IT SANG TO ME... | Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 12 years ago

Heyyy All...I am GEET...This is My First attempt to write a Poem...Just feel like it...Hope you all like it...😊

                                   IT SANG TO ME...

                                                            The Pen Screamed
                                          Begging for one last touch
                       Before I forget how to hold it,caress it,make love to it
                                                I fumbled
                   It being a long time Sine I felt that passion burning inside
                                                The words denied going with me
                      They were bored of the same routine every time
                                                   It was decided
                       They would dictate their own texture,their own rhyme
                                    I let them work their magic on me
                                                        And it was magic indeed
                          It was a wave such intense,I could not even breath
                                      Before I put that last drop of ink at the end

                                                        I wrote a Poem
                                                      And it sang to me

I know its Pathetic😳...But I just tried yaar...Plz leave your Precious comments...It means a lot to me😊

Lots of Love
GEET

Edited by sweetdesire - 12 years ago

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@Sunnipwincessx

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow Awsome poem

first sumeone wrote poem in IF useli i read FFz

gr8te job thnx ur poetry lukz lyke

thnx for the pm xx

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

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Posted: 12 years ago

ii loveedd itt. amazinnngg

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Sej

@SejN

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Posted: 12 years ago

this is a very nice poem and very very interesting :)... you should write more like these soon :D.. awesome work geet :)<3 thnx for the pm and tc :)

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Neha

@Neha_J

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow geet,

it was awesome, i loved every bit of bit

do write more in future

tc

luv,

neha[shona]

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נαηηαт

@jannat4ever

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Love...😛

finally finally i m here to edit my comment...
i know took a long time but u know me...aadat se majbur hu yar...
coming to the mater piece...
how dare you...how can you call it..Pathetic????😡,...
u know wat its mind blowing you dying-for-hearing praises-girl...😉
i toh fell in love wid this poem..😍
its so meaning full nd not to forget the emotions...made me bowled yar...❤️..
"begging for one last touch...Before I forget how to hold it,caress it,make love to it" lines made me smile with an unknown feeling u know where u cn only feel it...just like angel yar...
"I wrote a Poem
And it sang to me" just outstanding
great job jaana...👍🏼
do wirte more and its an order...
u have to do it when u r so good in it...😊..cant explain wat have you done...
fine its not like the high-figh poem of famous writers but indeed its your first poem nd its really amazing ...👏
so dont u dare to criticize yourself ...😡just remember to improve love...😛
thanx for d very soon PM...😆
take care

Lots nd lots of Love
jannat
ur sweetheart

Edited by jannat4ever - 12 years ago

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youth_showsfan

@youth_showsfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey geet it was a very sweet poem

but defo with a huge meaning behind it

i loved this poem

it was soo simple yet meaningful

do write more

cause u r a good poetic

nd thnx fr d pm

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Nimra

@WILD-ROSE

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Posted: 12 years ago

Excuse me Geet. WHO TOLD U THAT ITS PATHETIC? 😡😡😡

ITS BEAUTIFULL! 😳
seriously i like it that much im saving it in my notepad :) Don't worry i ll not leak this and i wudnot even take the Credit, its just i love reading it. Welldone. Miss Poet😊

Luv
Wild Rose.

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unknown

@Rapunzzel

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey geet it was a very sweet poem

loved it

do write more

nd thnx fr d pm

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Priyanka

@..KaJenDelena..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Heyaaa Geet!

The poem is one of the most Amazing Poems I have ever Read. Not even kidding. I mean it from the bottom of my heart, I never knew you wrote? Bring them on... Please? ;)

Literally every word held a poemy? feel to it. It was just beautiful. Loved how you started it! "The pen screamed". Beautiful writing. I loved the whole story behind it and also loved the ending " I wrote a poem and it sang to me". Please Please keep writing, with the way you played with your words, you will be a famous IF writer in no time.

Loved LOVED LOVED IT!

xx Priyanka ;)

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