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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Hello frnds...Hug
I was thinking ki mai apne doston ki tarah ek FF likhu...
Everyone here r doin a grt job...Clap
So meri story bhi thoda jhelenaWink
Now the characters of this story are none other than our own CGM cast...
Aap sab CGM ke baare me jaante hai...
ab phir se suniye..mere andaaz meSmile
Agar koi galti ho jaaye..ya aapko pasand na aaye to mujhe maaf kar dijiye...this is my first timeSmile



Story shuru hoti hai jab Mr. Madhav Gupta ko Nasik se Mumbai transfer hota hai...

Mr.Gupta
is in his mid 30's...a bachelor still coz he want to dedicate his life and services to the country...very intelligent, calm and Gambhir,...gud at heart but when irritated...very scaryWink


The train reaches Mumbai at 7 AM...

Mr Gupta carrying only one bag searches for an auto
..

Suddenly a young boy comes to him...

Boy: Aap Madhav Gupta hai?

Mr Gupta: ha..mai hi hu Madhav Gupta...( noticing the badge on his uniform..which is a lion)..aur tum Maurya High se ho...hai na?

Boy: Yes sir,...mai Yash Purohit hu...Std 10th..Gangadhar sir ne mujhe aapko station se laane ke liye bheja hai..

Mr Gupta: hmm..itni jaldi tayar hokar aagaye

Yash: (yawning
)...ha Sir...Gangadhar sir ne subhe subhe 5 baje uthadiya...Head boy jo hu..

Mr Gupta: hmm...to tum aana nahi chahte the?

Yash: No sir, aisi baat nahi hai..waise aapka room confirm ho gaya hai...school pauchne par baaki details mil jayengiSmile

Yash is the head boy of the school, a bright boy, very gud at football, adored by all the teachers..

After 15 minutes..they reach the school

Mr Gupta: ''Maurya High''...naam kaafi suna hai...
Yash:(proudly) suna hi hoga..national basis pe rated hai...par sirf ek problem hai..
Mr Gupta: Wo kya
Yash(to himself)...ab Sir ko kaise batau ki ye sirf Boys school haiErmm
Mr Gupta: Chup kyun ho gaye?..suna hai ye sirf Boys school hai..
Yash: ha sir..(to himself)...Sir mindreading kar sakte haiStern Smile
Mr G: chale...
Yash: ha kyun nahi..
They reach the teacher's quaters
Gangadhar is the maintainance officer of the quaters..
Gangadhar: Welcome Mr Gupta to Maurya High...aapka room no. 49..second floor...Yash, tum jaa sakte ho
Yash: Yes sir,...waise Gupta sir, aapka class hai..lunch ke baad first period
MrG: I know..
Yash goes..
Mr Gupta in his room...
Kya yaha ke ladko me wo baat ho sakti hai?..I hope so...

Mr Gupta goes to the school at 1PM after lunch
Principal's office:

Mr. Rajaram Chaturvedi, principal...very kind, kabhi gusssa nahi hote...yahi sabse badi problem...but very smart.chalaki se saare problems solve karte hai...encourages new thoughtsSmile
Mr G: Gud afternoon sir..
Princi: Oh Mr Gupta..aapka hi intezaar kar raha tha...aaj hi aaye hai..aur aaj hi kaam shuru kardenge?..u sure u dont want a day off
Mr G: Jo hamesha aaram farmaane ke baare me sochte hai wo kabhi aapna lakshya pura nahi kar paate
Princi: hmmm...very intresting...Ok then..Sign kijiye aur apna lakshya pura kijiyeApprove
Mr Gupta: Thnk you sir..
He leaves..
Princi: Mr Gupta..all the bestThumbs Up

Class 8th A

Mr Gupta enters the class...
Students: Gud afternoon sir
and the students are about to sit..but
Mr G:..rukiye..mai aapse kuch puchna chahta hu..
Students r surprisedShocked
Mr G: bohot difficult nahi hai...aap me se kitne aapni maa ko miss kar rahe hai..
everyone raise their hands...except one...a boy at the second last bench
Mr G: Baaki sab behtjaye..aur tum...aapna haath upar nahi kiya?...aapni ma ko miss nahi kar rahe ho?
Boy: Jab mai apni ma ke saath hi rehraha hu to kaise miss karunga?
Mr G:..But sab bache to boarding me rehte hai...ye compulsory hai na?
Boy: Ofcourse sir...meri maa mere har kadam pe mere saath hai, mujhe ashray diya hai, itni vishal hai par apne saare bacho ko pyaar karti hai, meri Bharat maa
There is sparkle in the boy's eyes..his chest broadened with pride...his voice filled with heviness...his charming dusky complexion...Mr Gupta is quite...
Mr G: Kya naam hai tumhara
Boy: Mera naam Jai hai sir...Jai Ahuja

  
            Mr Gupta is very impressed but does not show it on his face..
MR G: baitjao Jai..waise aap sab ko pata hi hoga ki mai aapka naya History teacher hu...aaj pehla din hai to koi HW nahi dunga par aap sabse baatchit karunga...aapka introduction kijiye..
All students give their introduction...
Mr Gupta cannot resist himself...he wants to speak to Jai
bell rings...
Mr G: Jai..one minute
Jai: yes sir...aap kuch kehna chahte hai mujhse...
Mr G: Tumne bohot impressive answer diya...Do u really mean it
Jai is quiet...he lowers his head...tears in his eyes..but he trys hard not to cry..
Mr G: say something..chup kyun ho gaye?
Their convo is disturbed by Akshay...Jai's best friend..
Akshay: Jai..chalo..maths class shuru honewali hai...
Jai: mujhe chalna chahiye sir..he runs off
Mr G: Akshay..ek minute..ye Jai ko kya hogaya?
Akshay: Sir, wo lambi story hai...
Mr G: Recess mai mujhe milna..
Akshay: Ok sir..

Akshay is a sweet kid, quiet, helpful, does not indulge in fights and loves his best frnd Jai very much...

Staff room

 Mr G: Hello everyone...mai hu  Madhav Gupta..Nasik se...
all teachers give their introductions...
suddenly there is a voice from the back
To aap hi hai Madhav Gupta...bohot suna hai aapke baare me...history me Phd...loved by students...voted the best teacher of Nasik..hmm...Swagat hai...
Mr G turns back...standing there is Mr Surya Shah,...the economics teacher...

Shakes hands with Gupta...
slowly whispers in his ears..
''Mujhe bhi competetor mil gaya...all the best Gupta..''
Mr G: Mujhe lagta hai competitions students ke liye hota hai Mr Shah...
Mr Shah gives a wicked look and walks away...

Recess

Akshay comes to Mr Gupta...
G:..Ah..aagaye tum..baitho..
Akshay is bit scared
A: nahi mai thik hu sir...
G: tum itna dar kyun rahe ho...mai tumse Jai ke baare me puchna chahta hu..
Akshay is surprised..
A: uske baare me mai kuc nahi bataunga sir...and he runs away.
G: ruko..arey..suno to...ise kya hogaya achanak?




to be continued...

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 4:41am | IP Logged
oh god! Cgm forum hv so many writer
n ritz wow wow wow whn i read n scroll dwn aisa lag raha tha ki mein film dkh rahi hu. Charctr w8 pics beautiful lines.
I lv it.

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
awesome ritu 
loved the characters sply Mr. gupta , yash n jai 

continue soon

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 4:51am | IP Logged
yeh ho kya raha hai iss forum me, sab kuch na kuch likh rahe hai !! Confused

@ ritu : gud start yar, carry onClapClap !! waise yeh school & principal tumhare apne school & principal hai kya Wink?? & kya description diya hai Mr. Gupta ki Big smile..wah wahClap..waise i luv any character based on d lines on Chanakya StarStar!! & amatya as economics teacher..wah wah ..kya baatClapClap !! lage raho !! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
whoa...I cant beleive it...itne ache comments...Thnx..waise mai jaldi update karungi..kyunki september ke baad hardly i can come to the forum..so keep reading...ThnxSmile

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
its lovely lovely lovely Ritz Star ...character sketches are really strong Big smile Clap
i loved the dialogues of yash and gupta ji really funny and amazing...inko mindreading aati hai Wink LOL ...keep writing and keep updating ..its so good Thumbs Up...and loved the pics too Smile Clap

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Wow Wow Wow, cgm gang mein itne sare incredible writers.Shocked
Ritu hats off to u dear so interestingly u have characterized everyone.Clap
Chandu again in new avtar, A true Motherland lover.Day Dreaming
Is bar acharya cgm jitne gambhir nahi hai...LOL..too nice..Thumbs Up

Waiting for update...plz jaldi update karna i like it too much...Embarrassed

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Thnx Bhargu and Indu...
itni appreciation ki aadat nahi hai na...Wink

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