushi khushi mere hisse ke aansoon pee raha hai isse bada intehaan mere hisaab se to kuch nahin

 

Padma:beta…

 

Ridhima:maa kya aap papa ke liye apni jaan de sakti hain

 

Padma:ye kya keh rahi hai tu

 

Ridhima :maa ye chodiye aap yeh bataiye ki god forbid par kabhi papa ko aapke liye jaan deni pade to kya vo khushi khushi denge

 

Padma : tu pagal ho gai hai kya

 

Padma was getting up

 

Ridhima : yaad rakhna ridhima is duniya mein ek aisa insaan bhi hai jo tumhari ek khushi ke liye apni marzi se apni jaan gava de. Tumahare liye nahi jiyunga to duniya ka sabse bada paap karunga varna mera bas chalta to tumhari inhi baahon mein aakhiri saans leke apne nasseb mein jannat likh leta. Tumhare liye marne se to bhagwan bhi mujhe nahi rok sakte kyunki vo khud hi tumhari hothon ki muskurahat lauta kar usme kho jana chahenge

 

Padma turned

 

Ridhima :ye kaha tha usne mujhse abhi aap kahengi ki vo mere liye theek nahi hai

 

Padma was left speechless




i know dialogues thore over senti hai...kya karu...karan johar fan hu na ;-) comment karna na pleashh !!!!!! 

ye to pehle ki likhi ff hai...usme changes kiye! abi continue karungi to kitna changed writing style ho jayega...encourage to karo


@sautan...tht  note was spcly for u :PP


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