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FF: Mohabbat Door Jaane na De-part 16 pg 46 (Page 21)

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged

Part 6:

As she saw Arnav once more she suddenly went silent as what happened in the temple earlier in the day flashed in front of her eyes. The way he looked at her, had had an impact in their very first meeting, but then thought she would put it past her, since she knew her sister had been waiting for her.

Dekhiye, she began '. " aap keh dee jiye inhey, ke toh tickets, humara hai '."

There was no change in Arnavs expression as he let her speak '

"hum aur jeeji pichle 1 ghante se line main khade hai, aur yeh aake humare hissey ke tickets le gaye .. yeh toh sara sar nainsaafi hui na?...

As she was about to go on to the next line'. He says' " Yogesh, ticket ke kitne paise hue?"

Yogesh turned to Arnav saying ' "sir 500"

Dedo inhey wo paise '

Saying this he is  about to walk off, when Khushi holds his hand in anger and forces him to turn him around. He gives her a cold stare as she herself realises what she had done and she moves her hand away and says " hume aapke paise nahi chahiye ' hume sirf humari ticket chahiye '. Samajlo aap yeh baat' aur aapko kya lagta hai ' aap ticket ki keemat deke hume khareed lenge '.??? "

Arn: " Look whoever you are '.

Khus: Humara naam ( she is about to retaliate in anger when he raises his hand to stop her and says ')

Arn: Like I said earlier ' I don't care '.

Khus: Vilayti Sahabzaade honge aap ' aur uspe paiso ki itni akad ' do shabd hindi main bola nahi jaata hai '

Arn: ab tum had se bahar jaa rahi ho he says irritated raising a finger at her getting really irritated '.

Khushi looks at him with a determined look on her face and asks him ' " accha .. to aap hume humare tickets nahi denge '

No Reaction '.

Khus: hum aapse aakhri baar pooch rahey hai '

No reaction again as Arnav starts walking away '.

Much to his horror .. Khushi stands there and starts singing " meri saanso main tu muskuraye '.. " and this annoys the hell outta Arnav who turns around '.

Arn: Just shut up ! he says'

She pays no heed enjoying the power she has had over him.. and continues singing the song following him '. Anjali who see's this happen for a while gets off the car and walks towards Arnav and Khushi accompanied by Akash who helps her.

Anj: Kya hua chote '..

Arnav looks angrily at Khushi and then turns to his sister and says ' "kuch nahi di, chaliye dekhte hai '."

Khushi turns to Anjali and says ' " dekhiye ' aap toh samjhiye '. Aapke ye Vilayti Sahabzaade'. Humari ticket leke hume de nahi rahey ahi ' "

Arnv: one second ' ( realises she has accused him to speaking English) and corrects himself .. I mean .. mera matlab hai .. wo tumhara ticket kaise hua '. That doesn't even make sense'.

Anjali notices it is perhaps for the first time that she has heard Arnav smile or argue so much with someone, and she bursts out into a giggle. Arnav notices this and gets even more annoyed.

Arn: Ab aap kyun has rahi hai di '

Anj: kyunki aap dono bacho ki tarah lad rahey hai issi liye '

Payal also arrives by then and it is love at first sight for Akash who see's her explaining to Khushi why they should leave from there and they will watch the movie some other time. Anjali is quick to notice the expression on Akash's face and the irritation on Arnavs face. With a naughty glint in her eyes, she tells Akash'.

Akash " iss theatre ke maalik aapke dost hai na ' Kyu na aap usne pooch ke in dono ke liye bhi ticket maangwaley?

Kyun Khushi ' aapko koi problem toh nahi hai na?

Khushi jumps gleefully as on learning they will get tickets and says ' " pata hai yeh film humne 4 baar dekhi hai' lekin har baar iss main kuch naya dekh ne ko milta hai '. "

Arnav gives her a dirty look and mumbles under his breath "chaar baar dekh kar, itna drama '. "

Khushi notices this and says ' " aapne kuch kaha '"

No reaction '.

Anjali turns to Khushi and says ' " aap un pe dhyan mat do na, wo aise hi hai '

Payal nudges Khushi and starts talking to her in gestures' when Anjali notices this and says ' "koi problem hai ??"

Payal " ji nahi ' hum soch rahey thi .. film toh hum kisi aur bhi din dekh lenge '.  Haina khushi '."

But on noticing the disappointed look on Khushi's face, Anjali says '.  " chaliye na ' issi bahane hum sochenge .. hume do saheliya mil gayi '.. "

Arnav: agar unko aana nahi hai to aap itna zor kyun de rahi hai di '.

Akash's hopeful look turns a little disappointed as Arnav starts to speak. Anjali says ' " Chote aap kuch nahi jaante '. Humne decide kar liya hai na ' ghar ke maamlo main 'no interference '. "

They all walk into the theatre and as Khushi passes Arnav, she deliberately starts humming the tune of the song and enjoys him getting all riled up and she smiles to herself.

The movie begins and Khushi whistles much to everyone's shock and surprise. Arnav looks at his sister disgusted. Then Payal gives her a dirty look, when Khushi realises she had perhaps gone a little over board, fake smiles at everyone and turns to the screen. As the movie begins, payal's mobile falls and she bends down to pick up the mobile she places her hand on the handle of the chair, on which Akash is resting his arm, and she moves it away embarrassed. He notices she is looking for something, and he bends forward and turns the mobile light on, and looks at her glowing, face in the dark. The way he looks at her, she can't help but blush red. A love story has begun.

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Hahaha it was funny when khushi started singing that song and Arnav is like, just shut up LOL 
And sweetheart anjali as usual enjoying every situation Smile
Payash love story already started, I must say these two r very fast Wink
Really nice chapter Thumbs Up

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swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
awww khushi started singing...LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
luved it...
continue soon

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moon_mine IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
cool!!!! lovd the way hw khushi is irrittating arnav by singing the song!!!
n anjali is a darling as always!!!!
hope payal n akash's lovestory grow gradually over here!!!!
lukng frwrd to the nxt part nw!!!!
more of arnav khushi nokjhok n payal akash sweet romance!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Chaar baar movie dekh k bhi Bachoon k  terhaan she is fighting and irritating him
Shoo cute..
Akash is so ready to fall in love LOL
This was a cute update Smile

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FebruaryFlower IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
Hey dear!!
Fab update.
I'm so glad Anjali intervened, otherwise there would have been bloodshed...LOLLOL
Akash and Payal had a very cute moment!!
It was quite funny when Khushi started singing, just to annoy Arnav. Are they sitting next to each other by any chance?
Looking forward to the next part...Thanks for the PM!!

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..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
This is a great update
i love how khushi sang just to irrate arnav,
i am so glad atleast somewhere payash's love story has started
please continue

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