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Posted: 12 years ago
wow realy ritu
nice post, great work
i like your post too , and in this post i seems nothing required thing which must be in it
u have written all the things
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 4

Mr Gupta's house...
Mr G: Maine tume yaha isliye bulaaya hai kyunki mai chahta hu ki tum Inter school History Quiz me participate karo...
Jai: mai kyun...
Mr G: Tum class ke topper ho...age group 10-13 me tum akele ho jo saari dates yaad rakte ho..and u r intrested in history, arent you?
Jai: Ha...ok..par quiz ke liye thoda advanced syllabus hoga..hai na?
Mr G: Isliye to maine tume yaha bulaaya...abse roz school ke baad tum yaha aaoge...mai tume quiz ke liye prepare karunga...Titli bhi aayegi.
The book in Jai's hand almost fell off..
Jai: Titli?..😲
Mr G: Ha..abhi to mile the...kal se start karenge..ab jao...

Next day at school...
Akshay: Kal gupta sir ne kyun bulaya tha?
Jai told him about the history quiz...
Jai: Aur Titli bhi mere saath padegi..
Akshay: Titli??...
Jai: ha wo Khanna sir ki beti hai, kal uska gaana sunkar maine idiot ki tarah unka door knock kiya...aur...he went on saying abt Titli

Akshay was trying hard not to giggle and pretended as if he was serously listening to JaiπŸ˜‰

Akshay: Jai, in ladkiyon ki chakravyu se bachke rahiyo...ek baar andar ghus gaye to bahar nahi aapaoge..
Jai: Ab to chup karege ya Doggy ko bhulao...
Akshay: Ok chalo..mai kuch nahi bolunga...ok..

Yash has chosen Jai as the goalkeeper..Jai was doing extremely well..but he was finding it hard to balance between the history quiz and football coz both were Interschool Competitions and he had to win it..

5 PM...
Mr Gupta had given the house keys to Jai. Jai went in and looked at the book Mr Gupta had told him to read
'Ancient Indian History-K. Govind'

''Hi''

Jai was busy...he didnt even lift his head...

''Hi...Jai''...Titli said..a bit louder this tym😳
Jai: Oh sorry...hi..
Titli: Mere school se quiz ke liye mai select hui hu...😊
Jai: Oh thats gud...(as if he had come there for timepass)πŸ˜†
Titli: Gupta uncle kehrahe the ki tum Football team me bhi ho...
Jai: ha..tumne kisi aur competition me participate nahi kya?
Titli: Kiya hai na...Singing aur Crafts competition..dekhna hamara school hi jitega...
Jai: U cant predict anything ryt now...(He was a bit annoyed now)
They were quiet...after about 15 minutes..
Jai: Nice dress...
Titli was wearing a red frock. Jai hated redπŸ˜‰
Titli: Really...mujhe nahi pasand..maa ne zabardasti pehnaya hai..πŸ˜•
Jai(to himself): Concentrate..kya kar raha hu mai...πŸ˜•...He was feeling awkward...
Mr Gupta came at 5:30...and the class began...
Mr Gupta: You both r doin very well...aaj ke liye bas...aur ha jai..yash ne kal subah 8 baje practice ke liye bulaaya hai...

Jai reached early next morning..it was 7:30..There was no one on the playground...
Jai: koi nahi aaya..mai mandir ho aata hu..
The school temple had a beautiful statue of Saraswati..It was Jai's favorite place...
'' Mai koshish kar raha hu Bhaiya...bharosa rakhiye..''

Jai heard this from an empty classroom next to the temple..It was Mr Shah...he was talking on the phone...he looked worried and tensed

Shah: Maine storeroom ki chabiyon ki duplicate banaliya hai...plzz..mujhe kuch dino ki maulat dijiye...

Jai hid behind the door..Mr shah looked scared...he didnt notice Jai..

Yash was there...he called out..

Yash: Jai..yaha aao...

Jai was thinking abt Mr Shah...he felt something was fishy...He told Akshay abt it

Akshay: Oh Jai...tum bhi na..aise teachers ke personal calls nahi sunte..forget it...

But Jai couldnt...he decided to tell Mr Gupta...

After hearing the story...

Mr G: hmm..ye unka pesonal matter ho sakta hai..aur nahi bhi...kyunki ki school ke store room ki baat ki hai...
tum isme mat pado...concentrate on ur studies..ok..

Jai: Ok sir...but sir mai aapse kuch aur baat bhi kana chahta tha..mere papa ke baare me...


radhikarani thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey lovely part
haha lv d one
jai- titli shockd
dharma22 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear ritu your all the parts are more than every before parts.
"ek se bad kar ek"
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very well Ritu!! πŸ‘
Convo b/w  Titli n Jai is truly awesome... sach mein bhi kisi strange se baat karke aisa hi lagta hai..πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ ritu :
      part 3 was a very nice update πŸ‘..especially d bullying part by both teacher & student was too real⭐️..& dont portray Mr.Shah as amatya, amatya wont abuse sum1 lyk dis, he's shrewd but has his own dignity😊, for me , Mr. Shah is sukhi, no1 else !! 😑 & d closing lines wer too gud ..well done !!πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant part ritz πŸ‘
titli and jai's convo is so natural yet sweet πŸ˜ƒ
loved it πŸ˜‰ ..and yeh kya..mr shah aka amatya yahan bhi lage pade hain πŸ˜†
very nice ritz..keep updating ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Polly..thnx...regarding Shah..maine  purposely Amatyako banaya..u'll know when I proceed..😊
@Bhargu..Thmx😊
ab show dekne se acha mai FF hi likhuπŸ˜•
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ ritu :
      part 4, jai & titlee, hmm !!!!!! πŸ˜‰ ab hum kya kahe ..jaise script writer ki marzi πŸ˜‰!! waise i'm waiting to c how mr. gupta handles dis teenage crush !! πŸ˜†  mr. shah aka sukhi yaha par bhi apni harkato par utar gaya, kabhi to baaz aao yar !! πŸ˜•
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Posted: 12 years ago
I m loving titli n Jai 's convo 
awesome 

n wats this Mr. shah plnning sumthing against sum1😲

continue soon