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***"Tere Naal Pyaar Hogaya*(GeetMaanff)lastPart XV (Page 2)

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maaneetsangel

congrats !!!!!!! 4 d new ff ...

add me to ur pm list ...

nice ... interesting concept ...

continue soon ...

thanks... yup ok i have added to buddy list and so easy to add in pm list.. glad u liked the start to this story..hope u continue to like it further..

tc
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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

hey dear nice to see u again...
Happy Friendship Day...

congrats on new ff...
part 1
wow Geet is unique...
Maan is highly irritated by her non stop talking...
cant wait to read about their journey...
thanks for the pm...
cont soon...


Hi
yup nice to be back here and having u all here reading.. sooo glad dear that u liked the start and liked Geet... yup Maan is irritated and he is married to her..dekheny how their first night turns.. hope u like the remaining parts... will try and post sooner and not too late... i am more glad to pm and get such lovely readers for my story ..tc
Bhoomi

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

kya baat hai Pm me dear


glad u r enjoying the parts.. hope agey bhi achaa lagey.. will pm tc..

Originally posted by jyothi_cool

Wow awesome cont soon


Hi jyothi,
wow so good to be back and have u here reading my work.. so glad to get ur reply dear... hope u like this story..and ya poetic lines bhi added u see... tc

bhoomi

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suba2011

nice...i'm not good in hindi,if possible in translate in eng..tq


Hi ,

Oh i am so sorry there are many lines in hindi and in punjabi and few of urdu wordings.. u can ask me which line u cant understand.. a little difficult for me to translate all of them u see ..as i have already written 9 parts and working on the further and want to finish the story in the time i have set... but ya if u cant get something in the flow of the story surely will try and translate... by the way further into the story it will be easier for u..i wont tell much abt that and why..:)

tc
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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
awsome luv da concept
cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list x

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 12:00am | IP Logged
congrats for your new ff bhoomi...its totally different from your previous works...this the reason why I nominated you for most versatile writer in ff awards...its difficult for me to understand panjabi ,but I know its need for the story..cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged

Hey Bhoomi..

How r u ??
Finally u r back..
I was so surprised when i saw ur pm after so long...
I just missed ur ff., i dont come often here now., so thats why i missed commenting in ur last poem..M REALLY SORRY for that..
But I'll make sure that my comments will be regular on this amazing ff..
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I love romantic ff, and above  all this one of ur ff is combination of poetry and story  with elegence,which was quite refreshing, and I just loved it...
I just love every bit of it.. it brought a constant smile on my faceTongue and I like geet maan too..Wink.They make a nice couple..
 
Every line of ur poetry was so amazing...
and geet's dialogue's were really funnyLOLLOL, totally suits her character.
Concept is very interesting.. ab dekhte hai geet apne pati ko kaise sudharti hai...lolzz..
 
It is very different from ur previous works becoz its a combination of poetry and story and it has romantic and funny elements too..
 
M eagerly waiting for next update..
Pls update soon..
 
Thanx for the pm..
 
Namita

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Wink Tusi te chaa gaye Bhoomi babu pehle part vich hiTongue  I m sure dis story gonna rock just like ur othr write-ups :) I m eagerly waitin for the next part...yaar tusi cheti cheti free ho jao naSmile

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