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Hey I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR FF so so so much...plz continue soon and plz plz plz PM me plz...

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Originally posted by rashi.rose

Hey I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR FF so so so much...plz continue soon and plz plz plz PM me plz...
thank u sooo much for liking yah sure i'll be pm u.Smile

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lovely updateClap.Clap..misha is so meanAngry..feel bad 4 piyaCry n whats maithali upto??????????????thnx a lot 4 the pm.Smile..

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Originally posted by madhuri16

lovely updateClap.Clap..misha is so meanAngry..feel bad 4 piyaCry n whats maithali upto??????????????thnx a lot 4 the pm.Smile..
thank u sooo much .Smile

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hey Di please continue... kab update karoge next part????...

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Originally posted by rashi.rose

hey Di please continue... kab update karoge next part????...
thanks for waiting i already wrote chapter 2 in my pc but there is some problem with my pc so i'll try to update it soon.Smile

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Chapter 2

SID REACH TO THE INSTITUTE.
SID WALK IN CORIDOOR SUDDENLY HE SAW AN INSTRUCTOR COMING TOWARDS HIM. SID STOP AND WAIT, HE REACHED AND SAID.
INSTRUCTOR: HELLO SIR! THANK GOD AP AAGAYE. MAIN AP HI KA WAIT KAR RAHA THA.
SID: YES! KAHAN HAI WO AUR AAJ USNE KYA KIYA?
THEY BOTH START WALKING.
INSTRUCTOR: PEHLE TO WO SUBHA MUN ANDHERE YAHAN AAGAI, PHIR WATCHMAN SE JHAGRA KIYA AUR AB, AB TO HADH KARDI HAI USNE HAMARI EK INSTRUCTOR JO USEY FASION DESIGNING PROJECT KI INSTRUCTION DE RAHI THIN UN KI SAREE KO JAGA JAGA SE CUT KAR DIYA.
SID: WHAT? SHE HAS MANURES OR NOT?
BOTH REACH THE OFFICE.
SID: I'M WAITING IN THE OFFICE. CALL HER AND SEND HER IN THE OFFICE RIGHT NOW, UNDERSTOOD?
INSTRUCTOR: SURE SIR! MAIN ABHI USEY BHEJTA HUN.
SID: O.K THEN! MOVE FAST.

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CORIDOOR

MISHA SHOCKED WHEN SHE SAW PIA ENTER IN COLLEGE.
"WHAT THE HELL! YE YAHAN KAISE PUHANCH GAYI?"
SHE MOVE TOWARDS ABHAY.
"HEY ABHAY! PIA REACH AT THE COLLEGE YAAR." MISHA LOOK DISAPPOINTED.
"WHAT? LEKIN TUM TO KUCH AUR KEH RAHI THIN." ABHAY MAKE FUN OF HER.
"YAH! BUT I CAN'T UNDERSTAND K WO YAHAN ITNI JALDI KAISE PUHANCH GAYI. DAMN YAAR MAINE TO SOCHA THA K AAJ HINDI KI TEACHER SE PIA KO PUNISH KARWAUNGI. BUT?"
JAY ENTER IN SCENE.
"BUT PIA KO WO HAMARA ANGRY MAN COLLEGE LE KAR AA GAYA."
ABHAY AND MISHA: WHAT?
JAY: YAH.
ABHAY: AREY YAAR! YE HAR JAGA HAMARI GAME CHOPAT KAR DETA HAI.
ABHAY K PICHEY KOI AA KAR KHARA HUA LEKIN USEY EHSAAS NAI HUA KISI KI PRESENCE KA. JAY AND MISHA TRYING TO STOP HIM BUT HE DIDN'T.
ABHAY: STUPID, DAFFUR, IDIOT, ETC. 3,4 SAAL TO BARA HOGA MUJHSE LEKIN YAHAN MERI HI CLASS, BUS GROUP ALAG HAI. IT'S FUNNY NA, KUCH TO GARBAR HAI AUR YE TUM DONO MUJHE KYA AJEEB ISHAREY KAR RAHE HO?
SUDDENLY A SPARK IN HIS MIND.
ABHAY: TUM TO AISE DEKH RAHE HO JAISE MERE PICHEY WO?
MISHA AND JAY APNI NECK KO YES KI POSITION MAIN HILANE LAGE.
ABHAY: AREY TUM TO AISE DEKH RAHE HO JAISE MERE PICHEY WO...?
MISHA AND JAY AGAIN MOVE NECK IN YES.
ABHAY TURNS AND LITTLE PANIC BUT DIDN'T SHOW.
"HAR EK K RASTEY MAIN MAT KHAREY HUA KARO. KHUD KA TO KOI RASTA HAI NA MANZIL, DUSRON K LIYE KYUN PROBLEMS CREATE KARTE HO." HE SAID.
ABHAY WITH SERIOUS MOOD:
"I AM SORRY."
SUDDENLY MAKE FUN:
"UNCLE"
AND LAUGH.
HE FROWN ON HIM AND SAID.
"TUM JAISO KO SABAQ WAQT, HALAAT OR LOG NAI KUDRAT SIKHATI HAI AND U WILL BE. NOW, CLEAR MY WAY."
ABHAY CLEAR HIS WAY AND HE GONE.
ABHAY: HUUU! THE GREAT ANGRY AGNI SINGHANIA, NO NO NO UNCLE.
ALL R LAUGHING.

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INSTITUTE OFFICE

SID IS WAITING, MAITHLI ENTER IN ROOM.
"KYUN BULAYA HAI MUJHE?" SHE LOOK ANGRY NOW.
MAITHLI KI AWAZ SUN K SID TURN HUA AUR APNI JAGA PE JAM GAYA.
WAHAN K INSTRUCTORS MAITHLI KI SHIKAYAT KAR RAHE THE AUR US K BAD BEHAVIOUR K BAREY MAIN BATA RAHE THE LEKIN SID KO KUCH NAI SUNAI DE RAHA THA. HE JUST CONCENTRATE ON MAITHLI'S FACE WHO LOOK SO CUTE WITH DIFFERENT ANGER EXPRESSIONS.
"WOW, GHUSSAY MAIN B KOI KHUBSURAT LOG SAKTA HAI, AMAZING." SID THINK.
MAITHLI NOTICED SID AND QUICKLY ASK.
"AISE KYA DEKH RAHE HO? KABHI KHUBSURAT LARKI NAI DEKHI?"
SID REPLIED: I LIKE YOUR CONFIDENCE, MISS KHUBSURAT. WELL, TO AAP HAIN WO JINHO NE IS INSTITUTE MAIN BAWAAL KHARA KIYA HUA HAI?
MAITHLI: KOI SHAK? MUJHSE ZIYADA HIMMAT IS INSTITUTE MAIN KISI MAIN NAI HAI.
SID: IMPRESSIVE. NOW, CAN U PLZ TELL ME AAP NE SAREE KYUN CUT KI?
MAITHLI: FAISHION K NAAM PE EK TO GHATIYA KAPRAY SILWATI HAIN N THEN MUJHSE KEH RAHI HAIN TRY IT. WHAT THE HELL SHE THINK, MAIN WO KAPRAY PEHNO JO KISI B ANGLE SE KAPRAY KAM AUR DHAJJIYAN ZIYADA LAG RAHI HAIN IMPOSSIBLE BAS ISI LIYE MAINE UNKI SAREE KAAT DALI. SHE DESERVE THAT UNDERSTOOD, WHAT EVER U R.
SID: HMMM! BAAT TO AAPKI SAHI HAI MISS KHUBSURAT LEKIN AAP KO YE HARKAT NAI KARNI CHAHIYE THI. ITS OVER THE LIMIT, DON'T U THINK.
MAITHLI: SABAQ AISA DENA CHAHIYE JO DUBARA GHALTI KARNE NA DE AUR HAN JO MAIN KARTI HUN US K BAREY MAIN NAI SOCHTI AUR JO MAIN KAR CHUKI HOTIN HUN US K BAREY MAIN SOCH K APNA TIME WASTE NAI KARTI. NOW, I'M LEAVING.
SHE SAID AND GONE.
SID: BEAUTY WITH ANGER, SUPERB COMBINATION.
HE ALSO LEAVE WITHOUT ANY DISCUSSION AND PUNISHMENT.

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MISHA: ABHAY DO SOMETHING YAAR. PIA KO HINDI KI TEACHER SE CLASS MAIN WARNING DILWAO WARNA WO HUM SAB KO MAM SE JHARKIYAN SUNWAYE GI GENIUS JO HAI MAM KI NAZAR MAIN.
ABHAY: HOW?
MISHA: IDIOT! MISS REVA DHOLAKIYA JO HAMARE SAATH KYA AAP PANCHVI PASS SE TEEZ HAIN KI GAME KHEL K QUESTION ANSWER PUCHTIN HAIN US K JAWAB SIWAYE CHAND LOGON K AUR KOI NAI DETA N TOP ONE IS PIA.
ABHAY: OH YA! BORING QUESTION ANSWER.
MISHA: DO SOMETHING, KUCH AISA KARO K DHOLAKIYA AAJ PIA KO DANT DE.
ABHAY: ITS REQUEST, BET AUR CHALLENGE?
MISHA: ITS BET DEAR! KYUN K DHOLAKIYA PIA KO GHORTI B NAI HAI PUNISH TO DUR KI BAAT HAI.
ABHAY: DONE! IF I DID IT THEN U GAVE ME UR BIKE FOR A LONG RIDE.
MISHA: SURE! LEKIN TUMHARE DAD KO PATA CHAL GAYA TO? UR DAD IS TOO STRICT YAAR. ITNE AJEEB RULES HAIN TUMHARE GHAR K.
ABHAY: YAH! I KNOW BUT DON'T WORRY UNHEN KUCH PATA NAI CHALE GA AND OTHERWISE BHAI HAIN NA.
MISHA: YAH, UR BRO! AB TAK SIRF SUNA HI HAI MILNA TO SHAYAD HI HO TUMHARE DAD K RULES KI WAJA SE ITS IMPOSSIBLE, UFFF.

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SID DRIVE HIS CAR N THINKING ABOUT HER.
"KITNI CUTE HAI AUR ROOTHI HUI TO AUR B PIYARI LAG RAHI THI. I CAN'T BELIEVE IT K MAIN EK LARKI SE ITNA IMPRESS HO SAKTA HUN. AAH WO CHEHRA AB SHAYAD HI BHULA PAUN."
SUDDENLY HE STOP HIS CAR.
"NO SID! YE TUM KYA SOCHNE LAGE HO? U R NOT THOUGHT LIKE THIS." HE SAYS HIS SELF.
PHIR SID NE KHUD KO RELAX KIYA.
"IT'S O.K YE MERI SOCH HAI AUR MUJHE ITNA TO HAQ HAI K ACHI CHEEZON AUR BEAUTIFUL LOGON KI TARIF KARUN." HE FEEL RELAX NOW.

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CLASSROOM

MISS DHOLAKIYA ENTER IN CLASS.
ABHAY SIT BEHIND PIA AND HE START TEASING HER.
ABHAY: PEN HAI, PEN?
PIA: NAHI HAI.
ABHAY: PEN HAI, PEN, PEN?
PIA(GHUSSE SE): NAHI HAI EK BAAR KA KAHA SAMAJH NAHI AATA. AB AGAR MANGA TO HATHOREY SE SIR PHAR DUNGI.
ABHAY: HATHORA HAI?
PIA: NAHIN.
ABHAY: ACHA TO PHIR PEN HAI?
PIA: NAHI HAI.
ABHAY: PLZ DE DO NA.
PIA(IN LOW VOICE): JUST SHUT UP ABHAY! MUJHE NOTE KARNE DO JO MAM BOARD PE LIKH RAHI HAIN.
ABHAY: U R VERY RUDE PIA! AGAR MUJHE HINDI AATI HOTI TO MAIN TUMHE HINDI MAIN BURA BHALA KEHTA.
PIA: THANX 4 COMPLIMENT AUR YE FARSI THI?
ABHAY: PLZ PEN DE DO NA. KOI SA B DE DO I DON'T MIND.
PIA: UFF! JUST WAIT DEKHTI HUN EXTRA PEN HAI YA NAI.
MAM NOTICE PIA.
PIA SEARCH PEN BUT DIDN'T FIND.
PIA: NAHI HAI.
MAM KO GHUSSA AANE LAGA.
ABHAY SAW MAM'S EXPRESSIONS AND SAID.
ABHAY: NEVER MIND PIA, BETTER LUCK NEXT TIME SO ABHI MAIN APNA PEN USE KARLETA HUN.
PIA: WHAT! TUMHARE PAAS PEN THA TO YE ITNA DRAMA KARNE KI KYA ZARURAT THI. U...
"PIA STAND UP." MAM SAID.
"YES MAM." SHE SAID.
"OUT FROM CLASS." MAM REPLIED.
"BUT MAM..." SHE WANT TO SAY SOMETHING.
"NO ARGUE WITH ME! JUST GO OUTSIDE." SHE ORDERED.
"PLZ MAM! YE SAB ABHAY KI WAJA SE HUA." SHE HAS TEARS ON HER EYES.
"I SAY GET OUT FROM CLASS, NOW." SHE SHOUTED.
PIA NE EK NAZAR SAB KO DEKHA AUR PHIR BAHAR AAGAYI.

"NO ONE IS MINE
MAY BE IM NOT FINE,
NO ONE CARES 4 ME
NO ONE HAVE TEARS 4 ME,
NO ONE BELEIVE ME
EVERYONE SAY LEAVE ME,
IF I EVEN CRY
NO ONE EVEN ASK WHY?
AND IF I EVER DIE
NO ONE WILL CRY,
NO ONE SAY TAKE CARE
EVERYONE SAY WE DON'T CARE,
WHEN I NEED SOMEONE 4 MYSELF
I FIND NO ONE 4 HELP,
I DON'T KNOW WHY?
MAY BE TALKING TO ME THEY FEEL SHY...!!
NO ONE IS MINE
MAY BE IM NOT FINE."

YE POEM WO AKSAR PARHA KARTI THI.
SHE FEEL KOI USEY DEKH RAHA HAI. USNE NAZREN UTHA K DEKHA AGNI DUR SE KHARA USEY DEKH RAHA THA(AS USUAL).
PEHLE PIA KO US K IS TARAH DEKHNE SE DARR LAGTA THA PHIR USEY EHSAAS HUA K AGNI KI NAZRON MAIN AISA KUCH NAI JIS SE WO DAREY. AB WO DARTI NAI THI AB USEY AGNI KI PRESENCE SE SAHARA REHTA THA.
AGNI SMILES AND GONE.
PIA FEEL EASY NOW.

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ALL ARE SIT IN CANTEEN.
MISHA: AAJ TO MAZA AAGAYA US ENCYCLOPEDIA KO BAHAR NIKALWA K. HEY ABHAY! MAINE TO TUMSE SIRF WARNING DILWANE KO KAHA THA AUR HAMARI BET B YEHI THI MAGAR TUMNE TO USEY CLASS SE BAHAR HI NIKALWA DIYA.
ABHAY: U KNOW WHAT MISHA! ABHAY RAICHAND HAMESHA PAKKA KAM KARTA HAI AUR WAISE B...
SUDDENLY T RUN KARTI IN SAB K PAAS AAYI.
T: GUYS! TUMHE PATA HAI HAMARE COLLEGE MAIN KAL EK LATE BUT NEW ENTRY AARAHI HAI.
KABIR: WHAT! NEW ENTRY BUT WHO?
T: I DON'T KNOW SIRF ITNA PATA HAI K KOI LARKI HAI.
JAY: LET C KOUN SA NAYA FLAVOUR ENTER HO RAHA HAI MOUNT COLLEGE MAIN.
ABHAY KO BURA LAGA JAY KA IS TARAH SE KEHNA. WO UTH K CHALA GAYA USNE GHUSSE MAIN KISI KO NAI BATAYA K WO NEW ENTRY US KI BEHEN HAI.
MISHA: ABHAY TO CHALA GAYA BIKE RIDE KAL DENA PAREGI. NOW, LETS DO SOME PLAN FOR HER RAGGING, WHAT SAY?
EVERYONE AGREE. THEY START MAKING PLAN.

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PIA'S ROOM

RAAT KO PIA LUNCH K BAREY MAIN SOCH RAHI THI.
"KITNA COMPLETE LAG RAHA THA SAB, SAB EK SAATH EK PERFECT FAMILY AUR IN SAB MAIN, MAIN MISFIT LAGTI HUN. WHY I LOST MY FAMILY? MAIN AKELI REH GAYI KOI NAI HAI MERA."

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"HAI PIA, TUMHARA APNA HAI AUR ISI SHEHER(CITY) MAIN HAI DON'T WORRY BUHAT JALD YE AANSOO KHATAM HOJAYENGE PHIR TUM SIRF MUSKURAYA KAROGI."
USNE KAHA AUR PHIR APNI KOSHISHON KO AUR TEEZ KARNE KA FAISLA KARLIYA.

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PIA NE APNE JOURNAL MAIN SE APNI POETRY KA PAGE NIKALNA CHAHA LEKIN WO WAHAN NAI THA. PIA NE PAGE KO HAR JAGA DEKH LIYA BUT KAHIN NA MILA. SHE WORRIED.
"OH GOD! AGAR WO PAGE KISI K B HAATH LAG GAYA TO, NO ONE KNOW K MAIN POETRY LIKHTI HUN."
"OH NO ITNE DINO K BAAD APNE TOPIC PE KUCH LIKHA THA AB KYA KARUN, KAHAN DHUNDON AGAR MISHA YA KISI AUR KO MIL GAYA TO YE SAB MIL K MERA MAZAK URAYENGE. WHAT WILL I DO?"

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PRECAP:

ABHAY AND ABHILASHA K BEECH MAIN PHANSA SID.
AND
ABHILASHA GONE TO SLAP PIA.

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Posted: 21 August 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
anokhi, very sad update yaar, Pia is going thru so much pain, pls make it a little happy soon 

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