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interesting ff

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awesome update 
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PART 3
Geet: Aashna...tu sure haina that you like Akash...? Ab ise bhi bakiyon ki tarah chod mat dena char din me...He seems to be serious for you yaar...
Aashna: Geet...!!!!!! Kaisi baat kar rahi hai yaar...I really love Akash...!!!
Geet: Tera har baar ka hai...I have heard this same sentence for 10 other guys...Huh...
Aashna: Tu rehne de...ye tere bas ki baaten nahi hain... Ermm

Akash: Dude...I really love Aashna yaar...!!! She's just the best... Smile
Maan: See Akash...tujhe jo feel hota hai wo thik hai...But still beware yaar...I don't find her like ek bande pe tikne wali types...aur tu thehra senti type ka...
Akash: Rehne de...mai senti nahi hun...n yeah...I know everything bout her...tu chinta mat kar...
Maan: Thik hai...teri marzi...

Daya pass & Akash & Aashna get closer to each other...
Once they were going on a date...

Aashna: Geet...maine maa ko bola hai ki mai tere sath dinner ke lie jaa rahi hun...tu aaja mujhe lene plzzz...
Geet: Mai aake kya karungi...agar aunty ka call aaega to I'll handle...Don't worry...
Aashna: Are nahi...Maa ne kaha... "Geet ko bol ki tujhe car se pick kar le"... plzzz yaar aaja na...Confused
Geet: Thik hai...7:30 sharp I'll be there... Smile
Aashna: Thank you yaar...muaahhh...
Geet: Bas kar ab...jaake tayyar hona shuru karde nai to late ho jaegi... Bieee... Tongue
Aashna: Yeah right... Bieee... Big smile

Akash: Maan...meri car kharab ho gai hai n Aashna ke sath date pe jana hai aaj...will you plzz drop me to the restaurant...???
Maan: Thik hai...7:30 sharp...ready rehna...Byeee...
Akash: Yeah...thx...byee...Smile

Later both Maan & Geet pick up their respective friends & drop them to the restaurant...
While Maan was only a little ahead of the restaurant...His car stopped in the middle...He called up the mechanic but he told Maan that it would take some time for the car to be treated...So Maan decided to take up an auto & go back home...
While Maan was looking for an auto...Geet saw him & stopped her car...
Geet: Hey...Maan...what's wrong?
Maan: Ohh...hi...nothing...my car just ditched me...
Geet: Ohh...don't worry...hop in...I'll drop you home...
Maan: Ohh no...don't worry...I'll go home...it's quite far away...you'll get late for your place...so don't bother...but thanx anyway...Smile
Geet: Cumon...don't be so formal...it's ok for me...so just come in...
Maan: ohh k...if you insist...Smile
Geet: So...how are you here??
Maan: Just came by to drop Akash for his date...
Geet: ohh...coincidence...LOL...I came by to drop Aashna too...
Both of them continued to talk throughout the drive...they jelled along really well...both had shed off their shells when they were together...they were so comfortable & easy with each other that they even forgot that generally they are reserved...LOL
After dropping Maan...Geet went back home dropping Aashna on the way...

Months passed and Geet & Maan became best friends...As Akash & Aashna were together most of the time...so automatically Geet & Maan too spent most of their time together...They talked...laughed...played...hanged out together...
As both of them were used to telling everything to their mom...they told everything about their friendship & moments together...
Mrs. Khurana was very pleased to hear that Maan had finally made another friend & she was very happy for him...
As the years in college passed Maan & Geet became the bestest of buddies but they never knew what lay behind deep in their cute & close relationship..
Now just a week was left for their college to get over...Their exams were already over & hence, they had their farewell party in their college hall...
Maan dressed in black shirt and blue jeans looking hot and handsome...
Geet wore a red knee-length dress looking extremely ravishing..

Maan & Akash reached the hall...& all the girls started looking towards Maan & each & every one of them was drooling over him...
Soon Aashna & Geet entered the hall...as soon as Maan saw Geet...he couldn't take his eyes off her...She was looking just wow...Smile

Maan: My...My...Someone's looking WOW...!!!!!!! Wink
Geet: Someone else is looking great too...!!!!!!! Wink

Suddenly Maan saw all the guys looking lustfully towards Geet...he protectively pulled his arm around Geet's shoulder...n he saw the eyes of those guys retreating...n he smiled...Smile

Akash & Aashna together hit the dance floor while Maan & Geet decided to grab a drink...& they start chatting & laughing along...
After sometime...
Maan: Geet...would you like to have a dance with me??
Geet: Sure Maan...I would love to...Smile

& together they step up to rock the dance floor...
& the song starts...

Hum Dono Jaisa Hai Kaun Yahan
Rangeen Kiya Hai Humi Ne Yeh Sama
Hum Dono Jaisa Hai Kaun Yahan
Rangeen Kiya Hai Humi Ne Yeh Sama
Hum Dono Jaisa Hai Kaun Yahan
Rangeen Kiya Hai Humi Ne Yeh Sama
Humsa Koyi Kahan Ho
Hum Dono Jaisa Hai Kaun Yahan
Rangeen Kiya Hai Humi Ne Yeh Sama
Humsa Koyi Kahan Ho

& Maan & Geet match their steps together...dancing hand in hand...they do the bollywood hip hop...everyone watches them in amazement...they watch their chemistry...how perfectly they fall in with each other...suddenly all the eyes seem to be lost in their dance & chemistry...

Koyi Kyon Na Mila Kyon Ho Iska Gila
Koyi Kyon Na Mila Kyon Ho Iska Gila

Maan twirls Geet around a little far away from him...Suddenly he feels so empty & lost...He quickly brings back Geet in his arms...Geet too feels relieved coming back in his arms...when Maan pulled her away...She suddenly felt so lifeless...

Hum Jawan Hum Haseen Humko Gham Hi Nahin
Yeh Sara Nazara Paagal Na Karde Mere Dil Ko

Maan brings Geet even closer(if ever it was possible) holding her waist...his chest glued to her back...they were so lost in each other's proximity that they didn't even realise that everyone was looking at them... They felt each other body swaying to the beats of the song...

Hum Dono Jaisa Hai Kaun Yahan
Rangeen Kiya Hai Humi Ne Yeh Sama
Hum Dono Jaisa Hai Kaun Yahan
Rangeen Kiya Hai Kiya Hai Kiya Hai
Humsa Koyi Kahan Ho

They move back & forth & the song slows down their moves do so as well..& suddenly when the music stops...they realise how close they are & how everyone is looking at them...they pull apart...though they didnt want to...
And everyone starts clapping & cheering for them...Clap
Feeling uncomfortable..they moved back to the drinks counter...thinking bout their moment...they felt something different today...They felt some kind of a spark between them...
Suddenly..Akash & Aashna come to them...& they decide to shrug off that new feeling thinking it to be just a hangover of the close dance...

Akash: Maan...Geet...You guys were rocking yaar...!!!!
Aashna: Yeah...your chemistry was just sooo sizzling...!!!!
Geet: Yeah...our dancing jodi rocks...!!!!!!Big smile

& she gives a hi5 to Maan... Wink

Akash: Yeah...& if u want...your jodi can rock too...Tongue
Maan: Stop it dude...!!!! You know me & Geet are nowhere there...We are just bestest buddies...not some stupid love birds...huh...
Akash: Your wish guys...my job was to tell you...

That night both Maan & Geet couldn't sleep...sleep was faraway from them...They kept smiling to themselves thinking about their dance...they felt soo comfortable in each other's embrace...It was like they were perfect for each other...Suddenly they realize what they were thinking & shrugged off the thought & slept peacefully...Smile
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phew...here's a long update...hope u guys are satisfied now...this long one was specially for charuagarwal...hope ur gud wid it... Wink
I hope u guys lyk d update...will be waitin 4 ur lyks n comments...plzzz do so...Smile luv u ol...thnq 2 ol dose who lykd n commented...n silent readers(if any)..plzzz do lyk d update atlst...Smile


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