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FF: Mohabbat Door Jaane na De-part 16 pg 46 (Page 46)

-honeydew- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Part 16:

Khushi woke up early next morning mostly because she could not sleep all night. She had disturbing thoughts of what had happened to her, and how she had actually ran out of the trap the monster had laid. She also remembered how Sham had disappeared without a trace and her family wasnt able to find them despite having made repeated attempts. She cursed herself for landing in this situation once more. There were too many issues involved now. She knew her sister was in love with Akash and she would have to eventually go into that house. The confrontations would happen and the phone call the previous night also spelt danger. Anjali was a wonderful human being and Khyshi wondered how anyone could think of taking advantage of her...

"iss duniya main acchey aur sacche logo ke saath hi aisa kyun hota hai Devi Maiyya... ab hum kya kare?"

Anjali ji ko agar koi iss sab se koi bacha sakta hai woh hai Arnav Singh raizada, lekin hum unse iss baare main baat kaise kare ...??? woh humari baat pe yakeen kyun karenge?

Thinking of the same she sets out towards the Raizada house but to her surprise see's Arnav is already at her gate. She looks at him wide mouthed and then looks away... then she smiles a little at him and asks him to come into the house as he gets off the car...

"main tumhare ghar main brunch buffet karne nahi aaya hoon...chalo mere saath"

Kh: Branch Barfi? woh kya hota hai ...

Ar: look girl, i dont have that kinda time... toh chup chaap mere saath chalo ... mujhe tumse baat karni hai ...

Khushi hesitates for a moment but decides to let the cat outta the bag. She decides she will tell him everything since there is no other way out. She gets into the car with him as they drive off. Armav stops the car right outside his office and asks her to follow him. She promptly does.

Once they reach the cabin he walks in and the door automatically shuts on her face as its too quick for her. She gets trapped outside looking helplessly how to get inside. He glares at her in anger at her stupidity, and then uses the remote to open the door that slides side ways. Khushi walks in and is about to take her seat and sit when Arnav starts to speak ...

"kitne lakh logi ...???"

Khushi is shocked... "ji???"

Ar: Kitne karod?

Kh: yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahey hai Arnav ji, hume kuch samajh main nahi aa raha ...

Ar: Kal tumne wahan pe jo dekha uss cheez ko leke mooh band rakhne ke lekin kitne karod logo ...

Kh: Arnav ji, hume paise nahi chahiye ... ( she says hurt) hum toh bas aapse yeh ...

Ar: ab kya iske badle tum apni behen ka rishta maangogi? dont try to play me Khushi Kumari Gupta ...
 Main apni behen ki khushi ke khatir kuch bhi karne ko tayar hoon ...

He stands up and walks towards her with a cheque book in his hand...  and places it on the table in front of her... "you fill in the price aur main tumhe doonga..."

Khushi looks at Arnav with anger in her eyes and says ... "toh kya mera mooh band rakhne se jo sach hai woh badal jayega?"

Arnav has no words... "Anjali ji ke saath jo ho raha hai woh sahi nahi ho raha hai .. aur kal yeh baat aapne aur humne apni aankhon ke saamne dekha hai "

Ar: thats not your problem ...!!!

Kh: Arnav ji, shayad hi hum ek doosre ko theek se jaante nahi ho, lekin Anjali ji humari dost hai.. aur woh dil ki bahut acchi hai ... unke saath theek nahi ho raha hai .. aur Shy... humara matlab hai ... unke pati acche insaan nahi hai ...

As she speaks on, Arnav slightly softens towards her, and his attention shifts to her baby like face with flawless skin... flaw if any is that one mark on her left cheek, that looks like a huge cut that she may have gotten during an accident or something ... he is so lost, in her for a second, he unknowingly ends up asking her ...

"kya hua tha ... " looking into her eyes ...

Kh: ji?

Arnav's face and expressions have pretty much softened, as he looks at her now differently... he points his finger towards the slight scar on her face... and asks ... "yeh... kaise hua ... "

Khushi has no words ... as she tries to recollect that traumatic day when she was trying to save herself in every possible way and had injured herself in the process ruining a part of her face. But this realisation suddenly brought back a certain idea that made her smile ... and she said ...

"aaj jab aap ghar jaoge, toh apne jeejaji ke daye haath pe lagey hue uss bade se nishaan ke baare main poochna- hum chalte hai ..."

As she walks away from there Arnav realises she has left her mobile phone behind...

He is about to call out to her when the phone starts to ring ... the ringtone is so annoying and the phone too simple to handle, he ends up pressing the receive button in place of end, and the phone goes on loud speaker and a person speaks ... "ab khushi ji .. hum bol rahey hai .. aapke shyam .. wahi shyaam ... ab itne din baad aapko dekha toh humse raha nahi gaya ...aur fir uss din jo kaam adhoora reh gaya tha ..."

Arnav is shocked as he recognises the voice, but Khushi who has realised she had left her phone behind also walks in to hear the lines that are being uttered ...

She acts tactfully in time and asks Arnav to go silent as she says ... "aap yeh Anjali ji ke saath kyun kar rahey hai ..."

Shyam: arey ... hum Anjali ji ke saath kya kar rahey hai ... biwi hai humari ... pyar karte hai hum unse ... unke paison se... unke aalishan gahr se... unke bewakoof bhai se... Arnav is sooo angry he walks to yell...

Khushi instantly holds his hand gripping it tight asking him to keep quiet. She simply cuts the phone as she notices a totally  Arnav Singh Raizada collapsing on the floor looking helpless for the first time since Khushi saw him... He still hasnt let go off Khushi's hand, and she wonders if she should free herself ...

"Di ..." he finally mutters ...

Khushi looks at Arnav, and thinks of words that could comfort him and finds none ... "Arnav ji woh ...

And then he realises all of a sudden he has been holding her hand, he lets go off it in a jiffy looks at her with blood shot eyes and says ... "Get out"

Khushi is speechless!

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moon_mine IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged
loved it!!!!
m so happy arnav knws the whole truth!!!!
bt wat happened to him at the end...y did he ask khushi to gt out????
pls update the nxt part soon!!!!!

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-aparna- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged
I hate that shyam.
Now arnav should understand that thre is no fault of khushi inthis mess.

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tina_1234 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
nyc part...was waitin for it...soo now arni knws abt sjyamu..lets see how he kills him

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Starktastic IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
woaaahhh i knew this 'get out' will come out soon from arnie's royal mouth LOL he very badly wanted to spit out doesn't he?

loved it honey drop Hug man you took ages to update!!
how you been doll?!?! missed ya

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.Saraa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 2:14am | IP Logged
loved it..really goood finally arnie knows the truth.

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-honeydew- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged
hey sweetiepie !! sorry was really busy ... but now i am back .. !!! i jus love Arnie and is one liners .. had to fit this one in Wink how u been ???i missed ya too Confused

Originally posted by NaDzGirl

woaaahhh i knew this 'get out' will come out soon from arnie's royal mouth LOL he very badly wanted to spit out doesn't he?

loved it honey drop Hug man you took ages to update!!
how you been doll?!?! missed ya
the_rain IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged

Update! DancingDancingDancing

I thought you were never going to update it! I'm so glad that you did. Loved it, loved Khushi, the way she decided to tell him the truth, the way she made him listen to the call and the way she rebuffed him when he offered her money.

Now let's see how ASR handles Snakey...Tongue

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