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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Hmm...I am roaming around this forum and accidentally land here.But thank God!! I have found a interesting story.ClapRight now I have just read its CS,Introductions,Theme and Chapter 1.Its awesomeClap
  ...then Shatrupa called him in a low voice ..'excuse me sir'...but still didn't get response...at last she became a bit louder..'sir'...and then at last station master woke up...but as he was still not awoke properly..he couldn't locate why a beautiful girl is calling him..he thought he is still having a day dream...now Shatarupa lost her patience..and became louder..'are you listening to me ?'...now the middle aged man gained his consciousness fully and took his spectacles..and observed her again...he understood that the girl is coming outside from town...though she is wearing Churidar-kurta..but her dress up says she is coming from big city like Kolkata..but he couldn't understood what the girl is doing in this remote town..he was confused..'madum you.'...'yes me..waiting for your daydream to end...Shatrupa is impatient now...'sorry actually i am not well these days' station master is really ashamed'...'say mam how can i help you?'
@Blue is wow nad @Red is funny but fantastic.
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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 6:04am | IP Logged
bapre u??? how did u find this???Confused..thanks 4 comment

Edited by Kadamvari - 24 December 2012 at 6:02am
DeewaniRimi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Nice second partClapBut father-son conversation became little melodramatic I guess. But overall you are really great.
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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
SmileThird part has three different thing...
1.Shatarupa-station master-Devu.well its little mischeivious but I like itWink
2.Roro-Dev.part little melodramatic but very good.
3.Ahem.ahem...Mr. BasuMallik is late forty and Mrs.Baumallika in late thirty...when they got married?????
and now I need some 10-15days break to read and comment because I have something personal reason.so I am very Sorry in advance for be lated.
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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
thanks 4 commenting
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Hey dear..
it's really a long tym..
we want ud..
kab de rhi ho?
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swati_prithvi

Hey dear..
it's really a long tym..
we want ud..
kab de rhi ho?


actually m waiting desperately to see rajat onscreen..tab tak m not getting the urge of updating..but january mein pakka dungi
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