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hey 'em back i know the chapter is a bit detailed , but trust me if u will not read this u will not know the story,bth introduction an dtheir families intro r heere in this chap and how they r connected

piya woke up with a blinding headache...why did she drink so much?! She usually wasn't one to get so drunk but last night her and her group had been celebrating the end of their 4 month long dance theatre perfomance. It had been a hectic schedule with them performing in 20 different cities with Mumbai being their last stop. A lot of her friends were returning back home to Vancouver. But she'd be sticking around. Her family was joining her in a few days and together they would travel to shimla for a family wedding. She couldn't wait to see her family...it had been too long. piya got up slowly and went into the bathroom to splash some water on her face. As she looked in the mirror, events from the previous night ran through her mind. Dancing, drinking, laughing, throwing a drink in some good looking strangers face...wait a minute did she actually do that?! OH YEAH she did. Well he deserved it she thought...okay maybe he didn't deserve the drink in his face but he did deserve being told off by her. He didn't even know her and he made so many judgements about her. Arrogant...she's arrogant because she's not falling all over herself to talk to every guy that approached her. PLEASE! Thinking about him made her mad but when she pictured him in her head she had to admit that he was HOT. He was the perfect build, .and those big eyes..beautiful would be the only way to describe them. Yup he was HOT and he knew it The way he carried himself, his confidence in himself. . She had caught herself stealing looks at hm more than once last night. BUT arrogant no it alls were not her type. Well who cares, it's not like she's going to ever see him again.

Just then the phone rang bringing piya back to the present. Picking up her cell phone she saw that it was her dad calling. excitedly she picked up the phone. "dad how are you"? she said into the phone. piya was a daddy's girl, she was his princess and her dad's favorite. Most girls tell their mom everything but piya told her dad everything. He always supported her through anything and was always there to listen and give advice even when he was so busy with his business. He was the one that encouraged her to take part in the dance theatre group and to travel and see as much of the world as she can...before she settled down to a career. She was close to her mom aswell but her dad and her had a special bond. "Dad I can't wait to see you all." Have you spoken to Thiaya ji and chachu is everything ready for the wedding"? "We are going to have so much fun" Her dad laughed hearing her chatter and her excitement. "piya everything is ready for the wedding...we'll be there the day after tomorrow and then we'll leave for shimla right away. This is going to be a special trip in more ways then one, piya beta I have a big surprise for you. piya immediately started asking questions..what, where, how, when, what???? Her dad just laughed and said she'd find out soon enough. Their call ended soon after leaving piya curious about what the next few days will bring. She loved surprises so she couldn't wait. She looked at the clock and quickly started getting ready, she had 2 days to get her outifits bought and ready for the wedding!

About 10 minutes away abhay too was waking up, it would be safe to say he had not slept well. The last person he had thought of last night was also the first person he thought of today. HER!! Events from last night came rushing back to him. He grabbed his phone and called akash. akash picked up the phone sounding groggy and sleepy. 'Wake Up!" abhay snapped into the phone. " I want you to call around and find out who that girl was..where she came from, where she lives, everything and anything you can find out". I want this information ASAP! "akash are you listening to me...get on this". abhay hung up before akash could say anything. abhay was on a mission he wasn't going to rest until he taught that girl a lesson. But first he needed to know who she was.

Two days had turned up nothing about her and abhay was begining to get frustrated. She popped into his head all the time, at work, at the gym, when he was out...he'd suddenly think of her and his anger would rush back. Now as he packed his bags getting ready to go home and spend a few days with his family his frustration built...what if she was no longer in India then he'd never find her!

piya loved shimla .Everytime she came to India, this was usually their first stop. Her granparents, chachu, chachi, thaiyaji, thaiji, cousins, buas, masis all lived here. Whenever she came everyone would spoil her and spend lots of time with her doing fun activities. Her family was so lively, and fun, and her cousin getting married..the first of all the cousins, made this trip even more exciting. piya always felt comfortable when she got to the house because she knew this was her home too. Her and her cousins would stay up nights and laugh and talk and eat! Some nights they would sneak out (her thaiyaji was a little strict) but hey you gotta live on the wild side sometimes. piya was extremely close to her vijay Chachu, but she wasn't a big fan of her parul chachi but chachu more then made up for chachi's lack of social skills. The festivities were starting tonight with the first of them being the haldi ceremony. Her cousin lavanya (her thaiyaji's daughter) was getting married in 3 days. Haldi tonite, Mendhi tommorow night and then the wedding and reception the following day. piya and her cousin's were surprising lavanya with a dance performance on the Mendhi night. piya had chereographed the dance and was going to teach the girls tonight.

Seeing the house beautifully decorated in dark shades of Pink, gold and copper. The beautiful colors, wonderful smells of delicious food, all types of flowers in all different colors and her family's laughter and chatter made piya so happy. piya's family meant the world to her she would give anything to keep them smiling and laughing like this.

Haldhi night was well on it's way. piya had just finished applying some on lavanya when her dad called her over. Next to him sat a man that piya instantly recognized! She hadn't seen him in many years but when she was at home she saw a framed picture of him and her dad every day. mohan uncle was piya's dad's oldest and closest friend. As piya's dad described it they were brothers. Even living so far away from eachother they still spoke every weekend, no matter where they were and every time either one was in the same country they would get together. piya walked over and gave him a big hug and was surprised to see tears in uncle's eyes. She looked at her dad with a questioning look and her dad just smiled at her. "They're tears of happiness her dad said and uncle then put his hand on her head and said " I've waited for this happy occasion for a long time and finally it's here". piya thought to herself Uncle must be getting emotional over lavanya's wedding.

The next day:

abhay loved being home. Good food, being pampered by his mom, seeing old friends, sleeping in, this was the life. Mumbai was way too fast paced compared to shimla. Like tonight he was planning on vegging at home, his cousin's were coming by, maybe catch up with them and then hit a pub for some drinks. But ofcourse his dad had other plans for him. abhay had just seen his dad 2 weeks ago when he came to Mumbai to go over some projects...projects that abhay had worked on start to finish and knew the ins and outs of. Still his dad had asked 101 questions and wanted to know every little detail. abhay didn't know when his dad would finally start to trust abhay's judgement and understand that now abhay is running the company and since he had taken over profits had doubled!

So when his dad said we're going to a mendhi ceremony even though abhay wasn't in the mood he knew there was no way out. abhay's took a quick shower and threw on a black kurtha. He was really hoping it wasn't too long a night. Once at the venue abhay recognizes it immediately, this was the home of his dad's childhood friend. The house is lavisly decorated and abhay recognizes people he's known all his life, including some old school friends. He starts walking over when an announcement is made that lavanya's cousin's have a special surprise for her. A hush falls over the room as the lights dim and you hear the tinkling of the payals on the feet of the girls as they ran to the stage and position themselves. The musc starts and the lights came on slowly and front and centre on the stage who does abhay see but the GIRL!

please hit the like and comment ,do want me to give 1 mre chap , i have 3 chaps ready with me what say should i update all 3 of them?piya woke up with a blinding headache...why did she drink so much?! She usually wasn't one to get so drunk but last night her and her group had been celebrating the end of their 4 month long dance theatre perfomance. It had been a hectic schedule with them performing in 20 different cities with Mumbai being their last stop. A lot of her friends were returning back home to Vancouver. But she'd be sticking around. Her family was joining her in a few days and together they would travel to Chandigarh for a family wedding. She couldn't wait to see her family...it had been too long. piya got up slowly and went into the bathroom to splash some water on her face. As she looked in the mirror, events from the previous night ran through her mind. Dancing, drinking, laughing, throwing a drink in some good looking strangers face...wait a minute did she actually do that?! OH YEAH she did. Well he deserved it she thought...okay maybe he didn't deserve the drink in his face but he did deserve being told off by her. He didn't even know her and he made so many judgements about her. Arrogant...she's arrogant because she's not falling all over herself to talk to every guy that approached her. PLEASE! Thinking about him made her mad but when she pictured him in her head she had to admit that he was HOT. He was so tall that even with heals she had found herself looking up at him. He was the perfect build, .and those big eyes..beautiful would be the only way to describe them. Yup he was HOT and he knew it The way he carried himself, his confidence in himself. . She had caught herself stealing looks at hm more than once last night. BUT arrogant no it alls were not her type. Well who cares, it's not like she's going to ever see him again.

Just then the phone rang bringing piya back to the present. Picking up her cel; phone she saw that it was her dad calling. excitedly she picked up the phone. "dad how are you"? she said into the phone. piya was a daddy's girl, she was his princess and her dad's favorite. Most girls tell their mom everything but piya told her dad everything. He always supported her through anything and was always there to listen and give advice even when he was so busy with his business. He was the one that encouraged her to take part in the dance theatre group and to travel and see as much of the world as she can...before she settled down to a career. She was close to her mom aswell but her dad and her had a special bond. "Dad I can't wait to see you all." Have you spoken to Thiaya ji and chachu is everything ready for the wedding"? "We are going to have so much fun" Her dad laughed hearing her chatter and her excitement. "piya everything is ready for the wedding...we'll be there the day after tomorrow and then we'll leave for Chandigarh right away. This is going to be a special trip in more ways then one, piya beta I have a big surprise for you. piya immediately started asking questions..what, where, how, when, what???? Her dad just laughed and said she'd find out soon enough. Their call ended soon after leaving piya curious about what the next few days will bring. She loved surprises so she couldn't wait. She looked at the clock and quickly started getting ready, she had 2 days to get her outifits bought and ready for the wedding!

About 10 minutes away abhay too was waking up, it would be safe to say he had not slept well. The last person he had thought of last night was also the first person he thought of today. HER!! Events from last night came rushing back to him. He grabbed his phone and called akash. akash picked up the phone sounding groggy and sleepy. 'Wake Up!" abhay snapped into the phone. " I want you to call around and find out who that girl was..where she came from, where she lives, everything and anything you can find out". I want this information ASAP! "akash are you listening to me...get on this". abhay hung up before akash could say anything. abhay was on a mission he wasn't going to rest until he taught that girl a lesson. But first he needed to know who she was.

Two days had turned up nothing about her and abhay was begining to get frustrated. She popped into his head all the time, at work, at the gym, when he was out...he'd suddenly think of her and his anger would rush back. Now as he packed his bags getting ready to go home and spend a few days with his family his frustration built...what if she was no longer in India then he'd never find her!

piya loved Chandigarh. Everytime she came to India, this was usually their first stop. Her granparents, chachu, chachi, thaiyaji, thaiji, cousins, buas, masis all lived here. Whenever she came everyone would spoil her and spend lots of time with her doing fun activities. Her family was so lively, and fun, and her cousin getting married..the first of all the cousins, made this trip even more exciting. piya always felt comfortable when she got to the house because she knew this was her home too. Her and her cousins would stay up nights and laugh and talk and eat! Some nights they would sneak out (her thaiyaji was a little strict) but hey you gotta live on the wild side sometimes. piya was extremely close to her vijay Chachu, but she wasn't a big fan of her parul chachi but chachu more then made up for chachi's lack of social skills. The festivities were starting tonight with the first of them being the haldi ceremony. Her cousin lavanya (her thaiyaji's daughter) was getting married in 3 days. Haldi tonite, Mendhi tommorow night and then the wedding and reception the following day. piya and her cousin's were surprising lavanya with a dance performance on the Mendhi night. piya had chereographed the dance and was going to teach the girls tonight.

Seeing the house beautifully decorated in dark shades of Pink, gold and copper. The beautiful colors, wonderful smells of delicious food, all types of flowers in all different colors and her family's laughter and chatter made piya so happy. piya's family meant the world to her she would give anything to keep them smiling and laughing like this.

Haldhi night was well on it's way. piya had just finished applying some on lavanya when her dad called her over. Next to him sat a man that piya instantly recognized! She hadn't seen him in many years but when she was at home she saw a framed picture of him and her dad every day. mohan uncle was piya's dad's oldest and closest friend. As piya's dad described it they were brothers. Even living so far away from eachother they still spoke every weekend, no matter where they were and every time either one was in the same country they would get together. piya walked over and gave him a big hug and was surprised to see tears in uncle's eyes. She looked at her dad with a questioning look and her dad just smiled at her. "They're tears of happiness her dad said and uncle then put his hand on her head and said " I've waited for this happy occasion for a long time and finally it's here". piya thought to herself Uncle must be getting emotional over lavanya's wedding.

The next day:

abhay loved being home. Good food, being pampered by his mom, seeing old friends, sleeping in, this was the life. Mumbai was way too fast paced compared to Chandigarh. Like tonight he was planning on vegging at home, his cousin's were coming by, maybe catch up with them and then hit a pub for some drinks. But ofcourse his dad had other plans for him. abhay had just seen his dad 2 weeks ago when he came to Mumbai to go over some projects...projects that abhay had worked on start to finish and knew the ins and outs of. Still his dad had asked 101 questions and wanted to know every little detail. abhay didn't know when his dad would finally start to trust abhay's judgement and understand that now abhay is running the company and since he had taken over profits had doubled!

So when his dad said we're going to a mendhi ceremony even though abhay wasn't in the mood he knew there was no way out. abhay's took a quick shower and threw on a black kurtha. He was really hoping it wasn't too long a night. Once at the venue abhay recognizes it immediately, this was the home of his dad's childhood friend. The house is lavisly decorated and abhay recognizes people he's known all his life, including some old school friends. He starts walking over when an announcement is made that lavanya's cousin's have a special surprise for her. A hush falls over the room as the lights dim and you hear the tinkling of the payals on the feet of the girls as they ran to the stage and position themselves. The musc starts and the lights came on slowly and front and centre on the stage who does abhay see but the GIRL!

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Edited by abhaylover - 12 years ago
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Luk chup ke main ghoomi gali gali
Kahin mila nahin mera piya
Khil khil ke hans di kali kali
Par khila nahin mera jiya
Meri itni khanani meri hai yeh pareshani
Kabhi aaye, koi aaye, koi bole maine dil diya
Dhoond rahi hoon main aisa deewana
Thodsa pagla, thoda siyaana

(Movie: Aur Pyar Hogeya)

abhay couldn't believe his eyes, he was mesmerized by her beauty. She was wearing a red and cream lengha with gold, red and green embroidery all over it. Her nose ring was sparking as she spun around, and her beautiful long hair was pulled into a parandi. Her arms were laden with chooria and the only other jewellery she wore were her kundan drop earrings. abhay felt his heart skip a beat. She danced so gracefully acting out the words as she sang along. He watched the whole dance in a trance barely blinking so that he wouldn't miss a moment. It was the sound of applause that snapped him back to the present and to reality. What was she doing here?! He found himself getting angry not only at her but himself. What had just happened to him?! When he looked back at her he saw vijay hugging her. lavanya's cousin's put on this performance...hmm..so this was lavanya's cousin. Interesting...well abhay thought I think it's time to say hello to lavanya and meet this cousin of hers.

abhay walked over and gave lavanya a hug not looking at HER even once. piya felt exhilarated. She always did after she performed. She was just coming out of her Chachu's bear hug when she glanced behind her and couldn't believe what she saw. It was the"GUY" she had thrown her drink at the other night. OMG!!! She was shell shocked and only noticed her mouth hanging open when her cousin Riya nudged her with a questioning look. piya snapped her mouth shut. "Riya I think my dad is calling me, I'm going to go check" She had to get out of here! This guy can't see her. piya had just taken a step with she heard lavanya call her name. OMG...why lavanya..why??!!! piya turned around slowly ...maybe he won't recognize me she thought. piya turned around slowly and looked directly at lavanya not looking at abhay at all. "piya let me introduce you to an old friend...this is abhay Malhotra". "We went to school together". "abhay this is my cousin from Canada, piya". piya couldn't put it off any longer she had to look at him now. She put a big smile on her face and looked at him. "Hi, nice to meet you" she held out her hand. abhay smiled slowly...as if he knew exactly what she was doing..pretending to meet him for the first time. He took her hand and said hi, then looked at her with a confused expression. " I think we've met before" he said. He looked at lavanya who looked at piya. You've met before, but when? piya's smile started to slip and abhay's smile just got bigger..and on top of that he hadn't let go of her hand yet! "NO I don't think we've met" piya said as she tried to pull her hand back unsuccessfully. Really you just look so familiar, like someone I met recently...now where was that...as abhay pretended to think about where that might be, piya began to squirm. lavanya is now starting to look suspicious...oh yes I know where...abhay says with a big smile. Then he looks closely at piya with a glint in his eye...oh no but that couldn't be you. You know lavanya I met this spoiled arrogant little rich girl the other day, she was walking around thinking she was god's gift to the world. Except she wasn't and isn't. As he said this piya's eyes were shooting daggers at him but ofcourse she can't say anything. You know lavanya she was so drunk she didn't know what she was doing or saying, making a total fool out of herself. She thought she was so hot but little did she know the whole club was laughing at her. Her prim cousin lavanya who has probably never even had a drink in her life is just shaking her head. piya's face is red, she is so mad, HOW DARE HE INSULT HER LIKE THAT. She's so mad she doesn't even notice he's let go of her hand and she's still holding her hand out like an idiot. Girls like that have no shame, they not only disgrace themselves but their families too by doing things like that she heard lavanya say. I'm going to kill him piya thought. If looks could kill then abhay would already be dead he thought. Loving every second of this. He almost laughed seeing the expression on piya's face. She was so mad. Miss piya gupta this is nothing, wait until you see what I do to you next abhay thought. lavanya beta could you come here her dad called I want you to meet someone. lavanya excused herself leaving abhay and piya alone together.

piya looked down trying to calm herself. She counted to 5 then when that didn't work she counted to 10. She looked up and saw abhay's face with a big smirk on it, he was lazily leaning against a pillar looking at her, his eyes laughing at her. Oh she would love to wipe that nasty smirk off his face. "You think you're really funny don't you?" she asked. abhay straightened away from the pillar, and came a little closer to her. "Does the truth hurt piya?" TRUTH?! I wasn't drunk and no one was laughing at me! And I'm not arrogant! It's not my fault that little boys like you are threatened by confident women, piya practically screamed at him. abhay shook his head and gave a laugh, he moved closer " piya I think the problem is you've only met little boys, little boys that let you get away with all your drama, little boys that fall at your feet and when you say jump ask how high". But don't worry piya you've met a real man now, a man who's not going to put up with your drama, a man who definitely won't let you walk all over him." You messed with the wrong person piya and now you must face the consequences. "You know I was dreading coming to this mendhi but now I'm going to make sure I attend every function. I think this wedding is going to be a lot of fun. "Don't you piya?" With those words and a smile on his face abhay walks away leaving piya fuming.

The rest of the night piya managed to avoid abhay, she wasn't scared of him or anything he had said. If it was a fight he wanted then it would be a fight he'd get. But he should know piya gupta never lost! No piya avoided him because she knew that if she had to deal with him again tonight she would end up causing him physical harm. Something her family might not appreciate her doing to a guest invited into their home. But oh well she could dream.

       chapter 4

Edited by abhaylover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey..awesome update...continue soon..and update ur 3 parts :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

HEY DEAR😃

NICE UPDATE YAAR👏👏👏...I M JST LOVING IT😉...
I THINK THAT GIRL IS PIYA AGAIN😕...
HEY DEAR PLZ UPDATE SOON...WAITING FOR THE SURPRISE😳...
PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON
HAV A NICE DAY
LUV
SUNITA
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey. .
Awesome update!
Plz. . Plz continue & update the rest chapters. . I'l love to read them. .
Thanks for the pm. .
Tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear 
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome!!thanx 4 da pm n plz plz update asap..
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gr8 updates really loving ur ff
by the way is abhay a vampire here or just a normal guy
thanks for the pm waiting eagerly for the next update