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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
wow nice part

its getting interesting 

thnx for pm

cont soon

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 11:19am | IP Logged

Guys i know u r angry on me probably wanna kill me for not updating it for a long time.. i have no excuse for it.. n i m sorry..

I am leaving a teaser now.. only 3parts left to finish this FF..

I have my mid term exam on 5th Dec.. i promise i will update on 6th or 7th.. n I m gonna reply to all of ur comments after my exam..wish me luck please..

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Jannat teaser

 

"Geet." Maan didn't enter her house but started to shout from outside.

"kya hua?" She said coming out. "Andar kyu nahi arahe hai ap?"

"waqt kam hai Geet." As Maan answered in a breath Geet knotted her eyebrow.

"kuch to  hua hai.. " she stopped to take a breath. "ap aise kyu baat kar rahe hai?"

"Geet dadi bimar hai. Mai aj ki Train se Srinagar ja raha hoon aur aj raat ke flight pe Delhi." Geet didn't react hearing his answer.

"Geet." Maan took a few steps forward to hold his hand. "mai jitna jaldi ho sake wapas ajyunga. Tum bas apna khayal rakhna."

"rekhungi.. aur ap bhi apna khyal rakhna.. aur dadi ka bhi." She smiled at him."

Maan brought his hands closer to his face and kissed on her hand.

"ap late ho jayenge." As she spoke he left her hands. He got a strange kind of feeling. Like it's not the time to leave her. It's the time to be with her. He shouldn't leave now. He went inside the car with a strange feelings and started to drive. Geet stood there as long as she can hear the sound of the car.

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Okk.. now it's time to give beautiful Maaneetians a gift from me..

I'm a very bad VM maker.. in these r my 1st 2vms I made on MAANEET..plzz watch it n do comment...



Edited by princess_mimi - 28 November 2012 at 11:55am

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
wow great videos
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Very interesting dear and loved vms.

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
ab kya hoga...

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Wow the both V/M's are awesome.

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
wooow   Smilewooow   Smilewooow   Smile

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
Hiii...awesome teaser...loved it...beautiful vm...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

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