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savie_ Goldie

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Posted: 28 July 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
i have written dis post long ago and have saved it ...
but now i m posting it here ...
and i hope dat i will get many comments ..
luv u gyz ...

                                                   ~~~ SAVIE ...

let me 1st describe the baby...she should be very cute
having curly hairs...and should walk very cutely wid her chunni munni legs...
name i kept is "PRINCESS" "P"

so let's start...

geet working in kitchen prepairing the dinner...
after keeping it on the tablee...she calls maan and princess...
maan picks princess in her arms...and comes down for the dinner
he gaves a sweet sweet kiss on geet's cheeks and geet take "PRINCESS" in her arms
and make her sit on the chair...
dadima and annie already sittinf for the dinner...
"PRINCESS" says dat she want to hve food from dadi's hand but 
geet says dat let dadi eat food comfortably geet says ki mai apko khila deti hun
but dadi says ki koi baat nhi geet hum khila dete hai
geet agrees...
"P" goes to dadi ... and takes a bite from her
den she says ab mai dadda {she says dadda to maan} ke haath se khaungi den she eats from annie's hands...
after eating from everyone's hands she says mere tummy full
after maan is over wid his food he picks "P" and takes her to the bedroom...
evryone in deeir bedroom about to sleep...and geet in kitchen doing work...

den "P" shouts suddenly and says "maama jaldi aao" 
geet gots frightened and runs quickly to the room...
she sees "P" lying on the bed wid maan ...
ans says to geet ki "mamma maree gud night kiss "
geet says "iske liye aap etena chila rhe thee" ho...ho...kya karun mai is ladki ka...
she goes near to "P" and gives her a very very very very gud kissi...
den "P"says ki dadda ko bhi toh kissi do " geet feels li...l shy
she goes to maan kisses on her own finger and den places it on "MK's" cheeks
den "P" says "mumma jaise apne mujhe kissi di vaise dadda ko bhi do na"
maan "brings his cheeks near to geet and says ki do na jaldi...
she gives a kissi to maan to...

den she goes down to complete her work ...
after completeing her work ... she stands at the door of the room and ...she finds dat "MK" was not dere and "P" was sleeping alone on the bed 
when she enters the room "MK" hugs her from back ... and says meri kissi to do
geet says"di to thi" ...
den maan says ki voh toh tumne "P" ke kehne par di thi maine thoda na kaha tha tumhe dene ke liye...
par ab mai bol rha hun mujhe kissi jaldi
geet turns and gives him a sweet sweet wali kissi...
den both of dem sleeps...
after some time dey hear some noise dey turns and see dat "P" was making sounds
"P" was making noise of the motorcycle...
and den starts singing ...
den geet interupts and says "P" aap so jao na
"P" says mujhe neend nhi aa rhi...
"maama mujhe abhi khin ghumne jana hai chalo na khin chalte hai"
geet says-itene raat ko 
den maan says aesa ho sakta hai ki meri "P" ne humse kuch kaha ho
aur humne na kiya ho
chalo chalte hai...
"P" shouts yeeaaahhh !!!!!!!!!
geet says mai dadima ko btakar aati hun ...
maan says rehne do voh abhi soh gayi hongi...
den dey all go on a long ride but "P" toh car mai hi so jati hai
and den its our maaneet's romantic time ...
maan puts hand on geet.s shoulder and says ab humare batein koi nhi sun rha...
maan bends forward towards geet but geet moves backward ..
maan pulls her to him through her waist and tightens his grip on her waist ...
both of deir faces come close to each other ...
maaneet have an eyelock ...
maan's lips brushes geet's lips ..
geet tries to pull away but maan engulfes her in a passionate kiss ..
later geet couldn'y stop herself...
and her hands get entangled into his hair ...
pulling him more for the kiss ...
dey both pulls awas from each other ...
breathing fast ..
maan - i luv u geet ..
geeet - i luv u too maan ..
maan moves the strands of hair behind the ears of geet ..and kisses her ear..
den moves downwards by the neck ..
and suddenly "P" mumbles in her sleep...
mere mummy papa pule wold ke bhest ..muumy papa hai ...(mere mummy papa world ke best mummy papa hain..)
geet and maan smiles to each other ...
geet - humein ghar chalna chahiye maan ..bohot der ho gayi aur kahin apki princess na uth jayen ..
maan - hm ..and winks her 
geet blushes and says - maan aap bhi naa...
all of dem reaches back mansion
after dey reach home "P" had slept and maan and geet apne room mai bhi kuch romantic romantic se batein kar rhe hote hai...
next was sunday...

maaneet gets up and were on the table for breakfast...
but "P" was not dere as she was sleeping
dadi asks "shaitan kahan hai"
geet says dadi maa voh so rhi hai
dadi says ab tak nhi uthi humare shaitan
den geet explains "DADI" everything...
geet sees"P" coming and she was crying mujhe ghumne jaana hai 
geet goes to her and picks her up in her arms and says kal gaye to the...
"P" says dubara jaana hai

suddenly arjun comes ...
and says ki mai aur anwesha le jayenge "P" ko ghumane
geet says mai abhi shaitan ko taiyaar karke laati hun

den arjun annie and "P" goes on a long drive...
after having breakfast maan pulls geet towards him holds her from her waist...
and says hum bhi jaa rhe hai long drive par...
maine dadi maa se puch liya hai 
toh ab chalee ...
geet goes and get ready ...
and den dey too... goes for a long drive...

gyz comment ..
waiting for dem ...

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maneet_forever Groupbie

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Posted: 28 July 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
i m happy to be the first person to comment on ur lovely story...

awesome  yaar

Edited by maneet_forever - 28 July 2011 at 8:27am
savie_ Goldie

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Posted: 28 July 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneet_forever


wat does dis means ...
anshra IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 July 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged

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piya- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 July 2011 at 8:27am | IP Logged
i love ur princess yaar she is cho sweet
beautiful part do continue soon

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savie_ Goldie

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Posted: 28 July 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anshra

i loved it
good job

thanks dear ...
nibi_suchi Senior Member

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Posted: 28 July 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Gr8 start...get goin dear

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maneet_forever Groupbie

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Posted: 28 July 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shivikasavvy

wat does dis means ...

i ve updated my comment check

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