Posted: 12 years ago
Hello frnds...๐Ÿค—
I was thinking ki mai apne doston ki tarah ek FF likhu...
Everyone here r doin a grt job...๐Ÿ‘
So meri story bhi thoda jhelena๐Ÿ˜‰
Now the characters of this story are none other than our own CGM cast...
Aap sab CGM ke baare me jaante hai...
ab phir se suniye..mere andaaz me๐Ÿ˜Š
Agar koi galti ho jaaye..ya aapko pasand na aaye to mujhe maaf kar dijiye...this is my first time๐Ÿ˜Š



Story shuru hoti hai jab Mr. Madhav Gupta ko Nasik se Mumbai transfer hota hai...

Mr.Gupta
is in his mid 30's...a bachelor still coz he want to dedicate his life and services to the country...very intelligent, calm and Gambhir,...gud at heart but when irritated...very scary๐Ÿ˜‰


The train reaches Mumbai at 7 AM...

Mr Gupta carrying only one bag searches for an auto
..

Suddenly a young boy comes to him...

Boy: Aap Madhav Gupta hai?

Mr Gupta: ha..mai hi hu Madhav Gupta...( noticing the badge on his uniform..which is a lion)..aur tum Maurya High se ho...hai na?

Boy: Yes sir,...mai Yash Purohit hu...Std 10th..Gangadhar sir ne mujhe aapko station se laane ke liye bheja hai..

Mr Gupta: hmm..itni jaldi tayar hokar aagaye

Yash: (yawning
)...ha Sir...Gangadhar sir ne subhe subhe 5 baje uthadiya...Head boy jo hu..

Mr Gupta: hmm...to tum aana nahi chahte the?

Yash: No sir, aisi baat nahi hai..waise aapka room confirm ho gaya hai...school pauchne par baaki details mil jayengi๐Ÿ˜Š

Yash is the head boy of the school, a bright boy, very gud at football, adored by all the teachers..

After 15 minutes..they reach the school

Mr Gupta: ''Maurya High''...naam kaafi suna hai...
Yash:(proudly) suna hi hoga..national basis pe rated hai...par sirf ek problem hai..
Mr Gupta: Wo kya
Yash(to himself)...ab Sir ko kaise batau ki ye sirf Boys school hai๐Ÿค”
Mr Gupta: Chup kyun ho gaye?..suna hai ye sirf Boys school hai..
Yash: ha sir..(to himself)...Sir mindreading kar sakte hai๐Ÿ˜ณ
Mr G: chale...
Yash: ha kyun nahi..
They reach the teacher's quaters
Gangadhar is the maintainance officer of the quaters..
Gangadhar: Welcome Mr Gupta to Maurya High...aapka room no. 49..second floor...Yash, tum jaa sakte ho
Yash: Yes sir,...waise Gupta sir, aapka class hai..lunch ke baad first period
MrG: I know..
Yash goes..
Mr Gupta in his room...
Kya yaha ke ladko me wo baat ho sakti hai?..I hope so...

Mr Gupta goes to the school at 1PM after lunch
Principal's office:

Mr. Rajaram Chaturvedi, principal...very kind, kabhi gusssa nahi hote...yahi sabse badi problem...but very smart.chalaki se saare problems solve karte hai...encourages new thoughts๐Ÿ˜Š
Mr G: Gud afternoon sir..
Princi: Oh Mr Gupta..aapka hi intezaar kar raha tha...aaj hi aaye hai..aur aaj hi kaam shuru kardenge?..u sure u dont want a day off
Mr G: Jo hamesha aaram farmaane ke baare me sochte hai wo kabhi aapna lakshya pura nahi kar paate
Princi: hmmm...very intresting...Ok then..Sign kijiye aur apna lakshya pura kijiye
Mr Gupta: Thnk you sir..
He leaves..
Princi: Mr Gupta..all the best๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Class 8th A

Mr Gupta enters the class...
Students: Gud afternoon sir
and the students are about to sit..but
Mr G:..rukiye..mai aapse kuch puchna chahta hu..
Students r surprised๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Mr G: bohot difficult nahi hai...aap me se kitne aapni maa ko miss kar rahe hai..
everyone raise their hands...except one...a boy at the second last bench
Mr G: Baaki sab behtjaye..aur tum...aapna haath upar nahi kiya?...aapni ma ko miss nahi kar rahe ho?
Boy: Jab mai apni ma ke saath hi rehraha hu to kaise miss karunga?
Mr G:..But sab bache to boarding me rehte hai...ye compulsory hai na?
Boy: Ofcourse sir...meri maa mere har kadam pe mere saath hai, mujhe ashray diya hai, itni vishal hai par apne saare bacho ko pyaar karti hai, meri Bharat maa
There is sparkle in the boy's eyes..his chest broadened with pride...his voice filled with heviness...his charming dusky complexion...Mr Gupta is quite...
Mr G: Kya naam hai tumhara
Boy: Mera naam Jai hai sir...Jai Ahuja

  
            Mr Gupta is very impressed but does not show it on his face..
MR G: baitjao Jai..waise aap sab ko pata hi hoga ki mai aapka naya History teacher hu...aaj pehla din hai to koi HW nahi dunga par aap sabse baatchit karunga...aapka introduction kijiye..
All students give their introduction...
Mr Gupta cannot resist himself...he wants to speak to Jai
bell rings...
Mr G: Jai..one minute
Jai: yes sir...aap kuch kehna chahte hai mujhse...
Mr G: Tumne bohot impressive answer diya...Do u really mean it
Jai is quiet...he lowers his head...tears in his eyes..but he trys hard not to cry..
Mr G: say something..chup kyun ho gaye?
Their convo is disturbed by Akshay...Jai's best friend..
Akshay: Jai..chalo..maths class shuru honewali hai...
Jai: mujhe chalna chahiye sir..he runs off
Mr G: Akshay..ek minute..ye Jai ko kya hogaya?
Akshay: Sir, wo lambi story hai...
Mr G: Recess mai mujhe milna..
Akshay: Ok sir..

Akshay is a sweet kid, quiet, helpful, does not indulge in fights and loves his best frnd Jai very much...

Staff room

 Mr G: Hello everyone...mai hu  Madhav Gupta..Nasik se...
all teachers give their introductions...
suddenly there is a voice from the back
To aap hi hai Madhav Gupta...bohot suna hai aapke baare me...history me Phd...loved by students...voted the best teacher of Nasik..hmm...Swagat hai...
Mr G turns back...standing there is Mr Surya Shah,...the economics teacher...

Shakes hands with Gupta...
slowly whispers in his ears..
''Mujhe bhi competetor mil gaya...all the best Gupta..''
Mr G: Mujhe lagta hai competitions students ke liye hota hai Mr Shah...
Mr Shah gives a wicked look and walks away...

Recess

Akshay comes to Mr Gupta...
G:..Ah..aagaye tum..baitho..
Akshay is bit scared
A: nahi mai thik hu sir...
G: tum itna dar kyun rahe ho...mai tumse Jai ke baare me puchna chahta hu..
Akshay is surprised..
A: uske baare me mai kuc nahi bataunga sir...and he runs away.
G: ruko..arey..suno to...ise kya hogaya achanak?




to be continued...
Posted: 12 years ago
oh god! Cgm forum hv so many writer
n ritz wow wow wow whn i read n scroll dwn aisa lag raha tha ki mein film dkh rahi hu. Charctr w8 pics beautiful lines.
I lv it.
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ritu 
loved the characters sply Mr. gupta , yash n jai 

continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
yeh ho kya raha hai iss forum me, sab kuch na kuch likh rahe hai !! ๐Ÿ˜•

@ ritu : gud start yar, carry on๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ !! waise yeh school & principal tumhare apne school & principal hai kya ๐Ÿ˜‰?? & kya description diya hai Mr. Gupta ki ๐Ÿ˜ƒ..wah wah๐Ÿ‘..waise i luv any character based on d lines on Chanakya โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ!! & amatya as economics teacher..wah wah ..kya baat๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ !! lage raho !! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Posted: 12 years ago
whoa...I cant beleive it...itne ache comments...Thnx..waise mai jaldi update karungi..kyunki september ke baad hardly i can come to the forum..so keep reading...Thnx๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
its lovely lovely lovely Ritz โญ๏ธ ...character sketches are really strong ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ‘
i loved the dialogues of yash and gupta ji really funny and amazing...inko mindreading aati hai ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ...keep writing and keep updating ..its so good ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...and loved the pics too ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Wow Wow, cgm gang mein itne sare incredible writers.๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Ritu hats off to u dear so interestingly u have characterized everyone.๐Ÿ‘
Chandu again in new avtar, A true Motherland lover.๐Ÿ˜
Is bar acharya cgm jitne gambhir nahi hai...๐Ÿ˜†..too nice..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Waiting for update...plz jaldi update karna i like it too much...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx Bhargu and Indu...
itni appreciation ki aadat nahi hai na...๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 12 years ago
adat daal lo ritu 
each upd pe aisi hi tareef milegi 
keep writing
Posted: 12 years ago
Veryyy nice idea kanau !! ๐Ÿค— Soomaaru chandagi bardidi yaaar !! Baritaa iru kanau ! Matte forum mele neenu Bengaluru goguva tanaka chooru jaasti bartaa iru !!๐Ÿค—

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