Nice story, but a bit rushed in the end. Some words were a bit confusing...you have used ''y" in places where there has to be a 'v'. Writing Hindi in English is always tough, I understand.
And this was a classic FW style AC type story - kidnapping everyone one by one, but definitely better explained and no PK stories.
I haven't read your chase story yet. Just wanted a good Daya dose after Saturday's debacle, so decided to read this one. Will read when I get time. 😊