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sultanahabeeb

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged
make ur promise pakka as i have already started counting the dates nd yes is destiny connectoin ke baat ate hi hamara dil garden garden hogaya nd plzzz yeh up boring nahi hai as ihave finished my 4th reading

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
didn't had time but read this it with a super speed...awesome...keep up the good work...thanks for pm sweetie...

Edited by Freethinker - 09 October 2012 at 7:55pm

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aru_86

at last updated..don't kill me for boredom or leave the ff , from next update you will get what you desired

thanks for update but its not boredom n will not leave it in any condition as it is fav. ff of fav. couple!!
and we liked to read RTMC lovely updates but its doesn't mean tht ur writing is boredom u r excellent writerClap

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 1:34am | IP Logged
awesome update!!
liked entire description of school n kalabhavan
and its history too!!
loved debo n his mother tht rupa got close as family member with them so easily n early! their story too was nice! liked debo's father too!
and after reading abt principal reminded me teacher guessing similar to scold in guddi film song "humko man ki shakti dena"
loved the way u described mr. dev's past n entire history of basumaliks!
its very sad tht his mother took herself as reason of their downfall!
his marriage with anusua was best suited exciting 1 to prince!
so roro have aunt too! in very upseting reason between relation of roro n his father distanced. hope his visit to india will make him rituraj from roro n will help to disappear to distance between them!
excited abt rituraj n shatrupa's 1st meet!

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
aru :
 
 
commenting on your 6th october update, as usual i gasped at the length of the update ..it was so huge that i had to complete it in two parts, but nevertheless, i loved how you juxtaposed the past history of the BasuMallicks with the present scenario although i think you could have cut it short ..anywayz, keep more comingSmile. update soon.

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
thanks 4 commenting


Edited by FairyDreams - 20 October 2012 at 9:00pm

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 6:52am | IP Logged
ud 5


finally raj has landed .. sry going to be landed on india...
 me landing here too.. on dis ff thread...
 yipieee!!...
 claps..
 raj aa raha h india...
 party sharty oye!..
 dhuool nagade bajao!!...

roro .. feel nhi aayi..
 raj se feeling aati h...
 raj, india n srk n bollywood...bhot garaha rishta h...deep bond u see..

 okey, lets strt cmnt frm first of update...
 seriously a big update,...
vry long...
 but damn interesting...
 history mujhe kabhi pasand nhi aati , i hate it..
 but...
 aapke ff ki histories i read wid full focus n understnding..
 loved the way you picturise it...

 rupa had reached the school n she liked it...
 skul ka bhi history is interesting..
 i liked your manipulation upons dates, years n generationg span...
 claps fr it gain...

head mistress  is strict...
but i like her...
 
dance class bhi hot sunder jagah h...
dance lookks beautiful in open spaces...
surroundings matters...i liked d class too..

usa...

deb hav a lot of guilt i feel..
 n his eloping adventure ws gr88...

bhagvaan kare aisa hi kuch raj k ander aa jaye...
 rupa k sath elope karne ka...
its a dream.. bass sachh hone ki derr h...

basumallik history is awesome...
 regality deteriorating..
 and raj is the only hope...
 he will win it i noe...
 wishes to him...
 

n rupa is bestest luck for dis family i know...
 once she enters raj life...
 vo haar nhi sakta kisi se..
he wil win, win fr sure...

lovely update.
 update soon...


sry fr late cmnt..
 hostel mei time bhot kamm milta h...


Edited by sweetsanyo - 14 October 2012 at 6:53am

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 6:53am | IP Logged
res fr  update six...

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