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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
great ff...really enjoyed readin it...
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Hey thanks ya ... !! glad you enjoyed reading it ... m adding you to the list right away Smile

Originally posted by aminakhan

great ff...really enjoyed readin it...
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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Jojo..

I would not be surprised if the creatives steal your idea about Arnav's past! This just fits in perfectly with the story! :) Loved how you showed how exactly did Raizada industries came into being! :) That was really really amazing :) Waiting for the next update.. because of the obvious reasons ;) ArHi meet :D Continue soon :)

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:21am | IP Logged
LOL ... tu padh rahi hai .. yehi mere liye sabse badi baat hai ... next part goes up today !!!Embarrassed wait for it darling !!!

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Originally posted by ..Jojo..

I would not be surprised if the creatives steal your idea about Arnav's past! This just fits in perfectly with the story! :) Loved how you showed how exactly did Raizada industries came into being! :) That was really really amazing :) Waiting for the next update.. because of the obvious reasons ;) ArHi meet :D Continue soon :)

Jyotika
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Lubed it Jeejiizz HugHug ab jaldi se update karo... warna!! Evil Smile

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Galarcher

LOL ... tu padh rahi hai .. yehi mere liye sabse badi baat hai ... next part goes up today !!!Embarrassed wait for it darling !!!



dunno bout them, I'm waiting!!...and waiting...and waiting!!

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part 4 coming up people Tongue

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
So step bye step explanation
I have never read ffs of this kind
Wonderful!!!!!!!!
Please can you pm me when you update
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Part 4:

Listen to:Mere Saanso main tu Muskuraaye

The song now seemed to echo and vibrate in his ears and totally disturb him. It brought back ugly memories and reminded him of untold miseries. The song no longer meant his mother waking him up, it spoke of all the nights he couldn't sleep, all the hardships, the pain ... that he had finally overcome after turning into a cold, hard hearted, shrewd man devoid of all emotions. Arnav had tried to keep his anger and hatred towards his mother intact but had left its happenings far behind for his own sake. For his di's sake. But today it was like all those years had never passed and each line of the song just reminded him of each event that had occurred in his life years ago. Obviously he couldn't sleep anymore.

He got out of his bed, picked up whatever clothes he could, totally ignoring Anjali's early morning aarti, nani's gestures and mami's reaction and started scanning rooms in the house to see where the sound was coming from.  When he realised it wasn't from his house, he asked his di in a hurry

Arnav: Di, yeh gaana kaha se aa raha hai ..

Anjali could tell from the tone that she dare not mess with Arnav at this point in time, so she sweetly offered him the aarti ki thaali and told him where the sound was coming from . She knew why Arnav was this mad, but she knew her trying to console him would meet deaf years, and hence said ..

Anjali: Paas waaley Mandir se... par rehn..'.

Before she could say more, Arnav walked off wasting no time , straight towards what had caused this early morning upheaval in his life. His fast beating heart had many unanswered questions filled in it. Was it his mother? If it was what was she doing here? He would make sure she would not come back into their lives again. But as he reached the temple, he got even more edgy as the song, its tune and the voice were so mesmerising he couldn't help but get drawn towards it.  It was as though he song had actually pulled him out of his bed straight to this place. He didn't like what has happening to him and hence he decided he would tackle this issue right away. But as he approached the temple stairs he noticed the song was coming from the other side of the temple, and all he could see was a speaker next to him that was booming loud. He managed to ask a lady humming the song as she was listening to it herself, and where the voice was coming from. The lady pointed towards the other side of the temple, as Arnav walked away from there as well.

Arnav was so angry by now that he walked straight to the speaker room from where the song was playing, and pulled out the person who was singing the song in a huff without even caring who it was.  The girl was in such a state of shock she could not even oppose him, and besides he had gripped her so tight around her wrist she kept yelping in pain. As Arnav pulled the girl into the open space and finally stopped in the middle of it, with anger taking its complete toll on him, he realised he was face to face with a young girl, of about 18, sweet and innocent looking, hair loosely tied in a plait looking at him totally perplexed and confused. Though he is a little taken in by her  almost moist eyes that seemed to make direct conversation with him he told himself he was not to break his resolve. Everyone around was as shocked but Arnav didnt care. The girl tried to resist it but in vain. She finally pushed him away with force and asked him in hurt and anger, holding her hand around the wrist where he had left imprints of his rough fingers.

"Yeh kya kar rahey hai aap ' aur koun hai aap '.."

Arnav grits his teeth in anger as though her singing that song was enough a reason to hate her '.

"tumhara naam jo bhi ho ''

Khushi ' she replies '. Even in that perturbed state '

"job hi ho '. Kal se tum woh gaana nahi gaaogi '. " He said with so much authority for once, the girl looked at him like she would readily obey him ' despite not knowing him.. but just for the pain and anger he carried in them'.

Lekin' Khushhi began ''

Arnav raised his hand, stopping her from talking further and said '.. "Bas nahi gaaogi '. I hope that's clear '." '

And before she could say anything else ' he walked off leaving the little girl in a state of confusion and shock.



Edited by Galarcher - 16 August 2011 at 2:59am

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