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"How much I love you nobody knows"

Nobody knows its empty
this smile that i wear...
the real one is left in the past
because u hav left me there...?!!
?

Nobody knows i m crying
they wont see even my tears...
when they think thai i m laughing
i still wishing u were here... ?!!
?

Nobody knows it's painful
they think that i m strong...
they say that this wont kil me
but i wander if they were wrong... ?!!
?

Nobody knows i m praying
that u will change my mind...
they think that i let u go
when u left me behind... ?!!
?

Nobody knows i miss u
they think i feel set free...
but i feel like i m bound with chains
trapeed in the mystery... ?!!
?


Nobody knows i need u
they say that i can do it my own...
but they dont know i m crying
when i m alone

~~Hey guys i had written this long time back, thought of posting it here, hope it wasn't boringLOL . . . Me and my friend were like talking about something and then it just clickedLOL i felt sad and lonely so i wrote thisLOL~~


Edited by --pinkdiamond-- - 04 August 2011 at 2:43pm

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wow what a poem dear ClapClap 
so damn emotionall and so damn fantastic!! ClapClap
keep posting these kinda poems Wink

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Lovely Poem :D


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:D oopsie double post



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It was a beautiful poem...rhymed up very well!
Quite an emotional one...and the pain it emanates is heart shattering and soul ripping...every word gave out the longing to be together and be loved and make a world where all was good and the lovers were together !

Your words weaved a magic...I'm spellbound reading this poem :)

On another note, I don't think anyone can just write such a deep poem filled with so many emotions by just discussing it with a friend...to write sad and anguish and pain filled poems a person needs to really feel it! And none would welcome loneliness in their abode...thinking too makes a difference !!!
But, if you've really written it as you say...just talks n all...hats off to you girl !

I would love to read more of your works...your a good poet :)

TC,
Fatima

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