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Well guys i'm bak wid another sceneWink...Oh god jus going crazeee thinking abt Kriyansh 24/7Silly...but as Sneha said to write up a plan soo i thot of a plan actually Rey thotTongue...sooo hope u guys enjoy reading itBig smile coz its all abt out dear ChabilalEmbarrassedjus scroll down


Heya all my D3 frnds'..firstly HAPPYY FRIENDSHIP DAY to u allHugHugHug

ok cumin bak 2 d topic dis post is related to our dear Baatcutter nd Rani Laxmi BaiLOLLOL

as we all knw dat Jhansi ki Rani is bak wid a BANGCool nd dis tym she will surely bang KriaOuch'.many of us r dreading wat will happen nd wat will not happenConfused

thinking soo much abt D3 24/7 as it was a weekend and I was bored  a scene came up into my mind which I thot 2 share wid u all nd best thing it's a ReYam sceneEmbarrassed...i was going mad thinking about wat will happen wen Kria's mom goes to college dat i came up with a ReYam scene related 2 d current situation...so hope u all enjoy itBig smileBig smile


Rey was walking across the corridor when he spot Swaym standing at the middle of nowhere as if he was confused where to go to.LOL

'Hey Swaym wat's up?' said Rey patting Swaym's back.

'aur kya Problem is up, nayi LOC peda hogayi.' Said Swaym all tensedLOL

But poor thing did not notice that Rey was already lostDay Dreaming and who else will it be then Kria who was jus few feet away from where they were standing. Rey was totally lost taken in by Kria's beauty as the wind blew her hair and her face lit up with the sunlight pouring in from d window nearbyDay Dreaming but something felt wrong.

Rey's thotsWink- Baatcutter kitni achi lag rahi hainEmbarrassed'kitni maasum lag rahi haiBlushing'aur kitni tensed dikh rahi haiConfused'aur yeh kya baatcutter itni chupOuch

Rey's eyes moved towards the person standing in front of Kria.Shocked

'OH SHIT RANI LAXMI BAI' screamed ReyShockedShocked

'kya' said Swaym but before he could say anything and before Kria or her mom turned and saw them Rey pulled him aside to d empty classroom where dey stood near the door peaking out to watch Kria and her mom.Tongue

'aye kya ho kya gaya tujhe Rey, aur yeh rani laxmi bai ka kya chakkar kya hai.' Sai Swaym all confused

'arey woh rahi rani laxmi bai,' said Rey also tensed and pointing towards Kria nd her mom

'kaun Kriya?' asked Swaym

'nahi woh tho baatcutter hai na' sai Rey as a matter of factlyLOL

'oh oh acha, kaun Kria ki mom' screamed Swaym nd immediately Rey put his hand on Swyam's mouth.

'abhey dheere bhol na, warna Jhansi ki rani sun legi' said Rey holding Swaym's mouth.

'ha ha sorry'woh xcitement mein hogaya' said Swaym moving Rey's hand nad both of them bak to focusing Kria nd her mom.

'oh tho acha'sasu ma ko pyaar se Rani Laxmi Bai bulatta hain.'Wink Said Swaym n a teasing tone hitting Rey wid his shoulders while Rey was blushing.Tongue

'Kria ke saath sasu ma ka bhi naam nahi le sakhtha na,' said Swaym teasing Rey.LOL

'Abhey acha tho tu battha tu kis naam se pukarega apne sasu ma ko.' Said Rey

'arey pehle sasu ma ki entry tho hone do,' said SwaymTongue

'acha mujhe yeh batha ke baatcutter itni chup kyun hai.' Asked Rey

'arey jhansi ki rani ke saamne koi kuch bhol sakhtha hai.'said SwaymLOL

'but dude wat is she doing here?'

'who sab tho nahi patha but I think uski mom ko shak hogaya abt dance.' Said Swaym tensed

'oh shit phir tho Kria ki help karne hi paregi.' Said Rey thinking of a plan.

well dats it wid d scene...hope u guys enjoyedEmbarrassed

and if anyone also comes up with any scene do feel free to shareBig smile

PLAN SCENE

 Swaym was waiting outside d costume room impatient of what Rey is planning to do. He started walking across d corridor when finally d door opened nd Rey stood in front of him. Swaym was shocked and was confused was this really Rey. Rey was dressed in fultush Laagan wala Aamir Khan style with a new addition'MUCCHAR.LOL

'Aye,' said Swaym moving back looking at Rey's new avatar. 'Rey tu hi hai na?'

'wrong, humara naam hai Chabilal' said Rey in d village accentWink

'WAT?Chabilal' said Swaym, 'yaar yeh kya funda hai tera kabhi'baatcutter' tho kabhi 'rani laxmi bai' aura b yeh 'chabilal'ka kya chakkar hai.'

'yeh na private tym ki baat hai'mere aur Romaira ke beech.' Said Rey thinking abt Kria.

'ab yeh Romaira kaun hai mere bhai.' Said Swaym irritated.

'tu chor na, yeh RDX ki party ki baat hai, tu busy tha Sharon ke saath.' Said Rey 'acha yeh batha kaisa lag raha hoon main, I mean koi pehchan tho nahi lega'

'ek sec mujhe tere plan abhi tak samajhe mein nahi aaya, Chabilal' said Swaym

'aur kabhi aayega bhi nahi ofcourse yeh Reyansh Singhania ka plan hai' said Rey patting himself

'theek hai main jaa raha hoon' said Swaym and turned away but Rey stopped him.

'arey ruk tho sorry sorry tu mera sabse acha dost hai na plsss.' Said Rey hugging Swaym trying to stop him.

'acha chor dekh tu kehra isliye yeh sab kar raha hoon' said Swaym like a little kid, 'lekin tu Rey ban ke kyun nahi jah raha hai, yeh fancy dress kyun'

'kyun ke Rani Laxmi Bhai mujhe pehchanlegi.'Wink

'ek sec ek sec Rani Laxmi Bai tujhe jhanti hai pehlese'

'haan maine bataya tha na first epi ki baat hai.'

'par first epi mein aisa kya hua.'

'tu chor na long story hai.'

'nahi tu mujhe batha warna mein jah raha hoon.' Said Swaym abt to turn again but Rey stopped him.

'acha acha ruk batha tha hoon' said Rey stopping Swaym from leaving again and tells him how he met Kria in Dehradun and what happened that night.

'oh acha tho Dehradun se connection hai,' said Swaym teasing Rey 'waise sasu ma ke saamne alredy image ki wat laga di tune'LOL

'wohi tho problem hai, agar pehchan liya tho mere liye kam Kria ke liye zyada problem.' Said Rey tensed and looking around.

'acha ab Chabilal ki story batha na' said Swaym like a five yr old

'tu batha teri Siren Sharon ke saath RDX party nite story.'

'teek hai teek hai mat batha ab chal.'

Swaym and Rey walk towards Kria and her mom where Kria's mom was lecturing her about her studies.

Kria's mom sees Swaym and gets more furious.

'TUM!! tum phir se aagaye,LOL kaha na maine tumse mujhe meri beti se akele mein baat karni hai' said Smriti angrily.

'mom aap uspe kyun gussa kar rahe ho.' Said Kria nd both strtd arguing

'hehe tere bhi image kharab hai inke saamne.' Whispered Rey in Swaym's ears

'very funny tu apni image pe dhyaan de, waise bhi Jhansi ki rani aaj full on mood mein hai' said Swaym

'arey maidamji let me introdooce mychelf, mr.Chabilal from paas waale gao' said Rey stopping the argument between the mother-daughter.Tongue

'WHAT?' said Kria nd her Mom in unision.

'Chabilal.' Said Kria getting angry but Swaym whispered in her ears 'Kria react mat karo, yeh Rey hai'

'woh mujhe patha hai isliye tho react kar rahi hoon' she whispered bak.

'arey woh tumahari madat kar raha hai, jus wait nd watch, aur kuch mat bolna' said Swaym

'yeh kya kushr pusr kar rahe tum dono,' said Smriti looking at Kria and Swaym.

'arey yeh bohot khusr pusr kar the hai aye tum yaha aajao hum yaha kare hothe hai.' Said Rey moving Swaym away from Kria and standing beside her.

'lekin aap kaun ho?' Asked Smriti

'jhi mychelf student op dis coolege' said Rey.

'senior student,' said Smriti looking at Rey's avatar.

'arey nahi maaji,' said Rey but when Smriti gave the look on maaji he said 'sorry Mrs. Ghai-ji hum tho Kria-ji ke saath parhai karthe hai'

'oh tho aap iski friend ho'

'haan,' said Rey nd den whispered to Kria 'Romaira ki friend'

'woh kya hai na Mrs. Ghai humari bohot hi shad shtory hai, humare bapu humse bachpan mein bohot khethi baari kar wathe the, lekin humara ek sapna tha ke hum ek din is baare se sheher mein aake parhai kare ab bachpan mein tho kehthi baari karthe tym paas-' Swaym hit him for using English, 'mera matlab samai nilkalgaya tho isliye ab aaya hoon parhai karne.'

'well Chabilalji yeh tho achi baat hain, umar chahe kuch bhi ho but education is first right important, hai na Kria?' said Smriti trying to get d message to her daughter.

'huh, haan ma.' Said Kria distracted by Chabilal.

'arey Mrs Gai(cow)  sorry mera matlab Mrs. Ghai humari Kriya-ji tho top class hai, yeh tho humari gyaan shiksha woh kya kehte hai murti hai'

'he means idol' said Swaym looking at Smriti's confused look.

'haan woyi woyi, agar aaj Kriya-ji nahi hoti tho hum tho is college se out ho jhathe,' said Rey looking at Kriya and getting loost in her. Swaym hit him 2 bring him bak 2 his senses.

'woh kaise?' asked Smriti.

'yeh hume phreee mein tuitions jho dehthi hai aur bhi bohot saare beaklings ko tuitions dehthi hai isliye tho yeh pamous hai aura b har jaga Kria-ji ki charche hai'

'kya beak- wat' said Smriti.

'oh he means Weaklings.' Said Swaym

'arey maidam-ji aap ko yahan par Chin ke baare se diwaar se bhi baara diwaar nahi dikh ra' said Rey

Looking at Smriti's confused xpression Swaym said 'great wall of china se great wall humare college mein hai'

'haan beaklings aur dajjlings ke beech.' Said Rey

'yeh kya bacho ka khel hai kya.' Said Smriti

'arey mrs. Ghai dajjlings ne humari Kria-ji ko challenge kia hai ke mujh jaise se unpar ko ajucated banane ke liye, is liye sab beaklings Kria-ji ko congra-' Swaym hit him again, 'baadhai deh rahe hai ke kuch dino mein mujhe kya se kya bana diya.'

'haan sirf final touches dena bakhi hai' said Swaym when Smriti wasa checking out how Kria changed Chabilal.

Jus den from nowhere Neha was coming towards them.

'Arey Kria tum yahaan ho-' said Neha but Rey quickly  pushed Neha before Smriti saw her while Neha went flying into the arms of a passerby who was none other then Vicky.

'Haila,' said Vicky and went loost again in Neha's beauty as she was there lying on his arms(imagine the pool fall guys nd bg music 'jab se tere naina')

But as if that was not enough Sharon-Simmi-Rinni were walking towards them. Rey quickly said 'SIREN SHARON' to Swaym nd pushed him towards them while Swaym confused wat to do started singing the siren and running around them stopping the three from moving ahead. Sharon at frist seemed to be lost in Swaym. Sharon thot even when he does stupid things he's so adorable, OMG what was she thinking. She gets pissed and turns back and goes away from Swaym before he would get her more crazy. Swaym ran behind Rinni-Simmi thru d whole corridor making d siren sound.

'arey meri beti itna acha kaam kar rahi hai aur mein patha nahi tujpe shak kar rahi hoon, I'm sorry,' said Smriti hugging her daughter

'its ok mama,' said Kria relieved that her mom did not find out abt d dance but felt bad too for lying lyk dis. 'acha mom aapko kaam ke liye der nahi ho rahi?'

'ha who tho hai'acha mein chalti hoon beta'aur Chabilalji'

'ji maa- mera matlab Mrs. Ghai ji?'

'thnku'ab aap jaise dost ho tho mujhe tho koi tension nahi.'

'mamma' said Kria

'acha acha mein jah rahi hoon, bye beta c u at home.' Said Smriti and left

'bayeee' said Rey happily waving.

'TUM' said Kria angrily turning towards Rey.

'arrey baap re,' said Rey nd started running before Kria attacked him, he saw s costume door open and entered quickly as Kria also followed but tripped over but Rey caught her just in time.

'arrey Kria ji aap theek tho hai na' said Rey still in his Chabilal accent. While Kria stood up and started laughing looking at Rey. Rey was lost again mesmerized by her beauty which enlightens more when she laughs wid her heart.

'Chabilal apna mooch tho samhalo' said Kria laughing.

'huh' said Rey nd den realized his mooch was half out.

'waise Chabilal rocks rite?' said Rey

'wrong'mere maa se jhoot bhola tumne.'

'acha maine aur tumne kaun sa sach bhola' said Rey

'woh woh meri maa hai.' Said Kria defensively.

'arrey ek tho help karo upar se insult bhi suno.' Said Rey turning away from Kria.

'par thnx for helping,' said Kria, Rey cudnt help being shocked but at the same tym cudnt help but smile. When Rey didn't turn Kria said 'Romaira ke taraf se Chabilal ko thnx'

That moment sumhow felt very magical. Rey turned and moved towards Kria who moved backwards and hit the wall. Rey moved close 2 Kria who was finding it difficult 2 breathe. Rey moved away d bunch of hair falling on her side and placed them behingd d ears and went close towards her ears and whispered. 'aur tumhe Kria kuch nahi kehna'Embarrassed

Kria was lost, she was smiling lyk a mad person, something was happening, something she never felt before, his touch shot like a current though her, what was happening to her, was she'Day Dreaming

She den ran off before she would do anything stupid or felt anything anymore. Rey stood dere smiling watching her run off.Embarrassed

hope u all liked itBig smile


 

 



Edited by sweetshine - 10 August 2011 at 6:04am

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged
RES :)
Be back in 10 mins!

*Edit*
I'm back! =)
Sorry I had to reserve, but I wanted to be first! *Selfish me* :P

But anyway, tumne toh ReyAm ki poori yaad diladi yaar! Ab main kya karoon? It's Sunday, we still have to wait 24 hours to actually watch them on screen again! :/ But this was SOOO cute!! It's SOO ReyAm - like I can totally imagine them talking like this! This was awesome!

I loved this bit: 
'Kria ke saath sasu ma ka bhi naam nahi le sakhtha na,' said Swaym teasing Rey.LOL

HAHAHA :P Swayam is tooo good! Love that guy!! =D 

Oy, if you can, write up a plan scene also na ;) It would be awesome, I'm suree!! =D


Edited by -Aicha- - 07 August 2011 at 7:04am

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
AWW LOVED ITTT <3

So amazing haha and so perfect and now i SO want to have a ReYam scene :D

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 8:27am | IP Logged
omg loved ittt sooo muchhh!!!
hahhah so perfect 4 reyam talking abt
RANI LAXMI BAI...lol
hahhaha too good...
i can imagine this scene so clearly
finally i controlled myself yaar!!...lol
AMAZING work!!!
keep it up!!!!
 

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Aicha-

RES :)
Be back in 10 mins!

*Edit*
I'm back! =)
Sorry I had to reserve, but I wanted to be first! *Selfish me* :P
hahaha sooo sweet of u SnehaEmbarrassed
But anyway, tumne toh ReyAm ki poori yaad diladi yaar! Ab main kya karoon? It's Sunday, we still have to wait 24 hours to actually watch them on screen again! :/ But this was SOOO cute!! It's SOO ReyAm - like I can totally imagine them talking like this! This was awesome!
i knw dis weekend felt too long dis tym nd i was thinking thinking nd den i strtd making up dis scene in my mind...lol sooo boooredLOL
I loved this bit: 
'Kria ke saath sasu ma ka bhi naam nahi le sakhtha na,' said Swaym teasing Rey.LOL

HAHAHA :P Swayam is tooo good! Love that guy!! =D 
haha thnx yaar seriusly i luv Swaym especially wen he's arnd Rey he's totally differentEmbarrassed
Oy, if you can, write up a plan scene also na ;) It would be awesome, I'm suree!! =D
hehehe din think abt d plan scene but will do it soonBig smile
mine in BOLD

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Originally posted by .Supriya.

AWW LOVED ITTT <3

So amazing haha and so perfect and now i SO want to have a ReYam scene :D
thnx SupriyaBig smileglad u luvd itBig smile

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Monu_

omg loved ittt sooo muchhh!!!
hahhah so perfect 4 reyam talking abt
RANI LAXMI BAI...lol
hahhaha too good...
i can imagine this scene so clearly
finally i controlled myself yaar!!...lol
AMAZING work!!!
keep it up!!!!
 

thnx monuBig smileglad u luvd itBig smile

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
I loved it Sweetshine...It is so ReYumlicious...(LOL Hope that made sense)

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