OS--Living in Forfeiture.. - Page 4

vrsharma

@vrsharma

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

hey i am not going throw any thing on you, if u insist me i will throw only flowers on you

because i know very well that you will end this OS with gud note.

i know that u didn't tell us that u will update it later, but i am sure u will update it atleast with one more part

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sweety

@lalitha..

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

emotions r clearly described...nice update...thanks 4 pm

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

It was so heart-wrenching .. especially Geet dressing up as a bride scene brought tears to my eyes!!! But how I wish they are not seperated!!

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disha

@_wallflower_

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

aaahhh...😡😡😡😡
what on earth u r thinking about urself...😕😕😕
yaa i agree that u write well.. actually awsmmm, but it doesnt give u the permission to break maan's heart... or geet's... or our...😭😭😭

eee...gggrrr...
u r sooo dead miss.shika...🤢🤢🤢🤢
no one can save u from my rotten tomato n egg...

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Amita Tibrewala

@amita5

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

so sad to read. but pls continue...please pm me

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Nazma 'Imran Khan' Majeed

@Nazmaa

Goldie

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

That was amazing...
It was soo emotional and that song made it worse...
i couldn't help myself but cry...
i couldn't help but feel bad for maan and geet...
...please write some more... it was brilliant..,
x

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588390

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

YUK I DON'T LIKE THIS STORY YOU BATTER COME WITH NEXT PART PLEASEEE😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

r u ok? maan and geet are not going to be togehter? u plan a sequel to it?

i really wanted maan to stand for his love atleast once

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome...even though it is a sad one...it is mindblowing...omg they will not be together...i hate this...poor geet...n maan also...i really wish that u continue thiss...plzzz...thnx for the pm...

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Kesha

@--Kesh--

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Please 😭😭😭😭 conti...😭😭😭😭... ue😭😭😭

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