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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Loved it Marcy.So close to the original,that I could visualize these scenes happening in the future.The creative heads of the show should for sure read ur story,They can fine tune their script after reading urs.Too good man.Do continue...

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Vishwa-

 Even though I loved the OS, it was so sad it made me cry Cry
I love the emotions that were brought out in both parts... gosh
the two idiots get back together already!

awww dont be sadSmile
thanks so much for liking my OS


Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 04 August 2011 at 2:30pm

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by music1

Loved it Marcy.So close to the original,that I could visualize these scenes happening in the future.The creative heads of the show should for sure read ur story,They can fine tune their script after reading urs.Too good man.Do continue...

Awww Seriously?!!! Wooow thank u sooo much...ur comment made my day!!! *Big Hug*HugBig smile

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Wow, that as beautifully laid out.. Superb, I could feel Arnav's pain through the screens. Out of this world job. Shaym and Khushi? Oh someone make me and Arnav both puke at the same time.

Cannot wait for part 3.

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Hey Marcy!!
Loved the update. I'm really glad you continued with this.
I really liked the way you've described Arnav's feelings. The battle within him is so apparent as is the pain within him. A fantastic piece of writing by you...well done!!ClapClap
I really hope he can get to her in time to stop the wedding.
Thanks for the PM angel...update soon!!!
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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
Seriously wondering what could have happened? Sumtin to do wit anjali? nooo not shyam, actually doesn't matter since arnav dulhaniya le jayega, :-) hopefully. Hp he gets there in tym, its been 2 days since he got the invite. Dont tell me he's gonna think its with khushi's happiness this wedding is takin place. Very well written, totally got me engrossed. thx 4 d pm.
PS, hope u gonna update soon, and write other stories too.

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Awww... That was sad. Please get the two love birds together soon Heart Smile
Btw thanks for the PM
Update soon:)

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