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make ur promise pakka as i have already started counting the dates nd yes is destiny connectoin ke baat ate hi hamara dil garden garden hogaya nd plzzz yeh up boring nahi hai as ihave finished my 4th reading

didn't had time but read this it with a super speed...awesome...keep up the good work...thanks for pm sweetie... Edited by Freethinker - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aru_86

at last updated..don't kill me for boredom or leave the ff , from next update you will get what you desired

thanks for update but its not boredom n will not leave it in any condition as it is fav. ff of fav. couple!!
and we liked to read RTMC lovely updates but its doesn't mean tht ur writing is boredom u r excellent writer👏

awesome update!!
liked entire description of school n kalabhavan
and its history too!!
loved debo n his mother tht rupa got close as family member with them so easily n early! their story too was nice! liked debo's father too!
and after reading abt principal reminded me teacher guessing similar to scold in guddi film song "humko man ki shakti dena"
loved the way u described mr. dev's past n entire history of basumaliks!
its very sad tht his mother took herself as reason of their downfall!
his marriage with anusua was best suited exciting 1 to prince!
so roro have aunt too! in very upseting reason between relation of roro n his father distanced. hope his visit to india will make him rituraj from roro n will help to disappear to distance between them!
excited abt rituraj n shatrupa's 1st meet!

aru :

thanks 4 commenting
Edited by FairyDreams - 11 years ago

ud 5


finally raj has landed .. sry going to be landed on india...
 me landing here too.. on dis ff thread...
 yipieee!!...
 claps..
 raj aa raha h india...
 party sharty oye!..
 dhuool nagade bajao!!...

roro .. feel nhi aayi..
 raj se feeling aati h...
 raj, india n srk n bollywood...bhot garaha rishta h...deep bond u see..

 okey, lets strt cmnt frm first of update...
 seriously a big update,...
vry long...
 but damn interesting...
 history mujhe kabhi pasand nhi aati , i hate it..
 but...
 aapke ff ki histories i read wid full focus n understnding..
 loved the way you picturise it...

 rupa had reached the school n she liked it...
 skul ka bhi history is interesting..
 i liked your manipulation upons dates, years n generationg span...
 claps fr it gain...

head mistress  is strict...
but i like her...
 
dance class bhi hot sunder jagah h...
dance lookks beautiful in open spaces...
surroundings matters...i liked d class too..

usa...

deb hav a lot of guilt i feel..
 n his eloping adventure ws gr88...

bhagvaan kare aisa hi kuch raj k ander aa jaye...
 rupa k sath elope karne ka...
its a dream.. bass sachh hone ki derr h...

basumallik history is awesome...
 regality deteriorating..
 and raj is the only hope...
 he will win it i noe...
 wishes to him...
 

n rupa is bestest luck for dis family i know...
 once she enters raj life...
 vo haar nhi sakta kisi se..
he wil win, win fr sure...

lovely update.
 update soon...


sry fr late cmnt..
 hostel mei time bhot kamm milta h...
Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago

hi 

Wow! b'ful ud dear...
bt tumne bahut intzar karwaya ud k liye..
aur ye kya? maine to socha tha ki is ud me Raj aur Rupa ki mulakat hogi..
bt I guess thoda intzar aur krna padega abhi...
no probs..
yaar I jst luvd this ud..
u hav described everything b'fully...
Ichagunj's schul...kalabhavan..
Deb's childhood..his memories..
I jst hope ki Raj aur uske fathr k bich me sab thik ho jaye..
1dum pahle jaisa...
wen I was reading ud..
I ws really feeling lyk...
I m in Ichagunj...
I could imagine d palace...
finally Raj lft for Ichagunj..
let's see what happns now??
I m sure..his lyf is going to take a big & imp turn in Ichagunj..
waiting for d nxt ud..
pr jyada intzar mt karwana plz..

thanks rasu , surabhi and swati 4 such beautiful comments..trying to ud soon