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sweetdesire IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Heyyy All...I am GEET...This is My First attempt to write a Poem...Just feel like it...Hope you all like it...Smile


                                  
IT SANG TO ME...



                                                            The Pen Screamed
                                          Begging for one last touch
                       Before I forget how to hold it,caress it,make love to it
                                                    I fumbled
                     It being a long time Sine I felt that passion burning inside         
                                                The words denied going with me
                      They were bored of the same routine every time
                                                     It was decided
                       They would dictate their own texture,their own rhyme
                                              I let them work their magic on me          
                                                        And it was magic indeed
                            It was a wave such intense,I could not even breath
                                        Before I put that last drop of ink at the end

                                                        I wrote a Poem
                                                      And it sang to me



I know its PatheticEmbarrassed...But I just tried yaar...Plz leave your Precious comments...It means a lot to meSmile

Lots of Love
GEET




Edited by sweetdesire - 04 August 2011 at 10:27am

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Wow Awsome poem
first sumeone wrote poem in IF useli i read FFz
gr8te job thnx ur poetry lukz lyke
thnx for the pm xx

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
ii loveedd itt. amazinnngg

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
this is a very nice poem and very very interesting :)... you should write more like these soon :D.. awesome work geet :)<3 thnx for the pm and tc :)

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
wow geet,
it was awesome, i loved every bit of bit
do write more in future
tc


luv,
neha[shona]

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jannat4ever Goldie
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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Hey Love...Tongue

finally finally i m here to edit my comment...
i know took a long time but u know me...aadat se majbur hu yar...
coming to the mater piece...
how dare you...how can you call it..
Pathetic????Angry,...
u know wat its mind blowing you dying-for-hearing praises-girl...Wink
i toh fell in love wid this poem..Day Dreaming
its so meaning full nd not to forget the emotions...made me bowled yar...Heart..

"begging for one last touch...Before I forget how to hold it,caress it,make love to it" lines made me smile with an unknown feeling u know where u cn only feel it...just like angel yar...
"I wrote a Poem
And it sang to me
" just outstanding
great job jaana...Thumbs Up
do wirte more and its an order...
u have to do it when u r so good in it...Smile..cant explain wat have you done...
fine its not like the high-figh poem of famous writers but indeed its your first poem nd its really amazing ...Clap
so dont u dare to criticize yourself ...Angryjust remember to improve love...Tongue
thanx for d very soon PM...LOL
take care



Lots nd lots of Love
jannat

ur sweetheart




Edited by jannat4ever - 07 August 2011 at 10:11am

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
hey geet it was a very sweet poem
but defo with a huge meaning behind it
i loved this poem
it was soo simple yet meaningful
do write more
cause u r a good poetic
nd thnx fr d pm

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Excuse me Geet. WHO TOLD U THAT ITS PATHETIC? AngryAngryAngry



 
ITS BEAUTIFULL! Embarrassed
seriously i like it that much im saving it in my notepad :) Don't worry i ll not leak this and i wudnot even take the Credit, its just i love reading it. Welldone. Miss PoetSmile

Luv
Wild Rose.

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