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My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 3

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Chapter-3
 
Geet was lost in her thoughts when she entered in the premises of Khurana mansion..Her body was stepping ahead but her mind was not there ...Everything was making her remind of the thoughts and moments she had buried under her heart
 
Flashback
 
Maan:Madam you are laughing...I am serious
 
Geet:Maan the house you are describing na cannot be called house but
          Mansion.. house which give resemblance of a mansion
 
Maan (murmurs):I was about to tell her I am rich
 
Geet(who heard only last words) :What you said..You are rich
 
Maan:Ofcourse after having Miss Handa as my friend who won't be rich
 
Geet:Stop buttering
 
Maan:Are you on diet that you cannot handle butter...you should be otherwise
            who will marry a fat cow and cherry on  cake who hates makeup and   
            loves to live like boys
 
Geet:If I won't get anyone then I will marry you
 
Maan:I have no problem in that Geet its just I am straight
 
Geet starts hitting Maan from the book..Maan runs followed by Geet
 
Geet comes back in present with a sweet  smile  but she slips as she wlks on a slippery floor ..she looses her balance and closes her eye tightly when she feels her legs has left the ground but she feels a strong hand holding her from waist making her swing in air..Geet felt a known touch..a touch which she can never forget ,her ears heard a husky voice calling out her name she opens her eyes..It was him
 
Geet thought to herself
Maan..how much changed he is..Only his eyes are same otherwise who will say he is the same maan..Stubbles and look..he is totally changed..
 
Maan to himself
Geet..am I dreaming whom I searched everywhere is here in my house and that also in suit..am I dreaming..I have never imagined that I will see her in makeup though its light but its makeup..
Geet recovered first
 
Geet:Maan ..you can leave me now
 
Maan who was totally lost pulled out his hand from around her waist making her fall down
 
Geet:Maan ..you jerk
 
Maa:Oh..sorry Geet you told to leave so I (gives hand)..I had never imagined I
           will see you again and that too in suit..When you became girl?
 
Geet(getting up):Since i came on Earth Maan and what about you ...look at
                             yourself you are totally changed..suit ,stubble and your
                              hairs..It looks like the hairstyle of a cock
 
Maan:So funny..
 
Geet:Chalo atleast you accepted you look funny
 
Maan:You will never change..what are you doing here?
 
Geet:Non of your business besides what are you doing here
 
Maan:I am an employee in Khurana construction
 
Geet:Mrs.khurana has called you
 
Maan:Yes..she wanted to make me meet someone
 
Geet:Who?
 
Maan:how can I know?..now your turn
 
Geet:Mrs.Khurana has called me to spent some time with her grand daughter 
        Chahak
 
They reached to the hall where daadi ma was waiting for Geet
 
Daadi:Maan Beta aap..what a pleasant surprise?Geet inse miliye ye hain
 
Maan(snaps):employee of Khurana construction..(indicates daadima  to keep 
                    silent)..Daadi ma she is my college friend
 
Geet hits lightly Maan from her Elbow and whispers:She is your boss and you
                                                               are calling her daadima
 
Daadi(hears the line):Beta in KC no one calls me ma'am but they call me
                            Daadi ma and I will tell you also call me daadi  ma     
                          Mrs.Khurana looks too formal..Chahak will be coming soon
 
Chahak comes down and shouts in happiness on seeing:Papa aa gaye...Geet 
                                aunty you are so sweet you brought papa with you ..from
                      today onwards we are not friends but best friends..she hugs Maan
 
Geet:Papa..whats this
 
Daadi(laughs):geet beta..inse miliye Chgahak ke papa..Maan Singh Khurana
 
Geet was shocked on the announcement made by daadi..She gave a glance to Maan who had lifted Chahak in arms ..He smiled and winked at Geet..
 
Geet:Maan ke bacche..i am not going to leave you
 
Chahak(pouted with cuteness):Aunty bacche nahi bacchi and what I did?
 
This made laugh everyone
 
Maan(put her down):Beta you stand here ...haan geet baccha nahi bacchi
 
Geet takes the sandal in her hand and runs behind Maan..
 
Chahak : Badi daadi..are they playing thief police
 
Daadi:Yes beta..you go and change..
 
Chahak leaves
 
Daadi:Time up..
 
Geet who was holding Maan's collar stops..and realizes she had gone in past ..she leaves Maan collar and joins Daadi leaving Maan lil amazed
 
Geet:Sorry daadi ma
 
Daadi:Beta I didn't mean to stop you just wanted to know since whern you
            were friends Maan never told me about you
 
Geet:I am not surprised Daadi..he never told me he is Maan Singh   
         Khurana..He always told me he belongs to an upper middle class family
          and wants to be a successful businessman
 
Maan:Forget it Geet as if you are a saint ..you left me alone ..since then never
        contacted and even you changed the house
 
Geet(smiled):You deserve that
 
Daadi sensed a kind of pain in her voice
 
Precap:- Sid teaching Chahak Ramayan in a new way
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..superb update
love it
thx
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Loved ur FF... Pls add me to ur PM list
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awesum luved it
do continue soon
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
It was really cute!
Chahak is so sweet!
Can't wait for next part!
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved Part 3! It was awesome! Continue soon and thanxs for the pm
 
Saba xxx
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Awesomeee!
Loveee the part!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxxx for the pm.




Fatima