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***"Tere Naal Pyaar Hogaya*(GeetMaanff)lastPart XV (Page 3)

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by soni4eva

awsome luv da concept
cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list x


hi Soni,
i am glad that u liked the concept.. yup will pm when i post next part.. thanks for replying..tc
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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gopi06

congrats for your new ff bhoomi...its totally different from your previous works...this the reason why I nominated you for most versatile writer in ff awards...its difficult for me to understand panjabi ,but I know its need for the story..cont soon
thanks for the pm


Hi Gopi,

Thanks ... i am able to write post only with the lovely readers here like u... u all  make me to think write.. thanks to u..my new ff is here... :) glad u felt its different from my previous work..i do try to make ech story having its own charm..ya but bhoomi ka style to rehta hi hai na..lol... oh god u nominated me...thatttsssooo sweet of u... u know we are a bit greedy for compliments...and ya i did check the moninations and after reading ur mail..checked it again..was so happy u nominated me..thanks dear... this little means sooo much..thanks u ..
yup i had to give punjabi touch..but hope u can understnad the scene... yup will post next part..soon..tc
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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by namita18

Hey Bhoomi..

How r u ??
Finally u r back..
I was so surprised when i saw ur pm after so long...
I just missed ur ff., i dont come often here now., so thats why i missed commenting in ur last poem..M REALLY SORRY for that..
But I'll make sure that my comments will be regular on this amazing ff..
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I love romantic ff, and above  all this one of ur ff is combination of poetry and story  with elegence,which was quite refreshing, and I just loved it...
I just love every bit of it.. it brought a constant smile on my faceTongue and I like geet maan too..Wink.They make a nice couple..
 
Every line of ur poetry was so amazing...
and geet's dialogue's were really funnyLOLLOL, totally suits her character.
Concept is very interesting.. ab dekhte hai geet apne pati ko kaise sudharti hai...lolzz..
 
It is very different from ur previous works becoz its a combination of poetry and story and it has romantic and funny elements too..
 
M eagerly waiting for next update..
Pls update soon..
 
Thanx for the pm..
 
Namita


Hi Namita,

I am fine ...hope u doing well as well... yup finally I am back..ahhh missed been here sharing work sooo much..cant tell u... oh no problem if u missed commenting... atleast u like to read and u r here on this ff reading my work means a lot.. even i get busy these days and now with a new laptop i am hoping i can post faster and much more active here than before..hopefully... and chalo dosti mey yeh Sorry worry kahan sey ayaa?? no need to say sorry atalll ..dear... achall so u liked this story  start... heheh geet na..bechara Maan kya haal hoga we have to see..waise who willchange we dont know..kaun kisko sudharega i dont know.. hope u enjoy the next part as well.. yup poetic lines to readers ki farmaish hai so will keep that going on along...tc

bhoomi..
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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mad_lovee

Wink Tusi te chaa gaye Bhoomi babu pehle part vich hiTongue  I m sure dis story gonna rock just like ur othr write-ups :) I m eagerly waitin for the next part...yaar tusi cheti cheti free ho jao naSmile


Hi Himani,

heheh hun kahan chayee tussi chaa gayeho..kya banner ekdam mast ... and pehley pat ko padh kuch achaa laga na? taudey wastey yeh pura story bana hai..hope tauda dil mujhse naraz khafa na ho bas..aur kuch nahi chahiye... aaa writeups jaisa heehhe.. ab hope u like whatver this story provides.. little bit of all i hope... cheti cheti reply to kiya .. aur free hpe i become.. luvu dear.. tc

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
part 2
oh that was hilarious...
now even Maan too behaving like Geet...
this effect the next morning itself of their wedding and night...
wah...
but love the snippets...
cont soon...

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
awesome ff..
loved it...
plzzz add me to ur pm list...
continue soon...:)

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 2
oh that was hilarious...
now even Maan too behaving like Geet...
this effect the next morning itself of their wedding and night...
wah...
but love the snippets...
cont soon...


Hi,
I am glad that u enjoyed the second part... hilarious u felt it was...ooo I am so glad... as i wanted to bring elements of smile laughter in this segment..glad u enjoyed and liked it... yup Maan pe geet ka asar horaha hai... hehhheehh ya ya pehley din agey dekho kya kya hoga..:))

tc
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