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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
beautifully written but so sad i was teary Cry

please continue with a happy ending though this cant end with it being this sad poor maaneet...want maaneet together


Edited by Ginqueen - 20 July 2011 at 1:55pm

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
wat the hell is this shika...
how can u...is this all or u have some more parts...
u saved urself from not explaining the wedding events otherwise things wud b much more worse...
tumhe kahan se aise stories ke inspirations milthe hain...

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Noo, part 2-maaneet reunion is necessary!!! Make Dev gay or that he's already married or something! Please!

Otherwise, get ready for jhuttiis, tamatar, ande, and more. lol

I loved the way it was written :) thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
aww it was sooo sad...
plz write the 2nd part...
i want the happy ending to this  OS

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
shikhu...
u r such a kamini...
all the happy stuff is dedicated to muski...
such sad stuff is dedicated to me, aashu and jazz...this is not at all acceptable...
me sending belans, chuhas,rotten eggs and tamatars, jhootis, and all the potent stuff that can make u come back to sense...
tujhe toh main hyd aake maarungiAngry..
u better add one more part and give it a happy ending...
do anything...
let dev get a heart attack, let him be exposed by some of his gf, let him be swallowed by the earth...i dont kno kuch bhi...but u better give me a happy ending ...
i am going to take this crap...as i abhorsad endings...Angry

warna main teri chutney bana dungi

likhna zaroor...evil devil froggieAngry
and I HATE UAngry
reva



Edited by Dreamy_Mystique - 21 July 2011 at 5:35am

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
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  • Edited by sharmake11 - 20 July 2011 at 7:50pm

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    Posted: 20 July 2011 at 8:25pm | IP Logged

    awesome piece of writing but only one complaint its so sad. pls write part 2 with happy maaneet unison..and make all maaneetians happy:)

    brilliant piece of work i must say:)
    Ankita:)

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