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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rozy77

hi aysha

 

oh I loved this os. It was so awesomeClap

just having the guys was so much funSmile.

Abhay is a little devil winning all that moneyWink. He sure got every1s attention.

Ive always liked angad. He's a pure soul, am glad he went to talk to AbhaySmile.

Jeh was awesome doing that limbo dance but god neel fell down, that was hilariousROFL.

Even Kabir enjoyed himselfSmile.

Aww Abhay donated all the money to the orphanageBig smile.

Am glad the guy's spied on him, atleast they know he's not the person they think he is.

 

This was a real entertainer hun, loved it soo muchBig smile.

U should do another 1 wid the boy's again

Thanks for the pm

I was thinking of doing another Shot with the boys in mind but its having the time. I am definitely going to write a quick shot on a boys adventure into the wilderness. Abhay is a lucky devilWink
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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Monu_

hiii dear---i loved this Os a lott
amazing n i really enjoy it
it was needed a BoysNightOut..lol
loved abhay jay convo a lott
reminded me of abhishek-hrithik scene in dhoom 2...lol
before ya after the song Dil Laga
its not an offence sorry..just this came 2 my mind..thats it
n the last lines were too good
For Jeh this was an eventful Boys Night Out. For Abhay it was about redemption. For Kabir an eye opener. For Angad pure fun. For Neel a headache
will comment soon on ur other works
sorry 4 the late replies
love yaaa
mmuuaahh =)
I am just reading through some of my old work and thought i'd comment on what i could improve on for my next Boys night out. This will be mainly Kabir and Abhay bodning. I seem to make AJEH the centre of attention all the time.

Sometimes there are scenes from movie i have in my head so i guess when i wrote this i never even realised where i get some of my ideas from. I watch alot of entertainment World cinema to be frank and i don't mind your wonderful analysis.Big smile
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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Very cool Ayesha di!

Boys night out is a great idea! I wish something like this could be shown in the show and everyone could see what and Angel Abhay is actually! Embarrassed

What I have noticed from your FF - they end up in a very positive note that makes me want to read more!Tongue

Good job! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by @nup@m@

Very cool Ayesha di!

Boys night out is a great idea! I wish something like this could be shown in the show and everyone could see what and Angel Abhay is actually! Embarrassed

What I have noticed from your FF - they end up in a very positive note that makes me want to read more!Tongue

Good job! Thumbs Up
handovermouth2.gif image by hoozieg I love sending a little message at the end of my FF;s and i like ending them on a good note than it being sour and depressing.
 
I am an upbeat kind of girl so my Writing should shower U with positivity. I might try my hand at writing a very emotional OS and see if i can get the tear dicts working in all of my readers.

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