Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil

FF#TUM KAISI MOHABBAT KARTE HO ch# 26, pg 69, 1/6

AnokhiKhwahish thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

 


STORY START FROM;

Its a story between punjabi n rajhistani family.
Kalpana rathod aur kulraj agni ki bachpan ki dosti rishtedari main tab badli jab kalpana rathod ne apne chote betey vikram k liye kulraj agni ki beti jaya ko mang liya. Dono khandano main bohat eka hai. Is liye jab kulraj agni k sb se chote betey raj agni k ghar sb se choti beti ayi tou kalpana rathod ne us ka naam heer rakh diya or heer ka asal naam tou ab kisi ko yaad bhi nahi raha jo sirf certificates ki haad tak reh gaya.
Phir janey kalpana ji k dil main kya samai k heer ko apnay baray betay ki bahu banane ka faisla kar lya.shub us waqt agree tha. or heer ko kuch nahi bataya tha kyun k wo bohat hassas hai or apni family se dur nahi jana chahti.
Prem jo kalpana ji ka pota or kulraj ji ka nawasa hai shru se hi boading school or hostle main raha hai. Ab wo wapis aaraha hai,( is baat se bilkul anjan k wo aa nahi raha balke usay bulaya hai, uski qismat ne, usay Mohabbat ne bulaya hai, ab wo kAb prem k samnay ayegi ye tou waqt btaega).

Prem dono parivaron main se agar kisi k sb se kareeb hai tou wo Anmol hai.
Anmol agni prem ki insperation, heer k adviser, teacher, guru etc.
Shub couzin tou prem ka hai lekin family bonding ki wajah se heer ko bhi couzin ki tarah treet karta hai infact hukum chalata hai. 

* Mohabbat kis k dil ki zamin pe pehle apna bej boye gi? 
Ab dekhna ye hai k do alag log jab ek rishtey main bandhen ge tab zindagi main konse naye rang bikhrenge. (HEER & PREM)

INDEX;

CHAPTER 1 (INTRODUCTION)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45766274



STORY OF COUSINE MARRAIGE...

Edited by InnocentZindagi - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

463

Views

72514

Users

26

Likes

458

Frequent Posters

AnokhiKhwahish thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

CAST & SKATCH:


 
KULRAJ AGNI:

Prem's nani, Heer's dadi. Soft in nature.


 
ADITIYA RAJ AGNI:

Heer's paa, Prem's mama JI. Owner of a Mall and many companies. He's 1st word is last word as order.

 

BHAGYA SHREE AGNI:

Heer's mother, prem's mami. Perfect mother and helpful wife.

 

ABHIMANYU AGNI:

Heer's elder brother. Strict, sharp in bussiness, bt love his family.

 
AHEM AGNI:

Heer's 2nd elder brother. Careful, naughty and chill in nature.

  

HEER:

Chulbuli, natkhat, sensitive, sometime notanki, zindagi ko enjoy karne wali, thori na samajh, thori buzdil, lovly voice but hazitate to sing infront of anyone. Puray ghar ki jaan hai.
She love nature creations. Specially moon, stars, sea,e.t.c.

  

TAJ AGNI:

Heer ka chota bhai. Sensitive, sub main khushiyan batnay wala.

  

RAM AGNI:

Heer k chachu or prem k chotay mama. Nice personality, friendly 4 nephew n niece.

  

ANMOL AGNI:

Heer k tao ji k baray betay. He is philosopher n quite in nature. Heer or prem both r attached him too much. He is owner of a event manegment company.

 

SANSKRITI:

Heer's best friend. Total romantic, cute, shokh n shor machanay wali.

 

AASTHA SAXENA:

Prem niwas(sargam nagar ka ghar) k brabar main saxena family rehti hai unki beti. Helpful nature. She like heer alot.


Neharika, amar, priyanka n (anonymous) r heer's n prem's cousins.

 

KALI: Radio of Agni vila.

 

KALPANA RATHOD:

Prem's dadi. Sweet, active and house controller.

 

VIKRAM RATHOD:

Prem's dad, heer's uncle. Bohat strict, gussay wale and order giving. Owner of hotels.

 

JAYA RATHOD:

Prem's mother, a house wife, soft heart mother and chahiti bahu.

 

PURVA CHOUDHRY:

Prem's elder sister, best sis for prem & anmol. Sweet, loving and caring. She is a doctor.

 

SIDDHARTH CHOUDHRY:

Prem's brother in law. Friendly, cheering n sincere person. Son of Mr. Agni's friend Arnav choudhry.

 

PREM RATHOD:

Heart of dadi n anmol. Shant, love n create poetry, (adarsh) farmanbardar, love his family, want to create his career without using rathods refrense. Full of emotions but not shown it.

 

PREET RATHOD: 

Prem's younger brother. Apne aap main Mast, shararti n cool one. Heer ko bohat satata hai.

  

KUNAL KAPOOR:

Prem's best friend. he was lived in orphans home before college. he has a sis meher. he is funny, loyal n naughty.  kunal main ek keera ( insect) hai jo jab jab usay bite karta hai wo prem ko bohat tease karta hai.  n he also intrupt in prem's sentence sooo much which make prem angry n many time he feel helpless. but also prem love him because of his loyality.


SHUB RATHOD:

Prem's cousin, make stable his life according to him, love his self. (According to prem "apna kaam hojae dunia jae bhard main")


Surbi, samrat, rajeev n other cousin n characters appear in order to story or script.

Edited by annokhi - 12 years ago
AnokhiKhwahish thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

PM LIST

REPUNZELL

VRUSHIKA

FATIMA  

PRIYAHMT

ZIGZAGWAY_SADI

ANGELINA_ANGEL

CITYGIRL2011

AYESHA103

OBLIVIOUS

shweta2005

Edited by annokhi - 12 years ago
repunzell thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
me firsttt...yayyy👏!!!

firstly thank u for the PM

n now the update...the idea is very goodd...i liked it😊!!!

but y not heer n prem first...chalo lets see how the story unfolds!!

update soon!!!
Edited by repunzell - 12 years ago
Ms.Raizada thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
new ff 
i m here 2 read
plz add me 2 pm list if ur starting 1
Ms.Raizada thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: annokhi

 

 

CENTRAL IDEA.

Its a story between punjabi n rajhistani family.
Kalpana rathod aur kulraj agni ki bachpan ki dosti rishtedari main tab badli jab kalpana rathod ne apne chote betey vikram k liye kulraj agni ki beti jaya ko mang liya. Dono khandano main bohat eka hai. Is liye jab kulraj agni k sb se chote betey raj agni k ghar sb se choti beti ayi tou kalpana rathod ne us ka naam heer rakh diya or heer ka asal naam tou ab kisi ko yaad bhi nahi raha jo sirf certificates ki haad tak reh gaya.
Phir janey kalpana ji k dil main kya samai k heer ko apnay baray betay ki bahu banane ka faisla kar lya or ye baat sirf kuch baron ko maloom thi.
Prem jo kalpana ji ka pota or kulraj ji ka nawasa hai shru se hi boading school or hostle main raha hai. Ab wo wapis aaraha hai or apni baqi k parhai sargam nagar main puri karne ka irada rakhta hai,( is baat se bilkul anjan k wo aa nahi raha balke usay bulaya hai, uski qismat ne, usay Mohabbat ne bulaya hai, ab wo kb prem k samnay ayegi ye tou waqt btaega).

Prem dono parivaron main se agar kisi k sb se kareeb hai tou wo Anmol hai.
Anmol agni prem ki insperation, heer k adviser, teacher, guru etc.
Shub couzin tou prem ka hai lekin family bonding ki wajah se heer ko bhi couzin ki tarah treet karta hai infact hukum chalata hai. Usay bilkul nahi maloom k us ka naam heer se jurne wala hai.

* jab shub ko pata chalega tou wo kya karega?

* Agar Heer shub k sath khush thi tou usay kis k nazar lag gai?

* Prem or Heer kab, kaise, kahan milenge?

* Mohabbat kis k dil ki zamin pe pehle apna bej boye gi?

Ab dekhna ye hai k do alag log jab ek rishtey main bandhen ge tab zindagi main konse naye rang bikhrenge.

 


sounds interesting
but y nt prem and heer???
yeah i knw every writer has gt his or her own imagination
so looking forward
finally premeer have 2 meet
so all the best
Ms.Raizada thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: annokhi

res 4 list
if u want to add in pm list then send me buddy request bc i only know how to acpt requst. Nt know about how 2 send

hey its very simple
go 2 ur frndz list there u'll see many thngs
like pending blocked etc
on top there is  add new buddy to the list
just type the name of person and then click on add to buddy list simple
 and then type the name of person and click on add to busy list
simple
and yeah thnkx fr the pm...
and hope this helps
-Fatima- thumbnail
Anniversary 15 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
it soundz interesting looking forward to read more :)
i love the title itz one of my fav song
b/w can u try to write tuny miny in eng my hindi is quiet not tht good 😳
add me in urz pm list :)
luv
Fatima
JugniPH thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Easter Egg Contest Winner (2023) 0 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
sounds interesting...
waiting fr the update...
-Xpress- thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!!!
 
Nice Intro...
Looking forward to reading it..
 
DO add me to ur pm list
 
TC..