OS Completed Pg. 20: ~You're mine...Forever~ - Page 4

Loved it Marcy.So close to the original,that I could visualize these scenes happening in the future.The creative heads of the show should for sure read ur story,They can fine tune their script after reading urs.Too good man.Do continue...

Originally posted by: -Vishwa-

 Even though I loved the OS, it was so sad it made me cry 😭
I love the emotions that were brought out in both parts... gosh
the two idiots get back together already!

Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: music1

Loved it Marcy.So close to the original,that I could visualize these scenes happening in the future.The creative heads of the show should for sure read ur story,They can fine tune their script after reading urs.Too good man.Do continue...

Wow, that as beautifully laid out.. Superb, I could feel Arnav's pain through the screens. Out of this world job. Shaym and Khushi? Oh someone make me and Arnav both puke at the same time.

Hey Marcy!!

Awh poor Arhi are both suffering :(
Thank god Anjali knew the torture Arnav's suffering
I hope he stops the wedding & gets his Khushi back, update soon :)

Seriously wondering what could have happened? Sumtin to do wit anjali? nooo not shyam, actually doesn't matter since arnav dulhaniya le jayega, :-) hopefully. Hp he gets there in tym, its been 2 days since he got the invite. Dont tell me he's gonna think its with khushi's happiness this wedding is takin place. Very well written, totally got me engrossed. thx 4 d pm.
PS, hope u gonna update soon, and write other stories too.Edited by pinkpearlz - 12 years ago

Awww... That was sad. Please get the two love birds together soon ❤️ 😊
Btw thanks for the PM
Update soon:)

Oh My God!!!! this is amazing

great part...khushi is marrying somebody else?